July 19, 2025
my hobby
i love go to the gym and sometime i love video games like elden ring i hop caep gooang in my plan to stady English
iI love go to the gym and sometime is I love video games like eElden rRing i. I hop cae I can keep gooaing in my plan to staudy English.
Always remember to capitalize "i" to "I"!
Always remember to add a "." to avoid run on sentances.
I think you meant to say "I hope I can keep going in my plan to study English"
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If I were to rewrite this I would write it like this. "I love to go to the gym, and I sometimes play video games like Elden Ring. I hope I can keep going on my English learning plan."
Overall that was good!
mMy hHobbyies
Capitalized for "title case" (my hobby --> My Hobby).
Since you mentioned multiple hobbies, I pluralized as well.
iI love going to the gym and sometime is I love video games like eElden rRing i. I hop cae I can keep gooaing in my plan to staudy English.
"I love [verb]ing" is a good structure to use in English. You can also say "I love to [verb]" in this context.
Some spelling issues here. Keep working on those!
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Good text! Keep applying any new vocabulary you learn. The grammatical structures will come with time. Bravo!
July 19, 2025
this nice , thanks
mMy hobby
iI love go to the gym and sometime is I love to play video games like eElden rRing i. I hop cae I can keep gooaing inwith my plan to staudy English
I'm not exactly sure what you meant at the end but I did my best to get it right
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my hobby
Capitalized for "title case" (my hobby --> My Hobby). Since you mentioned multiple hobbies, I pluralized as well. |
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i love go to the gym and sometime i love video games like elden ring i hop caep gooang in my plan to stady English
I'm not exactly sure what you meant at the end but I did my best to get it right
"I love [verb]ing" is a good structure to use in English. You can also say "I love to [verb]" in this context. Some spelling issues here. Keep working on those!
Always remember to capitalize "i" to "I"! Always remember to add a "." to avoid run on sentances. I think you meant to say "I hope I can keep going in my plan to study English" |
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