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My Greatest Passion.

I'm a passionnate person, so I have a lot of diverse passion.
I love draw, read, write, sculpt, walk...
But my biggest passion is to listen people speak about them.
I think each person is like a book and I could pass an entire day to listen someone speak about what he did on his life, what he love, his dream, his regrets, his failures...
I love old people, because they have a big story behind them, and they often like to speak about their memories.
It's the reason I very want to improve my english, because I want to speak with more people around the world.
I would like to share the story of everybody on the world.
I think we can learn a lot of others.
So, if I need to resume: I'm passionnate by people.

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My Greatest Passion.

I'm a passionnate person, so I have a lot of diversefferent passions.

I love to draw, read, write, sculpt, walk.., etc.

ButHowever, my biggest passion is to listening to people speak about themselves.

It is best to not start a sentence with 'but'!

I think each person is like a book and I could pass an entire day to listening to someone speak about what he did ohas done in his life, what he loves, his dreams, his regrets, his failures.. etc.

I love old people, because they have a big storyies behind them, and they often like to speak about their memories.

It's the reason I verreally want to improve my eEnglish, because I want to speak with more people around the world.

I would like to share the story ofstories with everybody oin the world.

I think we can learn a lot of from one anothers.

So, if I need to resumto conclude:

I'm passionnate byabout people.

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Well done! :)

My Greatest Passion.


My Greatest Passion.

I'm a passionnate person, so I have a lot of diverse passion.


I'm a passionnate person, so I have a lot of diversefferent passions.

I love draw, read, write, sculpt, walk...


I love to draw, read, write, sculpt, walk.., etc.

But my biggest passion is to listen people speak about them.


ButHowever, my biggest passion is to listening to people speak about themselves.

It is best to not start a sentence with 'but'!

I think each person is like a book and I could pass an entire day to listen someone speak about what he did on his life, what he love, his dream, his regrets, his failures...


I think each person is like a book and I could pass an entire day to listening to someone speak about what he did ohas done in his life, what he loves, his dreams, his regrets, his failures.. etc.

I love old people, because they have a big story behind them, and they often like to speak about their memories.


I love old people, because they have a big storyies behind them, and they often like to speak about their memories.

It's the reason I very want to improve my english, because I want to speak with more people around the world.


It's the reason I verreally want to improve my eEnglish, because I want to speak with more people around the world.

I would like to share the story of everybody on the world.


I would like to share the story ofstories with everybody oin the world.

I think we can learn a lot of others.


I think we can learn a lot of from one anothers.

So, if I need to resume:


So, if I need to resumto conclude:

I'm passionnate by people.


I'm passionnate byabout people.

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