I love Instagram because I can check what my friends are doing and knowsee my favorite actors orand singers, etc.

When I wake up, the first of allthing I do, I always check it.

First of all is better used for listing things :)

However I do not upload my own pictures much.

However I do not upload much.
However I do not upload pictures much.

Because sometimes, I wasam ashamed of my picture.

This is because sometimes, I am ashamed of my picture.

Starting a sentence with "because" is colloquial so be careful! :)

To be honest, I have gone through the feeling.

I am quite unsure of what you are trying to say.
Hopefully someone else is able to help you on this one. :)

When I druank with my friends, I was so excited, and so I uploaded strangera picture.

When I got drunk with my friends, I got so excited and uploaded a picture.

I noticed it after the day after, and I deleted it.

Instagram is used by a lot of people, so our picture is watchedseen by strangers.

When I use the app, I thought I must be careful.

"I thought I must be careful" sounds like you are no longer careful.

If possible, let me tell me your favorite apps!!

I love Instagram because I can check what my friends are doing and get to know my favorite actors orand singers, etc.

When I wake up, first of all, I always check it I always check it right after I wake up.

However I do not upload my pictures much.

Because sometimes, I wasam ashamed of my picture.

When I drunk with my friends, I was sogot very excited, and I uploaded a picture of a stranger picture.

I noticed it after thethe next day, and I deleted it.

Instagram is used by a lot of people, so our picture is watcheds are seen by strangers.

When I use the app, I thoughtknow that I must be careful.