June 24, 2021
When I'm in home, I often talk to myself to take my mind off from being alone.
I don't dislike to be alone so much, on the contrary, sometimes I want to be.
However I dislike staying in a no-sound place because it exaggerates being alone to me.
To avoid these situations, I often talk to me.
But it is natural the situation seems strange from others, and when they see such me I must feel embarrassed.
My Habits
When I'm inat home, I often talk to myself to take my mind off from being alone.
I don't dislike to be alone so much, on the contrary, sometimes I want to be.
However I dison't like staying in a no-soundquiet place because it exaggerates being alone to me.
the word "dislike" is not very natural, compared to "do not like". It's not wrong though
To avoid these situations, I often talk to meyself.
But while it is natural, the situation seems strange fromto others, and when they see such me I mustme like that I feel embarrassed.
When I'm in home, I often talk to myself to take my mind off from being alone.
'...off from...' isn't wrong but just 'off' sounds better :)
I don't like to be alone so muchoften, on the contrary, sometimes I want to be.
If you mean that you don't like to be alone regulary, use 'so often'
If you mean you *really* don't like being along use 'I really don't like to be alone' :)
However, I dislike staying in a no-soundquiet place because it exaggerates being alone to me.
Comma after words like 'However', and 'no-sound' is fine but most people say 'silent/quiet' etc :)
To avoid these situations, I often talk to meyself.
But while it is natural, the situation seems strange fromto others, and when they see such me I mustme like that I feel embarrassed.
Added 'while' to help the flow of the sentence.
No comma needed before 'and' here.
'such me' isn't correct grammar, but I think 'see me like that' is the closest alternative to what you want to say :)
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Good job, completely understand what you're saying. Very small errors, keep it up :)
My Habits This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
When I'm in home, I often talk to myself to take my mind off from being alone. When I'm in home, I often talk to myself to take my mind off '...off from...' isn't wrong but just 'off' sounds better :) When I'm |
I don't like to be alone so much, on the contrary, sometimes I want to be. I don't like to be alone so If you mean that you don't like to be alone regulary, use 'so often' If you mean you *really* don't like being along use 'I really don't like to be alone' :) |
However I dislike staying in a no-sound place because it exaggerates being alone to me. However, I dislike staying in a Comma after words like 'However', and 'no-sound' is fine but most people say 'silent/quiet' etc :) However I d the word "dislike" is not very natural, compared to "do not like". It's not wrong though |
To avoid these situations, I often talk to me. To avoid these situations, I often talk to m To avoid these situations, I often talk to m |
But it is natural the situation seems strange from others, and when they see such me I must feel embarrassed. But while it is natural, the situation seems strange Added 'while' to help the flow of the sentence. No comma needed before 'and' here. 'such me' isn't correct grammar, but I think 'see me like that' is the closest alternative to what you want to say :) But while it is natural, the situation seems strange |
I don't dislike to be alone so much, on the contrary, sometimes I want to be. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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