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greeeeeen_tea

June 24, 2021

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My Habits

When I'm in home, I often talk to myself to take my mind off from being alone.
I don't dislike to be alone so much, on the contrary, sometimes I want to be.
However I dislike staying in a no-sound place because it exaggerates being alone to me.
To avoid these situations, I often talk to me.
But it is natural the situation seems strange from others, and when they see such me I must feel embarrassed.

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My Habits

When I'm inat home, I often talk to myself to take my mind off from being alone.

I don't dislike to be alone so much, on the contrary, sometimes I want to be.

However I dison't like staying in a no-soundquiet place because it exaggerates being alone to me.

the word "dislike" is not very natural, compared to "do not like". It's not wrong though

To avoid these situations, I often talk to meyself.

But while it is natural, the situation seems strange fromto others, and when they see such me I mustme like that I feel embarrassed.

When I'm in home, I often talk to myself to take my mind off from being alone.

'...off from...' isn't wrong but just 'off' sounds better :)

I don't like to be alone so muchoften, on the contrary, sometimes I want to be.

If you mean that you don't like to be alone regulary, use 'so often'
If you mean you *really* don't like being along use 'I really don't like to be alone' :)

However, I dislike staying in a no-soundquiet place because it exaggerates being alone to me.

Comma after words like 'However', and 'no-sound' is fine but most people say 'silent/quiet' etc :)

To avoid these situations, I often talk to meyself.

But while it is natural, the situation seems strange fromto others, and when they see such me I mustme like that I feel embarrassed.

Added 'while' to help the flow of the sentence.
No comma needed before 'and' here.
'such me' isn't correct grammar, but I think 'see me like that' is the closest alternative to what you want to say :)

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My Habits


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When I'm in home, I often talk to myself to take my mind off from being alone.


When I'm in home, I often talk to myself to take my mind off from being alone.

'...off from...' isn't wrong but just 'off' sounds better :)

When I'm inat home, I often talk to myself to take my mind off from being alone.

I don't like to be alone so much, on the contrary, sometimes I want to be.


I don't like to be alone so muchoften, on the contrary, sometimes I want to be.

If you mean that you don't like to be alone regulary, use 'so often' If you mean you *really* don't like being along use 'I really don't like to be alone' :)

However I dislike staying in a no-sound place because it exaggerates being alone to me.


However, I dislike staying in a no-soundquiet place because it exaggerates being alone to me.

Comma after words like 'However', and 'no-sound' is fine but most people say 'silent/quiet' etc :)

However I dison't like staying in a no-soundquiet place because it exaggerates being alone to me.

the word "dislike" is not very natural, compared to "do not like". It's not wrong though

To avoid these situations, I often talk to me.


To avoid these situations, I often talk to meyself.

To avoid these situations, I often talk to meyself.

But it is natural the situation seems strange from others, and when they see such me I must feel embarrassed.


But while it is natural, the situation seems strange fromto others, and when they see such me I mustme like that I feel embarrassed.

Added 'while' to help the flow of the sentence. No comma needed before 'and' here. 'such me' isn't correct grammar, but I think 'see me like that' is the closest alternative to what you want to say :)

But while it is natural, the situation seems strange fromto others, and when they see such me I mustme like that I feel embarrassed.

I don't dislike to be alone so much, on the contrary, sometimes I want to be.


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