Feb. 5, 2024
My granddaughter
My granddaughter is really interested in reading flap books.
Her favorite book is called "Where is spot?"
Spot is a cute and naughty puppy.
This book has many series. She has three books of series.
And she also likes to hide her toys and books.
However, she doesn't know where she hid them.
She always asks me "Where is my toy?" and crys.
Nevertheless I love her.
私の孫は絵本を読むのが好きです。
お気に入りの本は"スポットはどこ？"です。
スポットはいたずら好きの犬です。
この本は、色々なシリーズがあります。
彼女は３冊持っています。
孫は、おもちゃや本を隠すのが好きです。でも彼女は隠した場所を忘れてしまい、泣きます。
私は彼女が大好きです。
My granddaughter is really interested in reading flappicture books.
Her favorite book is called "Where is spot?"
Spot is a cute and naughty puppy.
This book has many series.
She has three books of one series.
Or: she has three series’ of books (If she has lots and lots of books)
And she also likes to hide her toys and books.
However, she doesn't know where she hid them.
She always asks me "Where is my toy?"
and crys.
Nevertheless I love her.
My granddaughter
My granddaughter is really interested in reading flap books.
Her favorite book is called "Where is sSpot?"
Spot is a cute and naughty puppy.
This book has many series.
She has three books of the series.
And sShe also likes to hide her toys and books.
However, she doesn't know where she hid them.
She always asks me "Where is my toy?"
and crys.
NeverthelessBut I love her.
My granddaughter is really interested in reading loves lift-the-flap books.
Her favorite book is called "Where is sSpot?"
Spot is a cute and naughty puppy.
This book has manyere are many books in the series.
She has three books of the series.
And sShe also likes to hide her toys and books.
However, she often doesn't know where she hidas hidden them.
She always asks me, "Wwhere is my toy?"
and cryies.
Nevertheless I love her a lot.
"Nevertheless" doesn't fit here. It implies she did something bad but she didn't.
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My daughter loves Spot too!
My gGranddaughter
My granddaughter is really interested in reading flap books.
You can also just say "interested in" because reading is what you do with books (usually) so it's safe to treat it as implied.
Her favorite book is called "Where is spot?"
Favorite "one" would also work.
Spot is a cute and naughty puppy.
Naughty is used a few ways I think I would say mischievous for 悪戯 but it's not wrong.
This bookseries has many seriebooks.
The previous sentence was about Spot so maybe you want to add another sentence.
She has three books ofin this series.
Three of them
is also okay.
And, she also likes to hide her toys and books.
The "And" here feels like it should be a different word.
However, she doesn't knowalways remember where she hid them.
I think this is what you meant.
Nevertheless, I love her.
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This is a good entry only a couple of little things. Books are part of a series, for example, not the other way around.
I remember when I read books like that, if you have a library nearby maybe you can get her some more!
Feb. 5, 2024
I think Flap Book is not a word everyone knows but it seems to be correct. Lift The Flap is the full name, maybe? It's for the books where the pages can unfold, right?
My granddaughter is really interested in reading flappicture books.
I’ve never heard of flap books. I think my region calls them “picture books.”
Her favorite book is called "Where i’s sSpot?"
Spot is a cute and naughty puppy.
This book has many serieseries has a lot of books.
She has three books of seriesof them.
And sShe also likes to hide her toys and books.
Starting with a conjunction like “and” sounds a little strange when the topic changes.
However, she doesn't knowBut she forgets where she hid them.
I just think this sounds funnier!
She always asks me, "Where is my toy?"
andThen she cryies.
Nevertheless I love her anyway.
“I love X anyway,” is a common English phrase.
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This is well written! I read that book when I was a toddler too!
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Nevertheless I love her.
“I love X anyway,” is a common English phrase. Nevertheless, I love her.
"Nevertheless" doesn't fit here. It implies she did something bad but she didn't.
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And she also likes to hide her toys and books.
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However, she doesn't know where she hid them.
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