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lorentta

March 28, 2025

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my frist post

Today i will try write this post in the something in english without traslate.
well i go to present my likes or dislikes at the moment i don´t idea or something to talk.

i like read book about romance, drama, distopias and i love read while i drink tea mi favorite tea is manzanilla is the my favorite activities in the word along with whatch movies and series and listed music i love all music i don´t music stole.

and now i write this thinghs i don´t like, i don´t like go to the meeting whit the adult person because they usually get a drunk and i don´t like this
other thingh why i don´t like is is sometimes food picket, aullama and yuca.

and this all
ty for read


el día de hoy voy a tratar de escribir en este post sobre algo en ingles tratando de no usar traductor.
bueno voy a hablarles sobre lo que me gusta y me disgusta porque por el momento no se me ocurre nada que hablar .

me gusta leer libros sobre romance drama y distopias y yo amo leer cuando estoy tomando té mi favorito es el de manzanilla esa es de mis actividades favoritas en el mundo junto con ver películas y series y escuchar música y no tengo gusto definido de música.
y ahora voy a escribor las cosas que no me gustan, no me gustan las reuniones con personas adultas porque e emborracha y no me gusta eso
y otra cosa que no me gusta son algunas comidas como los pepinillos aullama y yuca

y eso es todo
gracias por leer

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mMy frirst post

Today iI will try write this post in the something in eEnglish without translateing in this post.

The word "I" is always capitalised. "English" is what's called a proper noun, since it names a specific thing, so is also usually capitalised.

wWell i go, I'm going to present my likes orand dislikes , at the moment iI don´t have another idea or someanything to talk about.

iI like read books about romance, drama, diystopias, and iI love to read while i drink tea mi. My favorite tea is manzanilla is th. These are my favorite activities in the word along with whatching movies and series and listedning to music i. I love all music i, I don´t steal music stole.

"Steal music" makes people think about actually robbing CDs from stores. If it's just downloading illegally that you're talking about, people usually call that "pirating".

aAnd now iI'll write thisabout thinghs iI don´t like, i. I don´t like to go to the meetingparties whit theh adult persons because they usually get a drunk and iI don´t like this
o


O
ther thinghs why iich I don´t like is isnclude sometimes food picket (?), aullama (?) and yuca (?).

"meeting" on its own is more about business or work.

Not sure what picket, aullama and yuca are meant to be - are these local dishes?

Watch out for your articles (The/a/an).

and this all ¶
ty
That's all, thank you for reading.

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Good effort for your first post, pay attention to the articles and when words should start with a capital letter.

Today i, I will try to write this post in the something in eEnglish without translateing.

well iWhen I go to present my likes or dislikes at the moment i, I don´t have an idea or something to talksay.

i like to read books about romance, drama, distopias and i love to read while i drink tea. mi favorite tea is manzanilla is theand my favorite activities in the word along withre whatching movies and series and listeding to music. i love all music i don´t music stole.

and now i will write this thinghs that i don´t like,. i don´t like going to the meetingmeet-ups whit theh adults person because they usually get a drunk and i don´t like this ¶
other thingh why i don´t like is is sometimes food picket, aullama and yuca.
certain foods.

Feedback

It was very difficult to correct.

my frirst post

tiny spelling error

Today iI will try to (or "and") write this post in the something in eEnglish and without using a translateor.

infinitives (to write) after certain verbs, in this case, "try", are written with "to" or "and" depending on if you are following British or North American English grammar.

iI like to read books about romance, drama, distopias, and iI love to read while iI drink tea mi. My favorite tea is manzanilla is the m. My favorite activities in the wordld, along with whatching movies and, is watching TV series and listedning to music i. I love all music i, and I don´t steal music stole.

1st personal pronoun ("I") is capitalized; when you join two complete sentences ("I like to read books about romance, drama, distopias") and ("I love to read while I drink tea") in this way (you are "co-ordinating them") the "and" putting them together usually follows a comma (" x, and y")

and now iI write thill list thinghs that i don´t like, i: I don´t like to go to the meetings whit theh adult persons, because they usually get a drunk, and iI don´t like this
other thing
h why i. Sometimes, I don´'t like is is sometimes food picket, aullama and, or yuca.

and that is all .
ty for
the read

Feedback

This is good! I'd work on your verb forms and how to combine them when certain verbs (example: I like) take other verbs as their objects (example: I like to run), as well as on conjugating verbs for tense.

my frist post


my frirst post

tiny spelling error

mMy frirst post

Today i will try write this post in the something in english without traslate.


Today iI will try to (or "and") write this post in the something in eEnglish and without using a translateor.

infinitives (to write) after certain verbs, in this case, "try", are written with "to" or "and" depending on if you are following British or North American English grammar.

Today i, I will try to write this post in the something in eEnglish without translateing.

Today iI will try write this post in the something in eEnglish without translateing in this post.

The word "I" is always capitalised. "English" is what's called a proper noun, since it names a specific thing, so is also usually capitalised.

well i go to present my likes or dislikes at the moment i don´t idea or something to talk.


well iWhen I go to present my likes or dislikes at the moment i, I don´t have an idea or something to talksay.

wWell i go, I'm going to present my likes orand dislikes , at the moment iI don´t have another idea or someanything to talk about.

i like read book about romance, drama, distopias and i love read while i drink tea mi favorite tea is manzanilla is the my favorite activities in the word along with whatch movies and series and listed music i love all music i don´t music stole.


iI like to read books about romance, drama, distopias, and iI love to read while iI drink tea mi. My favorite tea is manzanilla is the m. My favorite activities in the wordld, along with whatching movies and, is watching TV series and listedning to music i. I love all music i, and I don´t steal music stole.

1st personal pronoun ("I") is capitalized; when you join two complete sentences ("I like to read books about romance, drama, distopias") and ("I love to read while I drink tea") in this way (you are "co-ordinating them") the "and" putting them together usually follows a comma (" x, and y")

i like to read books about romance, drama, distopias and i love to read while i drink tea. mi favorite tea is manzanilla is theand my favorite activities in the word along withre whatching movies and series and listeding to music. i love all music i don´t music stole.

iI like read books about romance, drama, diystopias, and iI love to read while i drink tea mi. My favorite tea is manzanilla is th. These are my favorite activities in the word along with whatching movies and series and listedning to music i. I love all music i, I don´t steal music stole.

"Steal music" makes people think about actually robbing CDs from stores. If it's just downloading illegally that you're talking about, people usually call that "pirating".

and now i write this thinghs i don´t like, i don´t like go to the meeting whit the adult person because they usually get a drunk and i don´t like this other thingh why i don´t like is is sometimes food picket, aullama and yuca.


and now iI write thill list thinghs that i don´t like, i: I don´t like to go to the meetings whit theh adult persons, because they usually get a drunk, and iI don´t like this
other thing
h why i. Sometimes, I don´'t like is is sometimes food picket, aullama and, or yuca.

and now i will write this thinghs that i don´t like,. i don´t like going to the meetingmeet-ups whit theh adults person because they usually get a drunk and i don´t like this ¶
other thingh why i don´t like is is sometimes food picket, aullama and yuca.
certain foods.

aAnd now iI'll write thisabout thinghs iI don´t like, i. I don´t like to go to the meetingparties whit theh adult persons because they usually get a drunk and iI don´t like this
o


O
ther thinghs why iich I don´t like is isnclude sometimes food picket (?), aullama (?) and yuca (?).

"meeting" on its own is more about business or work. Not sure what picket, aullama and yuca are meant to be - are these local dishes? Watch out for your articles (The/a/an).

and this all ty for read


and that is all .
ty for
the read

and this all ¶
ty
That's all, thank you for reading.

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