Bair's avatar
Bair

Sept. 22, 2023

1
My fourth journal: "How I am learning the English language"

Hi every one who read my journal.
Today I don't have lessons at my universaty, because today my classmate hiking all day. I can't because I need word from morning to afternoon. It's terrible. But I planing on this weekend hiking. It's not difficult route. I don't need some special shoes or clothes. I need just sport costume, sport shoes, some food, bottle of water and good weather. That's all.
Today my plan is that:
- work,
- make a lunch,
- go to the gym,
- go to the market
- learning English lenguage.
I think that's all.
Oh, I change the book. I started read (in this place I need use "started" and "read [red]"?). Firtst book was "The Little Prince" but it's little bit boring. I started read manga "One Punch Man". This isn't a book. This is a comiс. The Little Prince for me was easy in big piece, but One Punch Man more difficult. But I like reading the comic. Each episode was so short and I read 3 or 4 episodes at a moment.It's enough for me.

Thank you for reading my journal.

Corrections

My fourth journal: "How I am learning the English language"

Hi every one who reads my journal.

Today, I don't have lessons at my universaity, because today my classmat will be hiking all day.

I can't go because I need word from morning to afternoon.to study all day.

I am not sure if that is what you want to say.

It's terrible.

But II was planning to go on this weekend hiking.e.

It's not a difficult route.

I don't need someany special shoes or clothes.

I need justjust need sports costumelothes, sport shoes, some food, a bottle of water and good weather.

That's all.

Today my plan is thatis:
- work,

- make
a lunch,
- go to the gym,

- go to the market

- learn
ing English lenguage.

I think that's all.

Oh, I changed the book.

I started to read (in this place I need use "started" and "read [red]"?)these books.

Firtst book was "The Little Prince" but it's was a little bit boring.

I also started reading the mangazine "One Punch Man".

This isn't a book.

This is a comiс.

The Little Prince for me was easy in big piece, but One Punch Man was more difficult.

But I liked reading the comic.

Each episode was so short and I read 3 or 4 episodes at a moment.It' That was enough for me.

Thank you for reading my journal.

Bair's avatar
Bair

Sept. 22, 2023

1

I can't go because I need word from morning to afternoon.to study all day.

I wanted to say: I can't go because I need to work from morning to aftefnoon.
Is it correct?

Bair's avatar
Bair

Sept. 22, 2023

1

But II was planning to go on this weekend hiking.e.

Why I can't use "hiking"?

It's not difficult route.


It's not a difficult route.

My fourth journal: "How I am learning the English language"


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Hi every one who read my journal.


Hi every one who reads my journal.

Today I don't have lessons at my universaty, because today my classmate hiking all day.


Today, I don't have lessons at my universaity, because today my classmat will be hiking all day.

I can't because I need word from morning to afternoon.


I can't go because I need word from morning to afternoon.to study all day.

I am not sure if that is what you want to say.

It's terrible.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But I planing on this weekend hiking.


But II was planning to go on this weekend hiking.e.

I don't need some special shoes or clothes.


I don't need someany special shoes or clothes.

I need just sport costume, sport shoes, some food, bottle of water and good weather.


I need justjust need sports costumelothes, sport shoes, some food, a bottle of water and good weather.

That's all.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today my plan is that: - work, - make a lunch, - go to the gym, - go to the market - learning English lenguage.


Today my plan is thatis:
- work,

- make
a lunch,
- go to the gym,

- go to the market

- learn
ing English lenguage.

I think that's all.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Oh, I change the book.


Oh, I changed the book.

I started read (in this place I need use "started" and "read [red]"?).


I started to read (in this place I need use "started" and "read [red]"?)these books.

Firtst book was "The Little Prince" but it's little bit boring.


Firtst book was "The Little Prince" but it's was a little bit boring.

I started read manga "One Punch Man".


I also started reading the mangazine "One Punch Man".

This isn't a book.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This is a comiс.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The Little Prince for me was easy in big piece, but One Punch Man more difficult.


The Little Prince for me was easy in big piece, but One Punch Man was more difficult.

But I like reading the comic.


But I liked reading the comic.

Each episode was so short and I read 3 or 4 episodes at a moment.It's enough for me.


Each episode was so short and I read 3 or 4 episodes at a moment.It' That was enough for me.

Thank you for reading my journal.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.

Go Premium