Dec. 30, 2020
My Future
I don't usually have clear visions of how I want my future to be. However, I can think of some things I would enjoy.
I picture myself in a small house far away from the city. I like small places. However, I want my future house to feel like a home, not some modern house that seems like nobody lives there. I would like to have a small amount of belongings, only keeping what I really like and need. And lots of plants.
I love being alone and I enjoy being in silence, so I would prefer to be far away from the city. I would love to live surrounded by nature.
I don't usually have a clear visions of howwhat I want my future to be.
However, I can think of somea few things I would enjoy.
I picture myself in a small house, far away from the city.
HoweverAdditionally, I want my future house to feel like a home, not some modern house that seems likeappears as if nobody lives there.
What you had was fine. This is smoother.
I would like to have a small amount ofvery few belongings, only keeping only what I really like and need.
smoother
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Looked good already. I just polished your diamond a bit.
Jan. 1, 2021
Thank you!!
And lots of plants.
This is ok to say, but usually you're not supposed to start a sentence with 'and' when you're writing.
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Really good!
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My Future |
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I don't usually have clear visions of how I want my future to be. I don't usually have a clear vision |
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However, I can think of some things I would enjoy. However, I can think of |
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I picture myself in a small house far away from the city. I picture myself in a small house, far away from the city. |
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I like small places. |
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However, I want my future house to feel like a home, not some modern house that seems like nobody lives there.
What you had was fine. This is smoother. |
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I would like to have a small amount of belongings, only keeping what I really like and need. I would like to have smoother |
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And lots of plants. And lots of plants. This is ok to say, but usually you're not supposed to start a sentence with 'and' when you're writing. |
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I love being alone and I enjoy being in silence, so I would prefer to be far away from the city. |
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I would love to live surrounded by nature. |
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