June 1, 2024
My five entry
City of Buenos Aires, Captail of Argentina, is known for your Europe architectature and vibrant cultural life. stroll throught for your streets is how travel to your french, italian and spain. The neighborhood of the Boca, famous for your colorful house and relationship with tango, is a unmissable destiny to tourist. moreover, the city offers a great variet of theatres, museums and galleries of art, what makes it in a cultural center of Latin America.
The spirit of Buenos Aires too reflects in your passionate hobby for the soccer. Visit the stadium of the Bombonera, home of the club Boca Juniors, is a exciting experience, especially during a game. The cuisine porteña, with your famous roast and your pies, delights are locals and visitors for same. The lively nights of Buenos Aires, full of dancehalls and coffee. invite inmerse in the rhythm of tango and warmth of your people. No doubt, Buenos Aires is a city what captive and leave a impression durable in those who visit it.
My fivefth entry
The City of Buenos Aires, Cthe capitail of Argentina, is known for yourits European architectature and vibrant cultural life.
Since you said “city of…”, you would need to use “the”. You would also need “the” in front of capital, and capital would not be capitalised as it is not the name of a place.
The City of Buenos Aires is a place, or in other words, not a person, so you would use “its” to indicate possession instead of “your”.
Europe = the continent, European = an adjective used to say that something is from or related to Europe.
By strolling throught for your streets is how its streets, you can travel to your freFranche, iItaliany and sSpain.
French, Italian and Spain would all be capitalised, as they are related to countries or are countries, and just about every word like these is capitalised.
French and Italian are also languages, nationalities or used as adjectives to say that something comes from France/Italy. France and Italy are the names of the actual countries, which are what you would want to say here.
The neighborhood of the Boca, famous for yourits colorful houses and relaconnections/hipstory with tango, is an unmissable destiny to touristtourist destination.
It’s famous for more than one colourful house, so it would be colourful houses (plural).
Personally, I think connection or history might be a better word choice than relationship.
Unmissable starts with a vowel, so a becomes an.
Destiny concerns fate, and is more of a spiritual idea of something being meant to happen, and usually relates more so to the future. Destination is the word used for actual places that you go to, like you are talking about here.
You could also say “unmissable destination for tourists”, but “unmissable tourist destination” would be more natural.
mMoreover, the city offers a great variety of theatres, museums and art galleries of art, whatich makes it in a cultural center of Latin America.
Could also say “making it a cultural center…”
The spirit of Buenos Aires tois also reflectsed in yourits passionate hobby for the for soccer.
“Also” would be the better choice here.
“Is… reflected” sounds more natural when saying that something is reflected in something else.
You wouldn’t say passionate hobby, as passion implies that someone really likes something, which typically makes that thing a hobby.
You don’t need to use any kind of article in front of a sport, unless you’re talking about something else related to that sport, like “the soccer game” or “a soccer game”, where the other noun would be “game”.
Visiting the stadium of the Bombonera, home of the club Boca Juniors, is an exciting experience, especially during a game.
Exciting starts with a vowel, so “an”.
“Visit” without a subject in front of it sounds like you’re telling someone to visit this place. That is perfectly fine, but it doesn’t go very well the tone of the rest of this piece, so I would choose “visiting” to address the actual action itself.
If you said “visit”, then you would need to add “it” to say “it is an exciting experience”. This isn’t necessary with “visiting”, as the act of visiting the place acts as the “it” in this sentence.
The cuisine porteñaporteña cuisine, with yourits famous roast and your(its) pies, equally delights areboth locals and visitors for same.
The first part is a guess, as I’m not entirely sure, but personally I don’t think “cuisine porteña“ would be right.
The second “its” is optional.
The “are” turns “delights” into a noun rather than a verb, and sounds unnatural like that.
“Equally” came from “for same”, but it is a different way to word it.
The lively nights of Buenos Aires, are full of dancehalls and coffee.
Originally the sentence sounded unfinished, as there wasn’t really a verb.
It invites you to inmmerse in the rhythm of tango and warmth of yourits people.
No doubt, Buenos Aires is a city wthat captiveates and leaves a large impression durable i on those who visit it.
“Large” would be used more often than “durable” when talking about impressions.
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My fivefth entry
CThe city of Buenos Aires, Ccapitail of Argentina, is known for yourits European architectature and vibrant cultural life.
sStrolling throught for your the streets is how you travel to your freFranche, iItaliany, and sSpain.
The neighborhood of the Boca, famous for yourits colorful houses and relationship with tango, is an unmissable destiny to touristtourist destination.
mMoreover, the city offers a great variety of theatres, museums and galleries of art, whatich makes it in a cultural center of Latin America.
The spirit of Buenos Aires too is reflectsed in yourits passionate hobby for the soccer.
Visiting the stadium of the Bombonera, home of the club Boca Juniors, is an exciting experience, especially during a game.
The cuisine porteña, with yourits famous roast and your pies, delights are locals and visitors forthe same.
The lively nights of Buenos Aires, are full of dancehalls and coffee.
iInvite inmerse in the rhythm of tango and the warmth of yourits people.
No doubt, Buenos Aires is a city what captiveaptivating city and leaves a strong impression durable ion those who visit it.
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City of Buenos Aires, Captail of Argentina, is known for your Europe architectature and vibrant cultural life. The City of Buenos Aires,
The City of Buenos Aires, Since you said “city of…”, you would need to use “the”. You would also need “the” in front of capital, and capital would not be capitalised as it is not the name of a place. The City of Buenos Aires is a place, or in other words, not a person, so you would use “its” to indicate possession instead of “your”. Europe = the continent, European = an adjective used to say that something is from or related to Europe. |
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stroll throught for your streets is how travel to your french, italian and spain.
By strolling through French, Italian and Spain would all be capitalised, as they are related to countries or are countries, and just about every word like these is capitalised. French and Italian are also languages, nationalities or used as adjectives to say that something comes from France/Italy. France and Italy are the names of the actual countries, which are what you would want to say here. |
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moreover, the city offers a great variet of theatres, museums and galleries of art, what makes it in a cultural center of Latin America.
Could also say “making it a cultural center…” |
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Visit the stadium of the Bombonera, home of the club Boca Juniors, is a exciting experience, especially during a game. Visit the Visit the stadium of the Bombonera, home of the club Boca Juniors, it is an exciting experience, especially during a game. Visiting the stadium of the Bombonera, home of the club Boca Juniors, is an exciting experience, especially during a game. Visiting the stadium of the Bombonera, home of the club Boca Juniors, is an exciting experience, especially during a game. Exciting starts with a vowel, so “an”. “Visit” without a subject in front of it sounds like you’re telling someone to visit this place. That is perfectly fine, but it doesn’t go very well the tone of the rest of this piece, so I would choose “visiting” to address the actual action itself. If you said “visit”, then you would need to add “it” to say “it is an exciting experience”. This isn’t necessary with “visiting”, as the act of visiting the place acts as the “it” in this sentence. |
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The cuisine porteña, with your famous roast and your pies, delights are locals and visitors for same. The cuisine porteña, with The cuisine porteña, with The cuisine porteña, with The The first part is a guess, as I’m not entirely sure, but personally I don’t think “cuisine porteña“ would be right. The second “its” is optional. The “are” turns “delights” into a noun rather than a verb, and sounds unnatural like that. “Equally” came from “for same”, but it is a different way to word it. |
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The lively nights of Buenos Aires, full of dancehalls and coffee. The The lively nights of Buenos Aires The lively nights of Buenos Aires Originally the sentence sounded unfinished, as there wasn’t really a verb. |
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