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marina310

April 12, 2024

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My hobby

I want to tell you about my hobby. It's many things, but especially it's sport, drawing, sew and music.
I like sport because it's cool and get me more healthy. I like stretching and running on morning and evening.
I like drawing because you make something beautiful and especially. Now I drawing mountain and three in water at sunset.
As well I like sew many little and cutie animals: birds, foxes and bears.
And I like music. It's wonderful: you take musical instrument in hand and the air is filled with melody. Especially I love piano- it's fairy tail from black- white keys.


Я хочу рассказать вам о моих хобби. Это множество вещей, но особенно спорт, рисование, шитье и музыка.
Мне нравится спорт потому что это здорово и даëт мне больше здоровья. Мне нравится растяжка и бег по утрам.
Мне нравится рисование потому что ты создаëшь что-то прекрасное и особенное. Сейчас я рисую гору и дерево в воде на закате.
Так же я люблю шить много маленьких и милых животных: птиц, лис и медведей.
И я люблю музыку. Это волшебно: ты берëшь музыкальный инструмент в руки и воздух наполняется мелодией. Особенно я люблю пианино: это сказка из чëрно- белых клавиш.

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I want to tell you about my hobby.ies.

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I like sports because it'sthey're cool and get me more healthyactive.

I like stretching and running onin the morning and the evening.

I like drawing because you can make something beautiful and especially.

And I like music.

It's wonderful: you take musical instrument in hand, and all of a sudden the air is filled with harmonious melodyies.

If you want to add an adjective, it highlights the word "melody!"

EI especially I love the piano- it's fairy tail from black- white keys.

I want to tell you about my hobbyies.

Since you are talking about multiple hobbies in this text, the word "hobby" should be in plural form.

It's have many thinghobbies, but I especially it'senjoy sports, drawing, sewing and listening to music.

I like sports because it'sthey are cool and get me moreare good for my healthy.

I like stretching and running onin the morning and evening.

I like drawing because you makcreate something beautiful and especially.

NRight now, I am drawing a mountain and three in water ata sunset.

As well II also like to sew many little and. I especially enjoy sewing cutie animals: such as birds, foxes and bears.

AndFurthermore, I like music.!

It's wonderful: you take a musical instrument in hand and the air is filled with melody.

EI especially I love the piano- it'. It creates fairy tail fromles with its black- and white keys.

My hobbyies

Plural since you have more than 1 hobby

I want to tell you about my hobby.

It's many things, but especially it's have many, but my main hobbies are sports, drawing, sewing and music.

I like sport because it's cool and get me mormakes me healthyier.

I like stretching and running onin the morning and evening.

I like drawing because you can make something beautiful and especially.

Now I am drawing a mountain and three in water at sunset.

As well I like sew many little and cutiI also like sewing lots of cute little animals: like birds, foxes and bears.

It's wonderful:, you takecan put a musical instrument in your hand and the air is filled with a melody.

EI especially I love the piano- it's fairy tail from black- white keys.

Not sure what this bit means - "- it's fairy tail from black- white keys."

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Great job! Your hobbies sound really interesting :)

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My hobby

I want to tell you about my hobby.

It's many things, but especially it's have many, but the main ones are sports, drawing, sewing and music.

I like sports because it's cool and getmakes me more healthy.

I like to stretching and running on mornings and evenings.

Made it sound more natural :)

I like drawing because you can make something beautiful and especially.

Nowadays I drawing mountains and three in water at sunset.

Not sure what "three in water at sunset" means

As welllso, I like to sew many littlcute and cutilittle animals: birds, foxes and bears.

And I like music.

It's wonderful: you take a musical instrument in your hand and the air is filled with melody.

EI especially I love piano- it's like a fairy tail fromwith its black- and white keys.

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Beautiful!

My hobby


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My hobbyies

Plural since you have more than 1 hobby

My hHobby

I want to tell you about my hobby.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I want to tell you about my hobbyies.

Since you are talking about multiple hobbies in this text, the word "hobby" should be in plural form.

I want to tell you about my hobby.ies.

It's many things, but especially it's sport, drawing, sew and music.


It's many things, but especially it's have many, but the main ones are sports, drawing, sewing and music.

It's many things, but especially it's have many, but my main hobbies are sports, drawing, sewing and music.

It's have many thinghobbies, but I especially it'senjoy sports, drawing, sewing and listening to music.

It's have many thinghobbies, but I especially it'senjoy playing sports, drawing, sewing and music.

I like sport because it's cool and get me more healthy.


I like sports because it's cool and getmakes me more healthy.

I like sport because it's cool and get me mormakes me healthyier.

I like sports because it'sthey are cool and get me moreare good for my healthy.

I like sports because it'sthey're cool and get me more healthyactive.

I like stretching and running on morning and evening.


I like to stretching and running on mornings and evenings.

Made it sound more natural :)

I like stretching and running onin the morning and evening.

I like stretching and running onin the morning and evening.

I like stretching and running onin the morning and the evening.

I like drawing because you make something beautiful and especially.


I like drawing because you can make something beautiful and especially.

I like drawing because you can make something beautiful and especially.

I like drawing because you makcreate something beautiful and especially.

I like drawing because you can make something beautiful and especially.

Now I drawing mountain and three in water at sunset.


Nowadays I drawing mountains and three in water at sunset.

Not sure what "three in water at sunset" means

Now I am drawing a mountain and three in water at sunset.

NRight now, I am drawing a mountain and three in water ata sunset.

As well I like sew many little and cutie animals: birds, foxes and bears.


As welllso, I like to sew many littlcute and cutilittle animals: birds, foxes and bears.

As well I like sew many little and cutiI also like sewing lots of cute little animals: like birds, foxes and bears.

As well II also like to sew many little and. I especially enjoy sewing cutie animals: such as birds, foxes and bears.

And I like music.


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AndFurthermore, I like music.!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's wonderful: you take musical instrument in hand and the air is filled with melody.


It's wonderful: you take a musical instrument in your hand and the air is filled with melody.

It's wonderful:, you takecan put a musical instrument in your hand and the air is filled with a melody.

It's wonderful: you take a musical instrument in hand and the air is filled with melody.

It's wonderful: you take musical instrument in hand, and all of a sudden the air is filled with harmonious melodyies.

If you want to add an adjective, it highlights the word "melody!"

Especially I love piano- it's fairy tail from black- white keys.


EI especially I love piano- it's like a fairy tail fromwith its black- and white keys.

EI especially I love the piano- it's fairy tail from black- white keys.

Not sure what this bit means - "- it's fairy tail from black- white keys."

EI especially I love the piano- it'. It creates fairy tail fromles with its black- and white keys.

EI especially I love the piano- it's fairy tail from black- white keys.

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