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Sept. 22, 2023

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My fourth journal: "How I am learning the English language"

Hi every one who read my journal.
Today I don't have lessons at my universaty, because today my classmate hiking all day. I can't because I need word from morning to afternoon. It's terrible. But I planing on this weekend hiking. It's not difficult route. I don't need some special shoes or clothes. I need just sport costume, sport shoes, some food, bottle of water and good weather. That's all.
Today my plan is that:
- work,
- make a lunch,
- go to the gym,
- go to the market
- learning English lenguage.
I think that's all.
Oh, I change the book. I started read (in this place I need use "started" and "read [red]"?). Firtst book was "The Little Prince" but it's little bit boring. I started read manga "One Punch Man". This isn't a book. This is a comiс. The Little Prince for me was easy in big piece, but One Punch Man more difficult. But I like reading the comic. Each episode was so short and I read 3 or 4 episodes at a moment.It's enough for me.

Thank you for reading my journal.

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My fourth journal: "How I am learning the English language"

It's terrible.

That's all.

I think that's all.

This isn't a book.

This is a comiс.

Thank you for reading my journal.

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Bair

Sept. 22, 2023

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I can't go because I need word from morning to afternoon.to study all day.

I am not sure if that is what you want to say.

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Bair

Sept. 22, 2023

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But II was planning to go on this weekend hiking.e.

It's not difficult route.


It's not a difficult route. It's not a difficult route.

My fourth journal: "How I am learning the English language"


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Hi every one who read my journal.


Hi every one who reads my journal. Hi every one who reads my journal.

Today I don't have lessons at my universaty, because today my classmate hiking all day.


Today, I don't have lessons at my universaity, because today my classmat will be hiking all day. Today, I don't have lessons at my university because my class will be hiking all day.

I can't because I need word from morning to afternoon.


I can't go because I need word from morning to afternoon.to study all day. I can't go because I need to study all day.

I am not sure if that is what you want to say.

It's terrible.


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But I planing on this weekend hiking.


But II was planning to go on this weekend hiking.e. I was planning to go on this weekend hike.

I don't need some special shoes or clothes.


I don't need someany special shoes or clothes. I don't need any special shoes or clothes.

I need just sport costume, sport shoes, some food, bottle of water and good weather.


I need justjust need sports costumelothes, sport shoes, some food, a bottle of water and good weather. I just need sports clothes, sport shoes, some food, a bottle of water and good weather.

That's all.


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Today my plan is that: - work, - make a lunch, - go to the gym, - go to the market - learning English lenguage.


Today my plan is thatis: - work, - make a lunch, - go to the gym, - go to the market - learning English lenguage. Today my plan is this: - work, - make lunch, - go to the gym, - go to the market - learn English.

I think that's all.


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Oh, I change the book.


Oh, I changed the book. Oh, I changed the book.

I started read (in this place I need use "started" and "read [red]"?).


I started to read (in this place I need use "started" and "read [red]"?)these books. I started to read these books.

Firtst book was "The Little Prince" but it's little bit boring.


Firtst book was "The Little Prince" but it's was a little bit boring. Firtst book was "The Little Prince" but it was a little bit boring.

I started read manga "One Punch Man".


I also started reading the mangazine "One Punch Man". I also started reading the magazine "One Punch Man".

This isn't a book.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This is a comiс.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The Little Prince for me was easy in big piece, but One Punch Man more difficult.


The Little Prince for me was easy in big piece, but One Punch Man was more difficult. The Little Prince was easy but One Punch Man was more difficult.

But I like reading the comic.


But I liked reading the comic. But I liked reading the comic.

Each episode was so short and I read 3 or 4 episodes at a moment.It's enough for me.


Each episode was so short and I read 3 or 4 episodes at a moment.It' That was enough for me. Each episode was short and I read 3 or 4 episodes at a moment. That was enough for me.

Thank you for reading my journal.


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