Aug. 3, 2023
My Former Department
In the spring of 1989, I was transferred to a new department, which was in my hometown.
The department was a little far from downtown. It was about 6.5 kilometers, so around my department were all villages.
The roads to the city from my department were not good. They were bumpy.
My colleagues and I rode bikes to work. (Some of them had houses in the city, but I didn't have a room in the city because I was born and raised in a small village that was far away from the city. So I lived in my workplace).
The department houses were just a few rows of bungalows and looked very shabby.
Inside my workplace, apart from a few paths, there were large open areas with wild grass. In summer, the wild grass grew rapidly, and after a rain, there were many toads in the grass.
My department was surrounded by a square-shaped brick wall. The entrance of my department was in the middle of the western wall.
In 2020, the land that my workplace covered was sold to a real estate company by the local government, so my former department was dismissed.
Now, on the site of my former department, all you can see are many rows of tall residential buildings.
My Former DepartmentBranch
I'm not sure the context of your job. But usually departments would share the same location. If you've been transferred to another location, probably it's another office of the same company which can be called as a branch office.
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The roads to the city from my department were not in good shape.
They were bumpy.
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In 2020, the land thatwhere my workplace coveredwas located at was sold to a real estate company by the local government, so my former department was dismissbanded.
Now, on the site of my former department, all you can see are many rows of tall residential buildings.
My Former Department
In the spring of 1989, I was transferred to a new department, which was in my hometown.
The department was a little farsmall distance from downtown.
It was about 6.5 kilometers, so around my department there were allmany villages.
The roads to the city from my department were not good.
They were bumpy.
My colleagues and I rode bikes to work.
(Some of them had houses in the city, but I didn't have a room in the city because I was born and raised in a small village that was far away from the city.
So I lived in my workplace).
The department houses were just a few rows of bungalows and looked very shabby.
Inside my workplace, apart from a few paths, there were large open areas with wild grass.
In summer, the wild grass grew rapidly, and after a[rain/it rained], there were many toads in the grass.
I would use 'it rained' but both of the options I have put in the correction are correct
My department was surrounded by a square-shaped brick wall.
The entrance of my department was in the middle of the western wall.
In 2020, the land that my workplace covered was sold to a real estate company by the local government, so my former department was dismissed.
Now, on the site of my former department, all you can see are many rows of tall residential buildings.
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My Former Department This sentence has been marked as perfect! My Former I'm not sure the context of your job. But usually departments would share the same location. If you've been transferred to another location, probably it's another office of the same company which can be called as a branch office. |
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The roads to the city from my department were not good. This sentence has been marked as perfect! The roads to the city from my department were not in good shape. |
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The department houses were just a few rows of bungalows and looked very shabby. This sentence has been marked as perfect! The |
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Inside my workplace, apart from a few paths, there were large open areas with wild grass. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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In summer, the wild grass grew rapidly, and after a rain, there were many toads in the grass. In summer, the wild grass grew rapidly, and after I would use 'it rained' but both of the options I have put in the correction are correct In summer, the w |
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The entrance of my department was in the middle of the western wall. This sentence has been marked as perfect! The entrance to |
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In 2020, the land that my workplace covered was sold to a real estate company by the local government, so my former department was dismissed. This sentence has been marked as perfect! In 2020, the land |
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