My history with the eEnglish language

English is always capitalized

My name is Daniel I am 41 years old and I live in Americana, in the state of São Paulo, Brazil with my parents, I know that this may seem strange, but it is that withbecause of our economic crisis,. I did not get a replacemencouldn't fin the job marketd a job.

Since March with the advancement of Coronavirus, I started taking online courses on the Coursera platform, t. There I took two courses in cybersecurity by IBM.

A passion of mine since I was a teenager is learning languages.

Me, too. I understand what you're saying. I started learning languages in high school. Now I'm 76 years, retired, and still going strong....learning every day.

I started to learn my first English words with comics that a friend brought from his vacation in the United States.

It's always better to learn with interesting materials.

At the same time I started to listen to rock music and started to translate the lyrics of the songs with a dictionary, t. That was great fun for me, and I was one of the best students in the English class at school.

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The biggest problem I perceive in teaching English in Brazil is that public schools have never received attention from the government, both in terms of structure and also have never paid a decent salary for teachers.

I would use "have never + verb" to show that it started in the past and continues up to today, which is one of the major functions of the present perfect verb form

My history with the eEnglish language

My name is Daniel. I am 41 years old, and I live in Americana, in the state of São Paulo, Brazil, with my parents,. I know that this may seem strange, but it is that withdue to our economic crisis, I dicould not getfind a replacement in the job market.

"did not get" makes it sound more like a choice. Because you are talking about economic crisis I think "could not get" fits better.

Since then I have been doing small jobs, and I am also a freelance translator, but it is not every day that I get work. But I don't get work every day, and that is a little frustrating.¶

I am a student ofying logistics, and I will graduate in the second semester of next year.

Since March with the advancement of Cthe coronavirus in March, I started taking online courses on the Coursera platform, there. I took two courses in cybersecurity made by IBM.

I hope that with these courses I have one moreincrease my chances of getting a job.

I started to learn my first English words with comics that a friend brought fromon his vacation in the United States.

Or: "I started to learn my first English words with comics that a friend brought me from his vacation in the United States."

At the same time, I started to listen to rock music and started to translate the lyrics of the songs with a dictionary, that. This was great fun for me, and I was one of the best students in the English class at school.

The first book I read in English was Carrie by Stephen King,. I had a little difficulty understanding certain words and expressions because I realized that it was a moreit was complex book for my level of English.

The biggest problem I perceive in teaching English in Brazil is that public schools never received attention from the government, both in terms of structure and also never paid a decent salary for teachersteacher salary.

If you live in Brazil and want to learn English, forget about public schools. Instead, invest in private lessons or makbecome an exchange student.

I hope that one day this situation will improve, but I find it very difficult,unlikely because the government here is not concerned with the poor, only with big businessmen and banks.

"big businessmen" would be businessmen who are large in size

My name is Daniel. I am 41 years old and I live in AmericanaBrazil, in the state of São Paulo, Brazil with my parents,. I know that this may seem strange, but it is that with our current economic crisis, I did not get a replacement in the job marketnew job.

I am not entirely sure what you are trying to say here. Did you not get a job due to the crisis? Or did you not get a new job during the crisis since not a lot of jobs are available?

Since then I have been doing small jobs and I am also a freelance translator, but it is notI do not get work every day that I get work and that is a little frustrating.

I am a student of logistics student and I will graduate in the second semesterhalf of next year.

Normally the second semester is also in the second half of the year. Maybe this is just the case in my country though. :thinking:

If you do not want to be that specific, you can also just use "next year".

Since March, with the advancement ofspread of the Corona virus, I started taking online courses on the Coursera platform, there I took two courses in cyber security by IBM.

I hope that with these courses I have one more chance of getting a jobI can increase my job changes with these courses.

At the same time I started to listen to rock music and started to translate the lyrics of the songs with a dictionary, tha. It was great fun for me,a lot of fun and I was one of the best students in themy English class at school.

The biggest problem I perceive in teaching English in Brazil is that public schools never received attention from the government, both in terms of structure and also never paid a decent salary for teachers.

I do understand the sentence but it doesn't really fit that well. You say "both in terms of". This usually means that both statements that follow should focus on the public schools. Your second statement , however, focuses on the teacher's salary.