Feb. 25, 2022
One day, my friend gave me a gift, an expensive pencil.
At that time, I didn't mind to use any kind of pens.
After using the pencil, I was shocked its quality when writing down on my note.
As a result, I got curious about writing instruments, and I have tried to use as many as possible.
I use seven fountain pens that each has different colors these days.
I bought four of them during traveling Japan, Poland and Canada, so I can reminisce my good old days when I use them.
Three pens are my birthday gifts and I got them with their own colors such as amethyst, fluorescent green and blue-green.
With these pens, I can feel different touchs while writing on the paper.
I will try to write as much as possible to use the pens.
My Fountain Pen
One day, my friend gave me a gift,: an expensive pencil.
At thate time, I didn't mind to usecare about any kind of pens.
You refer to pencil before and to pen here. If you mean that you didn't have a mind for pencils and pens, it may be best to say "At the time, I didn't care about any kind of writing instrument."
After using the pencil when writing a note, I was shocked its quality when writing down on my note.
As a result, I gotbecame curious about writing instruments, and. I have tried to use as many as possible.
These days, I use seven fountain pens that each hasve different colors these days.
I bought four of them during traveling in Japan, Poland and Canada, so. I can reminisce myabout the good old days when I use them.
Three pens are mywere birthday gifts and I gotreceived them with their own colors such as amethyst, fluorescent green, and blue-green.
With these pens, I can feel different touchs while writing on the paper.
I willTo have an excuse to use the pens, I try to write as much as possible to use the pens.
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I love fountain pens too! What brand are your pens? I use Lammy and Sailor Pro. My favorite size is Fine.
My Fountain Pen
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At that time, I didn't mind to useusing any kind of pens.
After using the pencil, I was shocked by its quality when writing down on my notes.
As a result, I got curious about writing instruments, and I have tried to use as many as possible.
These days, I use seven fountain pens that each hasve a different colors these days.
I bought four of them duringwhile traveling to Japan, Poland and Canada, so that I can reminisce on my good old days when I use them.
Three pens awere my birthday gifts and I got them with their own colors such as; amethyst, fluorescent green and blue-green.
With these pens, I can feel different touchsensations while writing on the paper.
I will try to write as much as possible toso I can use the pens.
My Fountain Pen
One day, my friend gave me a gift, - an expensive fountain pencil.
By "pencil," do you mean 연필 or 만년필?
Because the title of this journal is "My Fountain Pen," I expected the first sentence to say that your friend gave you a fountain pen as a gift, not a pencil. I was a little confused.
At that time, I didn't mind to use anyhave a preference for a specific kind of pens.
You could also say "I didn't mind using" here. That sounds more natural than "I didn't mind to use."
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As a result, I got curious about other kinds of writing instruments, and I have tried to use as many as possible.
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I think the word you want to use here is "textures," but if I am wrong, please describe it more in the comments and I can try to help!
I will try to write as much as possible to useusing the pens.
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잘 했습니다! 만년필이 아주 예뻐요. 그리고 만년필로 글씨를 쓰는 것은 재밌어요.
My Fountain Pen
One day, my friend gave me a gift, an expensive pencil.
At that time, I didn't mind to useusing any kind of pens.
You could also say "At that time, I didn't mind what kind of pen I used"
After using the pencil, I was shocked by its quality when writing down on my notes.
As a result, I got/became curious about writing instruments, and I have tried to use as many (different ones) as possible.
I use seven fountain pens that each hasve different colors (these days).
I bought four of them duringwhen travelling to Japan, Poland and Canada, so I can reminisce about my good old days when I use them.
Threee three other pens are my birthday gifts and I got them with their own colors such as amethyst, fluorescent green and blue-green.
With these pens, I can feel different touches while writing on the paper.
I will try to write as much as possible to/and use the pens.
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Nice writing :)
At that time, I didn't mind to useing any kind of pens.
After using the pencil, I was shocked by its quality when writing down on my notes.
I use seven fountain pens that each hasve different colors these days.
I bought four of them duringwhile traveling to Japan, Poland and Canada, so I can reminisce myabout the good old days when I use them.
Three pens awere my birthday gifts and I got them with their own colors such as amethyst, fluorescent green and blue-green.
With these pens, I can feel different touchs while writing on the paper.
what you mean by "touchs"?
I will try to write as much as possible to useusing the pens.
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