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arturosa

Nov. 29, 2020

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My firts words in this webpage

Hi All, this is my firts words in this webpage, I ask me why is complicate learn English in my case, i try a lot of method, but always i forgot write correctly, and my pronuntations is worst, i dont know whats can i Do, thanks in advance for read and correct me, see you

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Hi All, this is my firts words ist post on this webpage,. I ask meyself why is complicatet has been complicated for me to learn English in my case, i try. I have tried a lot of methods, but I always i forgot how to write correctly, and my pronuntciations is the worst, i. I don't know whats I can i Do, tdo. Thanks in advance for reading and correct meing my post, see you.

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xeta

Nov. 29, 2020

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Yo sé que tú puedes. Creo en ti!

My firts wordsst post in this webpage

First post works better for this sentence.

Hi All, t. This is my firts words ist post on this webpage,
I ask meed myself why is it so complicated/difficult to learn English i. In my case, iI tryied a lot of methods, but have always i forgotten how to write correctly, and. Also my pronuntciations is of English is the worst, i. I don't know whats can i Do, t to do to improve it. ¶
T
hanks in advance for reading and correct me, sing my mistakes.¶
S
ee you!

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Very nice first post Arturosa! I am also new to LangCorrect and I hope we can all improve in our target languages.

Keep up the good work.

My firtst words ion this webpage

Hi Aall, this isese are my firtst words ion this webpage,. I ask mewonder why it is complicated to learn English in my case, i try. I have tried a lot of methods, but I always i forget how tot write correctly, and my pronuntciations is the worst, i. I don't know whats I can i Do, tdo. Thanks in advance for reading and correct me, sing me. See you!

this is (singular) -> these are (plural)

"I ask me why" looks like "me pregunto" to me. Is this what you would have said in Spanish? A better translation for "me pregunto" is "I wonder"

"A lot" indicates plural should follow

I left it because it's technically fine, but "see you" more appropriate for verbal communication rather than this kind of communication. For example, you could say it to a friend after getting lunch together. It reads a little strange in this context because we won't be "seeing" each other later. I would suggest "Bye" or even nothing at all (the previous sentence is a great conclusion as is).

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Welcome to LangCorrect! I would caution you to remember punctuation. It really helps with readability. Many of the places where you put a comma should have actually had a period instead.

Let me know if you have any questions!

My firts words in this webpage


My firtst words ion this webpage

My firts wordsst post in this webpage

First post works better for this sentence.

Hi All, this is my firts words in this webpage, I ask me why is complicate learn English in my case, i try a lot of method, but always i forgot write correctly, and my pronuntations is worst, i dont know whats can i Do, thanks in advance for read and correct me, see you


Hi Aall, this isese are my firtst words ion this webpage,. I ask mewonder why it is complicated to learn English in my case, i try. I have tried a lot of methods, but I always i forget how tot write correctly, and my pronuntciations is the worst, i. I don't know whats I can i Do, tdo. Thanks in advance for reading and correct me, sing me. See you!

this is (singular) -> these are (plural) "I ask me why" looks like "me pregunto" to me. Is this what you would have said in Spanish? A better translation for "me pregunto" is "I wonder" "A lot" indicates plural should follow I left it because it's technically fine, but "see you" more appropriate for verbal communication rather than this kind of communication. For example, you could say it to a friend after getting lunch together. It reads a little strange in this context because we won't be "seeing" each other later. I would suggest "Bye" or even nothing at all (the previous sentence is a great conclusion as is).

Hi All, t. This is my firts words ist post on this webpage,
I ask meed myself why is it so complicated/difficult to learn English i. In my case, iI tryied a lot of methods, but have always i forgotten how to write correctly, and. Also my pronuntciations is of English is the worst, i. I don't know whats can i Do, t to do to improve it. ¶
T
hanks in advance for reading and correct me, sing my mistakes.¶
S
ee you!

Hi All, this is my firts words ist post on this webpage,. I ask meyself why is complicatet has been complicated for me to learn English in my case, i try. I have tried a lot of methods, but I always i forgot how to write correctly, and my pronuntciations is the worst, i. I don't know whats I can i Do, tdo. Thanks in advance for reading and correct meing my post, see you.

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