May 21, 2020
My hobby
I couldn't write a diary yesterday because I crashed out while writing a diary.
I don't have particular incident today to talk about, so I'll talk about my hobby.
I like to listen to music.
Music has the power to cheer people up. Whenever I was struggling with something, music helped me.
When I listen to a song, I can vividly recall the circumstances, feelings, and smells of the time I used to listen to that song.
I never listen to the "Memories" of Maroon5 without thinking of my dead friend.
My hobby
I don't have particular incident today to talk about, so I'll talk about my hobby.
I like to listen to music.
Music has the power to cheer people up.
Whenever I was struggling with something, music helped me.
When I listen to a song, I can vividly recall the circumstances, feelings, and smells of the times I used to listen to that song.
I can never listen to the "Memories" ofby Maroon5 without thinking of my dead friend.
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May 22, 2020
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My hobby
I couldn't write a diary entry yesterday because I crashed out while writing a diaryit.
Diary = the whole collection of writing, diary entry = a specific section of the diary
I don't have particular incident today to talk about, so I'll talk about my hobby.
I like to listen to music.
Music has the power to cheer people up.
Whenever I was struggling with something, music helped me.
When I listen to a song, I can vividly recall the circumstances, feelings, and smells of the time I used to listened to that song.
If you want to refer to the general time of your life when you used to listen to that sound, you would say "smells of when I used to listen." If you are referring to a specific time, you would say "smells of the time when I listened"
I never listen to the "Memories" ofby Maroon 5 without thinking of my dead friend.
May 22, 2020
I appreciate it!
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