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kazu

June 26, 2020

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My friend's birthday

On June 22th, it was my friend's birthday. So, we went to a beer garden to celebrate his birthday, and we had prepared a birthday plate to surprise him. He was happy that my another friend brought the plate, and at the same time I was also surprised because my name was written on the plate. Actually, it's my birthday on June 29th, so my friends had prepared it without telling me. I was really happy about that:)

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My friend's birthday

On June 22th, it was my friend's birthday.

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Good job! Nice story!

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ertakeko

June 26, 2020

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On June 22th, it was my friend's birthday.

*June 22nd

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summerstorm

June 26, 2020

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twenty second = 22nd <-- Note the last letters of "second" are "nd"
eighteenth = 18th <-- Note the last letters of "eighteenth" are "th"

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kazu

June 27, 2020

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Thanks!

My friend's birthday

On June 22th, it was my friend's birthday.

So, we went to a beer garden to celebrate his birthday, and we had prepared a birthday plate to surprise him.

Not sure what a birthday plate is to be honest.

He was happy that my another friend brought the plate, and at the same time I was also surprised because my name was written on the plate.

Actually, it's my birthday on June 29th, so my friends had prepared it without telling me.

I was really happy about that:)

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This was really good. Well done :)

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kazu

June 27, 2020

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Thank you so much!

My friend's birthday


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On June 22th, it was my friend's birthday.


On June 22th, it was my friend's birthday.

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So, we went to a beer garden to celebrate his birthday, and we had prepared a birthday plate to surprise him.


So, we went to a beer garden to celebrate his birthday, and we had prepared a birthday plate to surprise him.

Not sure what a birthday plate is to be honest.

He was happy that my another friend brought the plate, and at the same time I was also surprised because my name was written on the plate.


He was happy that my another friend brought the plate, and at the same time I was also surprised because my name was written on the plate.

Actually, it's my birthday on June 29th, so my friends had prepared it without telling me.


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I was really happy about that:)


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