June 21, 2024
My Hiking Story
I love hiking. It’s my escape from the daily routine. In Hungary, my current stay, there’s no good mountains. Only hills. First I fell in love with hiking while living in Armenia. The country is dotted with charming yet challenging mountains. At my first time I was invited by a guy. The weather conditions were not quite appealing: cloudy sky, wet slippery grass and fog. Along the way, I was picking berries. But those 12 km were a good start. Not as enjoyable as I’d like to get, but yet pleasant. My following hikes were more exhausting yet rewarding, with breathtaking scenery.
My highest peak was around 4000 m high. The mountain has a steep slope which is exhausting on the way up and extremely dangerous on the way down. And the boulder hopping section. Oh, gosh. After the way down at the base, being drained and sore, you have to push yourself one more time. But it was a good experience. Hope best hikes lie ahead of me.
My Hiking Story
I love hiking.
It’s my escape from the daily routine.
In Hungary, where I'my currently staying, there’s are no good mountains.
Only hills.
First I fell in love with hiking while living in Armenia.
The country is dotted with charming yet challenging mountains.
At mMy first time, I was invited by a guy.
The weather conditions were not quite appealing: cloudy sky, wet slippery grass, and fog.
Along the way, I was pickinged berries.
But those 12 km were a good start.
Not as enjoyable as I’d like it to get, but yetstill pleasant.
My following hikes were more exhausting yet rewarding, with breathtaking scenery.
My highest peak was around 4000 m high.
The mountain has a steep slope which is exhausting on the way up and extremely dangerous on the way down.
And the boulder hopping section.
Oh, gosh.
After the way down at the base, being drained and sore, you have to push yourself one more time.
But it was a good experience.
Hope my best hikes lie ahead of me.
My Hiking Story
I love hiking.
It’s my escape from themy daily routine.
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Only hills.
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Along the way, I was pickingpicked some berries.
But those 12 km were a good start.
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My following hikes were more exhausting yebut rewarding, with breathtaking scenery.
MyThe highest peak I climbed was around 4000 m high.
The mountain hasd a steep slope, which iwas exhausting on the way up and extremely dangerous on the way down.
And the boulder -hopping section.
Oh, gosh.
After the wayclimbing down ato the base, despite being drained and sore, you have to push yourself one more time.
But it was a good experience.
HI hope I still have my best hikes lie ahead of me.
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I hope you go on your favorite hike soon!
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Only hills.
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The country is dotted with charming yet challenging mountains.
AtFor my first time, I was invited by a guy.
The weather conditions were not quite appealing: cloudy sky, wet slippery grass and fog.
Along the way, I was pickinged berries.
"Was picking" is fine if you include something else with it (I was picking berries when it started to rain). By itself, it sounds a bit odd.
But those 12 km were a good start.
Not as enjoyable as I’d like to gethave liked , but yetstill pleasant.
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My highest peak was around 4000 m high.
The mountain has a steep slope which is exhausting on the way up and extremely dangerous on the way down.
And the boulder hopping section.
Oh, gosh.
After the way downdescent, at the base, while being drained and sore, you have to push yourself one more time.
HI hope bestter hikes lie ahead of me.
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Great text! I can't believe you climbed a mountain 4000 m high!
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