Aug. 4, 2023
My good friend
Her name is Kasia. We met on the program NAWA in Torun, Poland. We had learned Polish language in one class. Moreover we had been lived together for one year. Now we meet not very often because i am in Poland and she is in Belarus. We also will study in different universities next year and it will influenced on our fruequency of meetings. But, luckily AGH(her university) and PK (mine) located in the one city. We like to watch films and than discuss them for a long time. We enjoy to travel and just hang out together. We can speak about anything. Kasia is important/significant person for me bacause I met not a lot of people whom I am at ease around . She always listen to me. And i like how we grow personally together.
My good friend.
Moreover, we had been lived together for one year.
Now we meet nodon't meet very often because iI am in Poland and she is in Belarus.
We also will study in different universities next year and it will influenced on ourthe fruequency of our meetings.
She always listens to me.
And iI like how we can grow personally together.
Aug. 7, 2023
Thank you for your correction <3
Her name is Kasia.
Moreover we had been lived together for one year.
or "Moreover we had been living together for one year." - both would be correct
Now we meet nodo not meet very often because iI am in Poland and she is in Belarus.
We also willwill also study in different universities next year, and it will influenced on our fruequency of meetings.
But, luckily, AGH(her university) and PK (mine) are located in the onsame city.
We like to watch films and thaen discuss them for a long time.
Kasia is an important/significant person for me baecause I met nodo not meet a lot of people whom I am at ease around .
She always listens to me.
And iI like how we grow personally together.
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This is very good! It sounds like Kasia is a great friend.
Aug. 7, 2023
Thank you :3
We met on the NAWA program NAWA in Torun, Poland.
I understood what you were trying to say, but it sounds better to put the program name in front of the program.
We had learned Polish language in one class.
The above reads much better. I might also recommend saying "We learned Polish in one class together." OR "We studied Polish together in a class."
Moreover, we had been liveding together for one year.
Now we meet nodon't meet very often because i am in Poland and she is in Belarus.
We also willwill also study in different universities next year and itwhich will influenced on our fruequency of the number of our future meetings.
But, luckily AGH(her university) and PK (mine) are located in the onsame city.
We like to watch films and thaen discuss them for a long time.
"than" is used for comparisons only
We enjoy to traveling and just hanging out together.
You could also say "We like to travel and just hang out together."
We can speatalk about anything.
This makes sense, but I feel like "talk" is more commonly used in this context
Kasia is a important/significant person forto me baecause I met nohaven't met a lot of people whom I am at ease around .
She always listens to me.
And i like how we grow personally together.
consider combining this sentence with the one above with a comma.
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Hope you and Kasia get to spend more time together! Nice work!
Aug. 7, 2023
Thank you for your correction :)
Your comments are very helpful to me <3
Aug. 7, 2023
Kasia is a important/significant person forto me baecause I met nohaven't met a lot of people whom I am at ease around .
Could you please explain why "who" is a better fit?
Aug. 7, 2023
Could you please explain why "who" is a better fit?
So, whom works here grammatically, but it makes it feel more formal. I rarely use 'whom' when I speak (I just use who). I guess I shouldn't have corrected it since it's technically I think correct. Sorry about that.
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We met on the program NAWA in Torun, Poland. We met on the NAWA program I understood what you were trying to say, but it sounds better to put the program name in front of the program. |
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We had learned Polish language in one class. We The above reads much better. I might also recommend saying "We learned Polish in one class together." OR "We studied Polish together in a class." |
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Moreover we had been lived together for one year. Moreover, we had been liv Moreover we had or "Moreover we had been living together for one year." - both would be correct Moreover, we had been lived together for one year. |
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Now we meet not very often because i am in Poland and she is in Belarus. Now we Now we Now we |
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We also will study in different universities next year and it will influenced on our fruequency of meetings. We We We also will study in different universities next year and it will influenced |
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But, luckily AGH(her university) and PK (mine) located in the one city. But, luckily AGH(her university) and PK (mine) are located in the But |
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We like to watch films and than discuss them for a long time. We like to watch films and th We like to watch films and th "than" is used for comparisons only |
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We enjoy to travel and just hang out together. We enjoy You could also say "We like to travel and just hang out together." |
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We can speak about anything. We can This makes sense, but I feel like "talk" is more commonly used in this context |
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Kasia is important/significant person for me bacause I met not a lot of people whom I am at ease around . Kasia is a important/significant person Kasia is an important/significant person for me b |
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She always listen to me. She always listens to me. She always listens to me. She always listens to me. |
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And i like how we grow personally together. And And i like how we grow personally together. consider combining this sentence with the one above with a comma. And |
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