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My glasses

I usually wear glasses because I have bad eyesight.

The sun has been feeling blinding when I drive lately , so I went to buy glasses with colored lenses today.

I was not sure which one to choose, I ended up buying glasses with brownish-grey lenses.

It’s very cool color and I love my new glasses.


私は目が悪いので、ふだんは眼鏡をかけています。
最近、車を運転するときに太陽の光が眩しいと感じるようになったので、今日は色付きレンズのメガネを買いに行きました。
どれを選べばいいのかわからず、結局、茶色がかったグレーのレンズのメガネを購入しました。
とてもクールな色で、新しいメガネが気に入っています。

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My glasses

I usually wear glasses because I have bad eyesight.

The sun has been feeling blinding when I drive lately , so I went to buy glasses with colored lenses today.

You can also say: "The sun's glare has felt much more blinding lately..."

I was not sure which one to choose, so I ended up buying glasses with brownish-grey lenses.

Personally, I would use "wasn't" instead of "was not" here, because "was not" sounds a little too formal or robotic.

It’s a very cool color and I love my new glasses.

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Well done! I can relate. I also own a pair of glasses with snap-on colored lenses because the sun here can be unbearably bright sometimes. Mine are rose-colored!

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LeahLeah

today

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Thank you for correcting me.😊

A pair of glasses with snap-on colored lenses is good, and it’s convenient because you don't have to change your glasses.

My glasses

I usually wear glasses because I have bad eyesight.

The sun has been feelingfelt blinding when I've been driveing lately , so I went to buy glasses with colored lenses today.

This is how I'd phrase it. I don't think the original is strictly wrong but it sounded a little awkward to me.

Although I was non't sure which ones to choose, I ended up buying glasses with brownish-grey lenses.

Unless you're trying to strongly emphasise the "not" then you should probably contract it. Otherwise sounds quite strange.

This sentence needed something extra to connect the two clauses. I think "although" at the start should achieve that. You could also write "I wasn't sure which ones to choose, but in the end I went for glasses with brownish-grey lenses."

Finally, when we talk about glasses we generally talk in the plural. So I think it's more common to here "ones" in reference to glasses than "one". If you want to talk about them in the singular then you'd talk about a "pair of glasses".

It’s very cool color and I love my new glasses.

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I hope you enjoy your new glasses!

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LeahLeah

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Thank you for correcting me.😊
You mean, If I’m not trying to strongly emphasize the “not”, then I should use the “wasn’t “.
I'll take a note of it so I don't forget.🫡

My glasses

I usually wear glasses because I have bad eyesight.

The sun has been feeling blinding when I drive lately , so I went to buy glasses with colored lenses today.

I was not sure which one to choose, I ended up buying glasses with brownish-grey lenses.

It’s a very cool color and I love my new glasses.

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This reminds me that I have to replace my old sunglasses :)

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LeahLeah

today

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Thank you for correcting me.😊

You should go to a glasses shop if you have time.
I hope you find a great pair of glasses.

My glasses

I usually wear glasses because I have bad eyesight.

The sun has been feeling blinding me when I drive lately, so I went to buy glasses with tinted lenses today. ¶
(or The sun has been too bright and bothering me
when I drive lately , so I went to buy glasses with colortinted lenses today.)

1. The sun has been feeling blinding would means that it is the sun that is being blinded.
2. Colored lenses usually refer to contact lenses while tinted lenses are intended for blocking the sun.

I was not sure which one to choose, I ended up buying glasses with brownish-grey lenses.

It’s very cool color and I love my new glasses.

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Why not Vermeer Blue? 😉 but glad you liked them all the same!

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I very much disagree with the first point here - that would not mean that the sun is being blinded at all. You would never say "I have been feeling blinding" to say that you have been blinded.

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LeahLeah

today

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Thank you for correcting me.😊

Wow 😆 I think if there are Vermeer Blue color of glasses, it’s very expensive.

I absolutely can't buy them because my salary is too low.😩

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I usually wear glasses because I have bad eyesight.


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The sun has been feeling blinding when I drive lately , so I went to buy glasses with colored lenses today.


The sun has been feeling blinding me when I drive lately, so I went to buy glasses with tinted lenses today. ¶
(or The sun has been too bright and bothering me
when I drive lately , so I went to buy glasses with colortinted lenses today.)

1. The sun has been feeling blinding would means that it is the sun that is being blinded. 2. Colored lenses usually refer to contact lenses while tinted lenses are intended for blocking the sun.

The sun has been feeling blinding when I drive lately , so I went to buy glasses with colored lenses today.

The sun has been feelingfelt blinding when I've been driveing lately , so I went to buy glasses with colored lenses today.

This is how I'd phrase it. I don't think the original is strictly wrong but it sounded a little awkward to me.

The sun has been feeling blinding when I drive lately , so I went to buy glasses with colored lenses today.

You can also say: "The sun's glare has felt much more blinding lately..."

I was not sure which one to choose, I ended up buying glasses with brownish-grey lenses.


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Although I was non't sure which ones to choose, I ended up buying glasses with brownish-grey lenses.

Unless you're trying to strongly emphasise the "not" then you should probably contract it. Otherwise sounds quite strange. This sentence needed something extra to connect the two clauses. I think "although" at the start should achieve that. You could also write "I wasn't sure which ones to choose, but in the end I went for glasses with brownish-grey lenses." Finally, when we talk about glasses we generally talk in the plural. So I think it's more common to here "ones" in reference to glasses than "one". If you want to talk about them in the singular then you'd talk about a "pair of glasses".

I was not sure which one to choose, so I ended up buying glasses with brownish-grey lenses.

Personally, I would use "wasn't" instead of "was not" here, because "was not" sounds a little too formal or robotic.

It’s very cool color and I love my new glasses.


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It’s a very cool color and I love my new glasses.

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It’s a very cool color and I love my new glasses.

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