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My Grilfriend Trip

Yesterday i took off my grilfriend at the airport, because she has a work trip.
She flought to Turkey for an exam.
This is the frist time since we've been together that we've spent even a littile time apart.
It was hard to fall asleep without her.

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My Grirlfriend's Trip

"Girlfriend" is the correct spelling.
Also, the trip is of your girlfriend, so you need an apostrophe.

Yesterday iI took off my grirlfriend ato the airport, because she hasd a work trip.

"Took off" is not usually used if you are dropping someone off at a place and not staying with them. It could be used, however, in a sentence like "I took off with my friend to Miami."

Also, "took" is the past tense, hence "has" must also be changed to the past tense.

She floughtew to Turkey for an exam.

"Flew" is the correct past tense of the verb "to fly".

This is the frirst time since we've been together that we've spent even a littile time apart.

Grammar is perfect, just watch your spelling.

It was hard to fall asleep without her.

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The sentences individually had good vocabulary and grammar. I would recommend that you work a bit on your spelling and make your writing flow better together. Overall, good job!

Yesterday iI took off my grirlfriend ato the airport, because she has a work trip.

"took off" is used for a plane. You take someone to the airport.

She floughtew to Turkey for an exam.

"flought" is not a real word. You could also say "She was flying to Turkey"

This is the frist time since we've been together that we've spent even a littile time apart.

When you see a red dotted line under a word you are typing on Langcorrect.com, it means there is a spelling error. I think you know how to spell "little." The red dotted line can help you correct words you know how to spell or want to learn how to spell like "girlfriend" and "little."

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This is a good short text for your level and a sweet story. Good job!

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Liag

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I forgot to correct the title "My Girlfriend's Trip"
This is how you show it is her trip.

My Grilfriend Trip


My Grirlfriend's Trip

"Girlfriend" is the correct spelling. Also, the trip is of your girlfriend, so you need an apostrophe.

Yesterday i took off my grilfriend at the airport, because she has a work trip.


Yesterday iI took off my grirlfriend ato the airport, because she has a work trip.

"took off" is used for a plane. You take someone to the airport.

Yesterday iI took off my grirlfriend ato the airport, because she hasd a work trip.

"Took off" is not usually used if you are dropping someone off at a place and not staying with them. It could be used, however, in a sentence like "I took off with my friend to Miami." Also, "took" is the past tense, hence "has" must also be changed to the past tense.

She flought to Turkey for an exam.


She floughtew to Turkey for an exam.

"flought" is not a real word. You could also say "She was flying to Turkey"

She floughtew to Turkey for an exam.

"Flew" is the correct past tense of the verb "to fly".

This is the frist time since we've been together that we've spent even a littile time apart.


This is the frist time since we've been together that we've spent even a littile time apart.

When you see a red dotted line under a word you are typing on Langcorrect.com, it means there is a spelling error. I think you know how to spell "little." The red dotted line can help you correct words you know how to spell or want to learn how to spell like "girlfriend" and "little."

This is the frirst time since we've been together that we've spent even a littile time apart.

Grammar is perfect, just watch your spelling.

It was hard to fall asleep without her.


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