July 1, 2024
My Friend Keiko(80)
Yesterday, I attended the English cafe meet up nearby town, which was my second time.
Yesterday's topic was "The event that changed your life"
My friend Keiko talked about a very surprising story.
Keiko is a huge fan of the group Red Hot Chili Pepper.
She said she wanted to go to America for their concert a long time ago.(Maybe over 10 years ago)
And she started going to an English school because she wanted to understand their English.
However, her husband didn't want her to go to the English school and America.
They argued about it for a long time and they ended up getting divorced.
She is still a fan of the musician and she is still single.
She said that it was good for her to get divorced.
Listening to her story, everybody was surprised, but laughed out loud.
昨日、近くの町の英会話カフェミートアップに行きました。二回目でした。
昨日のトピックは、「あなたの人生を変えた出来事は何ですか？」という質問でした。
私の友達ケイコは、とても驚きの話をしました。
彼女は、「レッドホットチリペッパー」というグループの大ファンです。
彼女は、ずっと前（たぶん10ね以上前）彼らのコンサートを見にアメリカに行きたかった。と言いました。
そして、彼女は、彼らの英語を理解したいから、英会話スクールに行き始めました。
でも、彼女の旦那さんは、彼女に英会話スクールにもアメリカにも行ってほしくなかったそうです。
彼らは長い間そのことについて言い争って、結局、離婚することになりました。
彼女は、今でもまだ、そのミュージシャンのファンで、今だに独身です。
彼女は、別れて良かったと言いました。
彼女の話を聞いてみんな驚きましたが、大笑いしました。
My Friend Keiko
Yesterday, I attended the English cafe meet up nearby my town, which was my second time.
Yesterday's topic was "The event that changed your life."
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My friend Keiko talked aboutold a very surprising story.
Keiko is a huge fan of the group Red Hot Chili Peppers.
She said she wanted to go to America for their concert a long time ago.
(Maybe over 10 years ago)
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And she started going to an English school because she wanted to understand their Englishwhat they were saying.
However, her husband didn't want her to go to the English school and America.
They argued about it for a long time and they ended up getting divorced.
She is still a fan of the musician and she is still single.
She said that it was good for her to get divorced.
Listening to her story, everybody was surprised, but laughed out loud.
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Good for her! I hope she gets to go sometime
July 2, 2024
Thank you so much for your corrections!
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Keiko is a huge fan of the group Red Hot Chili Peppers.
She said she wanted to go to America forto attend their concert a long time ago.
(Maybe over 10 years ago)
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And she started going to an English language school because she wanted to understand their English.
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However, her husband didn't want her to go to the English school and, let alone America.
They argued about it for a long time and they ended up getting divorced.
She is still a fan of the musiciband and she is still single.
She said that it was good for her to get divorced.
Listening to her story, everybody was surprised, but laughed out loud.
Feedback
I hope she got to see the concert!
July 1, 2024
Thank you so much for your corrections!
July 1, 2024
She got to go to America to see their concert ^^
My Friend Keiko
Yesterday, I attended the English cafe meet up in the nearby town, which was my second time.
Yesterday's topic was "The event that changed your life" My friend Keiko talked about a very surprising story.
Keiko is a huge fan of the group Red Hot Chili Pepper.
She said she wanted to go to America for their concert a long time ago.
(Maybe over 10 years ago)
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And she started going to an English school because she wantedlearning English by going to a school which teaches English just to understand their Englishm.
However, her husband didn't want her to go to the English school and America.
They argued about it for a long time and they ended up getting divorced.
She is still a fan of the musician and she is still single.
She said that it was good for her to get divorced.
Listening to her story, everybody was surprised, but laughed out loud.
July 1, 2024
Thank you so much for your corrections!
My Friend Keiko
Yesterday, I attended thean English cafe meet up nearby town, which was my second time going.
Yesterday's topic was "The event that changed your life"
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My friend Keiko talked about a very surprising story.
Keiko is a huge fan of the group Red Hot Chili Peppers.
She said she wanted to go to America for their concert a long time ago.
(Maybe fover 10 years ago)
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And she started going to an English school because she wanted to understand their English.
However, her husband didn't want her to go to the English school and America.
She is still a fan of the musicians/group and she is still single.
She said that it was good for her to get divorced.
Listening to her story, everybody was surprised, but laughed out loud.
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Very good!
July 1, 2024
Thank you so much for your corrections!
Yesterday, I attended thean English cafe meet up in a nearby town, which. It was my second time.
If you say "the English cafe meet up" in your introduction sentence, it means that you attended a specific English cafe meet up that's known to both you and your readers. But we readers don't know about it yet. So I feel like it's more natural to say "an English cafe."
Yesterday's topic was "The event that changed your life" My friend Keiko talked about a very surprising story.
Keiko is a huge fan of the group Red Hot Chili Peppers.
She said she wanted to go to America forto see their concert a long time ago.
(Maybe over 10 years ago) And she started going to an English school because she wanted to understand their English.
However, her husband didn't want her to go to the English school and America.
They argued about it for a long time and they ended up getting divorced.
She is still a fan of the musiciangroup, and she is still single.
A musician is a single person, but Red Hot Chili Peppers is a group (or "band").
She said that it was good for her to get divorced.
Listening to her story, everybody was surprised, but laughed out loud.
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Haha, wow, yes, that is surprising. Your friend sounds very cool. As an American, I'm glad to hear that she wanted to go to America and that she likes Red Hot Chili Peppers so much. 😁
July 1, 2024
Thank you so much for your corrections! That might sound crazy, but I feel like it's kind of inspiring lol
July 1, 2024
I think so too! She wanted to pursue a dream and didn't let her husband stop her from pursuing it. That takes a lot of courage. 👏
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