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Be sure to capitalize every word in a title (except for prepositions like "a" and "with," I think).

Because I am so ambitious right now, I've now started wiriting my second text here, 5 minutes after publishing my first one.

My edit has a more progressive nuance to it, considering you wrote this entry almost immediately after your first one on LangCorrect.

Here, I want to talk about one of my hobbies.

It's more common to include a comma after you introduce a sentence with a single word like "Here." That way, it highlights anything that comes afterwards.

I hope, that I can get somewhat nerdy in here, j. Just ignore, it if it is too much XD.

I myself started playing it 7seven years ago, and I can say, that I am really somewhat advanced when it comes to sightreading and technique in general.

I've heard that it's more common to write out numbers 1-9 as full words, but if you want to leave "seven" in its numeral form, go for it.

Two years ago, I started teaching my skills to others and s. Since then, I've had 10 students, 7seven of which I am still teaching to this datey.

This year, I am looking foreward to get at least 3 -5 new students that I don't even know yet.

This is not the only way that playing an instrument affected me and changed my personality.

I find that adding "that" emphasizes whatever comes after it and makes the whole sentence easier to read as a result. Feel free to leave this out if you want, though.

Just a few years ago I had quite some social anxieties, which are mostly gone by now.

In addition to that, it helped me getting a daily routine.

Through practiscing an hour ats the bare minimum per day, I developed the habit of doing something aton a daily basis.

This helped me starting to work out, and read books.

Therefore, I really want to inspire all of you to do the same for yourself.

It could even be a cooler one - I myself started playing the saxophone only for that reason.

Music is just fun, and it has the power to shape your life!

Because I am so ambitious right now, I am now started wirwriting my second text here, 5 minutes after publishing my first one.

Or you could say, "I have now started writing my second text here", but I think "I am now writing" is more natural.

HerThis time I want to talk about one of my hobbies.

This sentence is not necessarily wrong, but this phrasing would be considered more natural.

I hope, that I can get somewhat nerdy in here, just ignore, me if it is too much XD.

careful with your use of commas!

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So my first and most important hobby is playing an instrument - the clarinet.

did not = didn't

I myself started playing it 7 years ago and can say, that I am really somewhat advanced when it comes to sightreading and technique in general.

"myself" is unnecessary. You would only say that for clarification if the previous sentence was something like "My friends have recently started learning the clarinet. I myself started playing it 7 years ago" or something like that.

Two years ago I started teaching my skills to others and since then I have had 10 students, 7 of which I am still teaching to this date.

nice!

This year I am looking foreward to getting at least 3 -5 new students that I dont even know yet.

Since the students are new, there is no need to specify that you don't know them yet, this is a given.

Just a few years ago I had quite some social anxieties, which are mostly gone by now.

quite some is awkward. You could say "I had quite a bit of social anxiety"

In addition to that, it helped me gettingto develop a daily routine.

Through practiscing an hour at the bare minimum per day, I developed the habit of doing something aton a daily basis.

british vs. american spelling of "practice".

This helped me starting to work out, and read books.

Therefore, I really want to inspire all of you to do the same for yourself.

It could even be a cooler one - I myself started playing the saxophon onlye for that reason only.

Because I am so ambitious right now, I now started wiriting my second text here, 5 minutes after publishing my first one.

- the second 'now' you added sounds a little weird here, you already use a 'now' before to emphasis the change at this moment so no need for the second one

Here I want to talk about one of my hobbies.

I hope, that I can get somewhat nerdy in here, just ignore, it if it is too much XD.

- No need for comma at the start, a comma indicates a pause when reading, there's no reason to pause after saying I hope in this context
- no need for the 'in', writing in here makes it sound like in a physical place, writing 'here' is perfectly understandable when referring to this text
- You can writing 'just ignore' without the 'it' but that would only ever be said in a super casual setting in person as it's not grammatically correct

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So my first and most important hobby is playing an instrument - the clarinet.

- I is always capitalized if it's by itself
- didn't is always spelt with an apostrophe

I myself started playing it 7 years ago and can say, that I am really somewhat advanced when it comes to sightreading and technique in general.

- myself is redundant in this context, it's clear you are talking about yourself already from context. You would only use myself if you're trying to put emphasis on you which in this context there is no need because it's already clear
- really somewhat advanced doesn't sound natural at all because really means a lot where as somewhat means a little bit and then advanced means a lot again so it's conflicting. Either say really advanced or somewhat advanced but really somewhat doesn't go together
- I don't know what sightreading is so I will assume it's spelt correctly

Two years ago, I started teaching my skills to othersothers the clarinet and since then I have had 10 students, 7 of which I am still teaching to this date.

- A comma would typically be placed after something like 'two years ago' as when people speak, they typically take a slight pause after saying this
- teaching my skills to others is a bit unnatural, we would normally just say teaching others ...
- You had ten students in the past but you now no longer have 10 students so you need to use the tense 'have had'

This year, I am looking foreward to getting at least 3 - 5 new students that I dont even know yet.

- People would typically would take a slight pause as well after saying 'this year' so added a comma
- don't always spelt with apostrophe
- writing 'that I don't even know yet' sounds redundant here because it's assumed you don't know them because you haven't got the students yet

This is not the only way that playing an instrument has affected me and changed my personality.

- the 'that' that I added is not strictly necessary but it does make it flow a little nicer in my opinion
- You are talking about how the instrument affected you in the past so you need to conjugate with 'has' before affected to indicate this affect happened in the past a while ago not just two seconds ago

It also got me into 2two different bands where I learned to connect to others.

- In English especially for small numbers, it's customary to write numbers out instead of putting the number

Just a few years ago I had quite some social anxieties, which are mostly gone by now.

- quite and some don't go to together. If you want to use quite, it would go with something like 'quite a lot of social anxiety'

In addition to that it helped me gettingto develop a daily routine.

- to develop fits a lot better when talking about daily routines in English because your talking about how something helping you develop a daily routine. to get a daily routine would make more sense if you joined the military and then they forced you to stick to a timetable. In the case you didn't develop the routine, you were given it by someone else but in this case it makes more sense to use the verb 'to develop'

ThroughBy practising an hour at the bare minimum per day, I developed the habit of doing something aton a daily basis.

- through is okay but I think 'by' fits a bit better because it's a bit stronger than through which I think fits in this case.
- Good use of the verb 'to develop' in the context of the habit
- In english we always do things ON a daily basis not at a daily basis

This helped me to starting to work out, and read books.

Unnatural use of tense here. If you wanted to use 'starting' you would have to say something like 'This helped me with things like starting to work out and to read books.'

Therefore I really want to inspire all of you to do the same for yourself.

It could even be a cooler one - I myself started playing the saxophon only for that very reason.

- saying the idiom 'for that very reason' is more natural than 'only for that reason' in this context