Dec. 21, 2023
My friend who loves Hawaiian dance #3
This is a continuation from my last post.
これは、私の前回の投稿の続きです。
My friend joined a dance festival the other day, even though she had had a stroke three months ago.
私の友達は三か月前に脳梗塞になってしまったにもかかわらず、先日、ダンスフェスティバルに参加しました。
She could barely walk, but just in case, she used a wheelchair on the stage and danced with only her arms.
彼女は、なんとか歩けましたが念のため車椅子を使い、腕だけで踊りました。
She looked brilliant in a blue dress, putting her hair up.
彼女は、ブルーのドレスで髪をアップにまとめ、とても輝いて見えました。
I got chocked up when her performance finished.
彼女のパフォーマンスが終わった時、感動で胸がいっぱいになりました。
I learned strong will that never give up from her.
私は、彼女からあきらめない強い意志を学びました。
She is very positive. I should mimic her positive mindset.
彼女は、とても前向きです。彼女を見習わなくちゃ。
My friend who loves Hawaiian dance #3
This is a continuation from my last post.
これは、私の前回の投稿の続きです。 My friend joined a dance festival the other day, even though she had had a stroke three months ago.
私の友達は三か月前に脳梗塞になってしまったにもかかわらず、先日、ダンスフェスティバルに参加しました。
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She could barely walk, butso just in case, she used a wheelchair on the stage and danced with only her arms.
彼女は、なんとか歩けましたが念のため車椅子を使い、腕だけで踊りました。
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She looked brilliant in a blue dress, puttingwith her hair put up.
彼女は、ブルーのドレスで髪をアップにまとめ、とても輝いて見えました。 I got chocked up when her performance finished.
彼女のパフォーマンスが終わった時、感動で胸がいっぱいになりました。
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From watching her, I learned a strong will that, never to give up from her.
私は、彼女からあきらめない強い意志を学びました。 She is very positive.
I should mimic hertake a leaf from her book and adopt a positive mindset.
Dec. 21, 2023
Thank you so much!
My friend who loves Hawaiian dance #3
This is a continuation from my last post.
これは、私の前回の投稿の続きです。 My friend joined a dance festival the other day, even though she had had a stroke three months ago.
私の友達は三か月前に脳梗塞になってしまったにもかかわらず、先日、ダンスフェスティバルに参加しました。
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She could barely walk, but just in case,so she used a wheelchair on the stage and danced with only her arms.
I'm not sure what "just in case" was trying to express, but the English meaning is like "a backup if something were to happen."
彼女は、なんとか歩けましたが念のため車椅子を使い、腕だけで踊りました。
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She looked brilliant in aher blue dress, putting her hair and updo.
彼女のパフォーマンスが終わった時、感動で胸がいっぱいになりました。
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I learned from her to be strong -will thated and never give up from her.
The expression is correct but not used very often in this context. It sounds more natural if you say something like "She showed me how to be strong and never give up."
私は、彼女からあきらめない強い意志を学びました。 She is very positive.
I should mimic herlearn to have a positive mindset like her.
You can also combine this sentence with your previous sentence for something like "She has a very positive mindset and I should learn to be more like her."
Dec. 21, 2023
Thank you so much for the correction and giving me natural sentences.
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これは、私の前回の投稿の続きです。 My friend joined a dance festival the other day, even though she had had a stroke three months ago. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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私の友達は三か月前に脳梗塞になってしまったにもかかわらず、先日、ダンスフェスティバルに参加しました。 She could barely walk, but just in case, she used a wheelchair on the stage and danced with only her arms. 私の友達は三か月前に脳梗塞になってしまったにもかかわらず、先日、ダンスフェスティバルに参加しました。 I'm not sure what "just in case" was trying to express, but the English meaning is like "a backup if something were to happen." 私の友達は三か月前に脳梗塞になってしまったにもかかわらず、先日、ダンスフェスティバルに参加しました。 |
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彼女は、なんとか歩けましたが念のため車椅子を使い、腕だけで踊りました。 She looked brilliant in a blue dress, putting her hair up. 彼女は、なんとか歩けましたが念のため車椅子を使い、腕だけで踊りました。 彼女は、なんとか歩けましたが念のため車椅子を使い、腕だけで踊りました。 |
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彼女は、ブルーのドレスで髪をアップにまとめ、とても輝いて見えました。 I got chocked up when her performance finished. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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彼女のパフォーマンスが終わった時、感動で胸がいっぱいになりました。 I learned strong will that never give up from her. 彼女のパフォーマンスが終わった時、感動で胸がいっぱいになりました。 The expression is correct but not used very often in this context. It sounds more natural if you say something like "She showed me how to be strong and never give up." 彼女のパフォーマンスが終わった時、感動で胸がいっぱいになりました。 |
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私は、彼女からあきらめない強い意志を学びました。 She is very positive. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I should mimic her positive mindset. I should You can also combine this sentence with your previous sentence for something like "She has a very positive mindset and I should learn to be more like her." I should |
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彼女は、とても前向きです。彼女を見習わなくちゃ。 |
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