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courageuse19

Dec. 26, 2021

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My goals

The new year going to arrive soon. I decided to put four goals in my life. So I want really to achieve my goals, because I swear God I will work hard and I not stop that.
I will applie this rule in my life:"I want to be, I don't want to be, as they want to be.

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My goals

The new year going to arriveis coming soon.

I decided to putchose four new goals infor my life.

So I wantI really want to achieve my goals, because. I swear to God I will work hard and I nowithout stop thatping.

I will applie this rule in my life:"I want to be, I don't want to be, as they want to be.

This sounds profound, but I am not sure what it means. It may need some more clarification

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You have a great attitude. Best of luck achieving your goals!

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courageuse19

Dec. 27, 2021

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I mean, I want to achieve my dreams that I want, and not do what others ask of me.

Thank you Chido.

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chido

Dec. 28, 2021

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OK that makes more sense. Another way to say that could be "I want to achieve my own dreams instead of the things other people ask of me"

My goals


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The new year going to arrive soon.


The new year going to arriveis coming soon.

I decided to put four goals in my life.


I decided to putchose four new goals infor my life.

So I want really to achieve my goals, because I swear God I will work hard and I not stop that.


So I wantI really want to achieve my goals, because. I swear to God I will work hard and I nowithout stop thatping.

I will applie this rule in my life:"I want to be, I don't want to be, as they want to be.


I will applie this rule in my life:"I want to be, I don't want to be, as they want to be.

This sounds profound, but I am not sure what it means. It may need some more clarification

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