My future plan

Defy

May 27, 2024

My future plan

I am currently a first-year student pursuing a degree in Computer Science. My primary goal is to successfully complete my course and gain the necessary skills and knowledge in my field. After graduation, I plan to find a job related to computer science, where I can apply what I've learned and gain practical experience. I aim to work in the tech industry for about 2 to 3 years. During this period, I want to build my career, and develop my professional skills, for our future. After gaining enough experience and stability in my job, I plan to marry my girlfriend. We have discussed a bit about our future together, and I want to buy a house in a location that she loves. I want to create a comfortable and happy home where we can enjoy our life together. We have decided that we do not want to have children, as we prefer to focus on each other and our shared experiences. Our dream is to live in Thailand, where we can enjoy a peaceful life. I want my girlfriend to be able to quit her job if she wishes, so I am committed to working hard and earning enough money to support both of us. I will ensure that we have a stable and happy life, where we can enjoy our time together and achieve our dreams. By working hard in my career and making thoughtful decisions, I am confident that we can create a wonderful future together.

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thealchemist

My future plan

I am currently a first-year student pursuing a degree in Computer Science.

My primary goal is to successfully complete my course and gain the necessary skills and knowledge in my field.

After graduation, I plan to find a job related to computer science, where I can apply what I've learned and gain practical experience.

I aim to work in the tech industry for about 2 to 3 years.

During this period, I want to build my career, and develop my professional skills,; for ~~our~~the sake of my future.

After gaining enough experience and stability in my job, I plan to marry my girlfriend.

We have discussed a bit about our future together, and I want to buy a house in a location that she loves.

I want to create a comfortable and happy home where we can enjoy our life together.

We have decided that we do not want to have children, as we prefer to focus on each other and our shared experiences.

Our dream is to live in Thailand, where we can enjoy a peaceful life.

I want my girlfriend to be able to quit her job if she wishes, so I am committed to working hard and earning enough money to support both of us.

I will ensure that we have a stable and happy life, where we can enjoy our time together and achieve our dreams.

By working hard in my career and making thoughtful decisions, I am confident that we can create a wonderful future together.

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Sounds like a wonderful plan :)

angellista

I am currently a first-year student pursuing a degree in Computer Science.

My primary (suggestion: main) goal is to successfully complete my course and gain the necessary skills and knowledge in my field.

After graduation, I plan to find a job related to computer science, where I can apply what I've learned and gain practical experience.

I aim to work in the tech industry for about 2 to 3 years.

During this period, I want to build my career, and develop my professional skills, for ~~our~~my future.

too many commas

After gaining enough experience and stability in my job, I plan to marry my girlfriend.

Suggestion: After gaining enough experience and stability in my job, I plan to get married with my girlfriend.

We have discussed a bit about our future together, and I want to buy a house in a location that she loves.

I want to create a comfortable and happy home where we can enjoy our life together.

We have decided that we do not want to have children, as we prefer to focus on each other and our shared experiences.

Our dream is to live in Thailand, where we can enjoy a peaceful life.

I want my girlfriend to be able to quit her job if she wishes, so I am committed to working hard and earning enough money to support both of us.

I will ensure that we have a stable and happy life, where we can enjoy our time together and achieve our dreams.

By working hard in my career and making thoughtful decisions, I am confident that we can create a wonderful future together.

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Great job! I hope you achieve your goals!

Kasumii

My goals for the future ~~plan~~

I am currently a first-year student pursuing a degree in Computer Science.

My primary goal is to successfully complete my course and gain the ~~necessary~~ skills and knowledge necessary to succeed in my field.

After graduation, I plan to find a job related to computer science~~, where I can~~ that allows me to apply what I've learned and gain practical experience.

I aim to work in the tech industry for about 2 to 3 years.

During this period, I want to build my career, and develop my professional skills, for ~~our~~my future.

I think because you haven't mentioned your girlfriend yet, you can write either "my" or "...for my future with my girlfriend"

After gaining enough experience and stability in my job, I plan to marry my girlfriend.

We have discussed ~~a bit about~~ our future together, and I want to buy a house in a location that she loves.

I want to create a comfortable and happy home where we can enjoy our life together.

We have decided that we do not want to have children, as we prefer to focus on each other and our shared experiences.

Our dream is to live in Thailand, where we can enjoy a peaceful life.

I want my girlfriend to be able to quit her job if she w~~ishes~~ants to, so I am committed to working hard and earning enough money to support both of us.

I will ensure that we have a stable and happy life, where we can enjoy our time together and achieve our dreams.

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Sounds like a wonderful future :)

Japanada

My future plan

I am currently a first-year student pursuing a degree in Computer Science.

My primary goal is to successfully complete my course and gain the necessary skills and knowledge in my field.

After graduation, I plan to find a job related to computer science, where I can apply what I've learned and gain practical experience.

I aim to work in the tech industry for about 2 to 3 years.

During this period, I want to build my career, and develop my professional skills, for ~~our~~the future.

After gaining enough experience and stability in my job, I plan to marry my girlfriend.

We have discussed ~~a bit about~~ our future together a bit, and I want to buy a house in a location that she loves.

I want to create a comfortable and happy home where we can enjoy our life together.

We have decided ~~that we do not wa~~not to have children, as we prefer to focus on each other and our shared experiences.

Our dream is to live in Thailand, where we can enjoy a peaceful life.

I want my girlfriend to be able to quit her job if she wishes, so I am committed to working hard and earning enough money to support both of us.

I will ensure that we have a stable and happy life, where we can enjoy our time together and achieve our dreams.

By working hard in my career and making thoughtful decisions, I am confident that we can create a wonderful future together.

Pandas62

My ~~future plan~~Plan for the Future

Might make more sense as “My Plan for the Future” since “My Future Plan” suggests that you are talking about a plan that you will have in the future, instead of a plan you currently have about the future.

I am currently a first-year student pursuing a degree in Computer Science.

My primary goal is to successfully complete my course and gain the necessary skills and knowledge in my field.

After graduation, I plan to find a job related to computer science, where I can apply what I've learned and gain practical experience.

I aim to work in the tech industry for about 2 to 3 years.

During this period, I want to build my career, and develop my professional skills, for our future.

I think (but not entirely sure) that the commas are unnecessary here.