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vinicius_b

June 23, 2020

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My health

Well, yesterday I started to think about my health, I've been thinking about how terrible my diet can be sometimes. When the quarantine started, I didn't plan what would I do with my diet, so I ate what was much easier in the moment. Toggling between fast-foods and normal's ones I didn't figured out how terrible I was going.

Before the quarantine, I was training to run a half of a marathon, so I was running about 10km two or three time a week. Today I can't run plus then 8km. I know that I can't do more because my conditional physic, that I didn't train in this period, is not the best. But if I restart the training with seriously, I will achieve my last result or much more.

The only problem that I can see is my diet. My body can't stand a training too long because on my diet I haven't the least nutrients to do hard sports. So if I want to do anything, first I need to change it.

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My health

Well, yesterday I started to thinking about my health,. I've been thinking about how terrible my diet can be sometimes.

When the quarantine started, I didn't plan what would I do with my diet, so I ate whatever was much easierst in the moment.

TogglAlternating between fast- foods and normal's ones food, I didn't figured out how terrible Irealize how bad it was goetting.

Before the quarantine, I was training to run a half of a marathon, so I was running about 10 km two or three time a week.

Today I can't run plusmore thean 8 km.

I know that I can't do more because my conditional physic, thataerobic fitness, which I didn't train during this period, is not the best.

I took a guess at what you meant by "conditional physic" but I might have guessed wrong. Aerobic fitness, or cardiovascular fitness, is the type of fitness developed by endurance exercise such as running, cycling, swimming. It works your heart and lungs.

But if I restart the training with seriously again, I will achieve my last result or much morebe as good as before or even better.

The only problem that I can see is my diet.

My body can't stand atolerate training for too long because onwith my diet I haven't the leastdon't have enough nutrients to do harddemanding sports.

So if I want to do anything, first I need to change imy diet.

It wasn't necessarily wrong, but I think it would be better style here to be more clear about "it."

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All the best with your training and diet! I find myself in a similar situation, so I can definitely sympathize.

My health

Well, yesterday I started to think about my health, I've been thinking about how terrible my diet can be sometimes.

When the quarantine started, I didn't plan what I would I do with my diet, so I ate whatever was much easierst in the moment.

Toggling between fast-foods and normal's ones I didn't figured out how terrible I was goeating.

no need for the 's on normal. There is no possession going on here.

Before the quarantine, I was training to run a half of a marathon, so I was running about 10km two or three time a week.

Half marathon is used as an expression. It's never half of a marathon although this seems like it would make more sense.

Today I can't run plusmore then 8km.

In English we never say plus than

I know that I can't do more because my conditional ing/physic, that I didn't train in this period, is not the bestque is not the best because I didn't train much.

Conditioning, physique, or endurance are all applicable here

But if I restart the training with seriously, I will achieve my last result or much more.

we don't say with seriously in English

My body can't stand a training too long because oin my diet I don't haven't the least nutrients to do hard sports.

So if I want to do anything, first I need to change it.

My health


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Well, yesterday I started to think about my health, I've been thinking about how terrible my diet can be sometimes.


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Well, yesterday I started to thinking about my health,. I've been thinking about how terrible my diet can be sometimes.

When the quarantine started, I didn't plan what would I do with my diet, so I ate what was much easier in the moment.


When the quarantine started, I didn't plan what I would I do with my diet, so I ate whatever was much easierst in the moment.

When the quarantine started, I didn't plan what would I do with my diet, so I ate whatever was much easierst in the moment.

Toggling between fast-foods and normal's ones I didn't figured out how terrible I was going.


Toggling between fast-foods and normal's ones I didn't figured out how terrible I was goeating.

no need for the 's on normal. There is no possession going on here.

TogglAlternating between fast- foods and normal's ones food, I didn't figured out how terrible Irealize how bad it was goetting.

Before the quarantine, I was training to run a half of a marathon, so I was running about 10km two or three time a week.


Before the quarantine, I was training to run a half of a marathon, so I was running about 10km two or three time a week.

Half marathon is used as an expression. It's never half of a marathon although this seems like it would make more sense.

Before the quarantine, I was training to run a half of a marathon, so I was running about 10 km two or three time a week.

Today I can't run plus then 8km.


Today I can't run plusmore then 8km.

In English we never say plus than

Today I can't run plusmore thean 8 km.

I know that I can't do more because my conditional physic, that I didn't train in this period, is not the best.


I know that I can't do more because my conditional ing/physic, that I didn't train in this period, is not the bestque is not the best because I didn't train much.

Conditioning, physique, or endurance are all applicable here

I know that I can't do more because my conditional physic, thataerobic fitness, which I didn't train during this period, is not the best.

I took a guess at what you meant by "conditional physic" but I might have guessed wrong. Aerobic fitness, or cardiovascular fitness, is the type of fitness developed by endurance exercise such as running, cycling, swimming. It works your heart and lungs.

But if I restart the training with seriously, I will achieve my last result or much more.


But if I restart the training with seriously, I will achieve my last result or much more.

we don't say with seriously in English

But if I restart the training with seriously again, I will achieve my last result or much morebe as good as before or even better.

The only problem that I can see is my diet.


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My body can't stand a training too long, because on my diet I haven't the least nutrients to do hard sports .


So if I want to do anything, first I need to change it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

So if I want to do anything, first I need to change imy diet.

It wasn't necessarily wrong, but I think it would be better style here to be more clear about "it."

My body can't stand a training too long because on my diet I haven't the least nutrients to do hard sports.


My body can't stand a training too long because oin my diet I don't haven't the least nutrients to do hard sports.

My body can't stand atolerate training for too long because onwith my diet I haven't the leastdon't have enough nutrients to do harddemanding sports.

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