Aug. 14, 2025
My first writing
Hello everyone, this is my first time on this site.and I'm new to writing so guys I would be happy if you help me in the future.and today's writing is my today's morning events.
My phone battery was dead so so I missed my alarm and wake up about 40 minutes late than usual,and after I wake up the first thing I did was going to the toilet and washing my face,then I pray and I exercise a little like about 20 minutes.then I made my room and sit on my bed and checked my to do list it was like these:-
✓ling Q (reading article 20 minutes)
✓New in levels 20 minutes
Lang correct (write 5-8 sentence and get correction-15 minutes).
Ok this is all for today and I will send 2 to 3 times a week. I'm looking forward for the correction
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My fFirst wWriting
Titles have special capitalization rules
Hello everyone, this is my first time on this site.and I'm new to writing, so guys I would be happy if you help me iguys can the future.and tlp me. Today's writing is my today'about what I did this morning events.
"And" should be avoided to begin sentences.
Today's morning = this morning
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- Lang cCorrect (w: Write 5-8 sentences and getread correction-s for 15 minutes).
For the second item in your list, you also need to put the name of whatever application you were using to advance in levels.
Ok, this is all for today and. I will sendwrite more 2 tor 3 times a week.
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Feedback
Great job. Remember to capitalize the beginning word of each new sentence, and try to avoid beginning them with "And"
Aug. 17, 2025
Thank you very much ☺️
Today’s Morning Events/My first time writing here.
Helloi everyone, t! This is my first time on this site., and I'm’m completely new to writing, so guys I would be happy ifI’d really appreciate your help meand feedback in the future.and today's writing is my today's morning events.
It was a good attempt but you need to work on your punctuation.
My phone battery was dead soThis morning didn’t go as planned—my phone battery died during the night, so I missed my alarm and wakeended up waking up about 40 minutes later than usual,and after I wake up t. The first thing I did was goinghead to the toilet andbathroom, washing my face, and then I pray and I exercise a little like. After that, I did a short workout for abroutnd 20 minutes.then I made to wake myself up.¶
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Once I finished, I tidied my room and, siat on my bed, and checked my to -do list it was like these:-
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✓ LingQ – reading an article for 20 minutes)
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✓ New in lLevels – 20 minutes
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✓ Lang cCorrect (– write 5-–8 sentences and get correction-s (15 minutes).
Very good attempt, but you need to focus on your grammer
Ok this iThat’s all for today and I will send. I’ll post 2 to 3 times a week, and I’m looking forward to your corrections.
merge this sentence and the next one and add a conjunction(search it up)
I'm looking forward for the correction ✓
Feedback
1. Verb tenses
Keep the past tense consistent when describing past events.
“wake up” → “woke up”
“going to the toilet” → “went to the toilet”
2. Sentence structure
Avoid run-on sentences — split long sentences into shorter ones for clarity.
Use linking words like “after that,” “then,” or “later” to guide the reader.
3. Punctuation and capitalization
Capitalize the first word of every sentence and proper nouns.
Use commas to separate ideas and periods to end sentences.
Avoid double words like “so so.”
4. Articles and small words
Remember to use “a,” “an,” and “the” correctly.
“This is my first time on this site” ✅ (correct — no missing article here)
“I did a short workout” ✅
5. Word choice and flow
Replace repetitive words with synonyms for variety.
Instead of “I exercise a little like about 20 minutes,” say “I exercised lightly for about 20 minutes.”
Use a more natural order: wake up → wash → pray → exercise → tidy room → check list.
Overall it was a decent effort but i believe in you to do better!!
Aug. 20, 2025
Thank you 😊
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My first writing Today’s Morning Events/My first time writing here. My Titles have special capitalization rules |
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Hello everyone, this is my first time on this site.and I'm new to writing so guys I would be happy if you help me in the future.and today's writing is my today's morning events. H It was a good attempt but you need to work on your punctuation. Hello everyone, this is my first time on this site. "And" should be avoided to begin sentences. Today's morning = this morning |
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My phone battery was dead so so I missed my alarm and wake up about 40 minutes late than usual,and after I wake up the first thing I did was going to the toilet and washing my face,then I pray and I exercise a little like about 20 minutes.then I made my room and sit on my bed and checked my to do list it was like these:- ✓ling Q (reading article 20 minutes) ✓New in levels 20 minutes Lang correct (write 5-8 sentence and get correction-15 minutes).
Very good attempt, but you need to focus on your grammer My phone battery For the second item in your list, you also need to put the name of whatever application you were using to advance in levels. |
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Ok this is all for today and I will send 2 to 3 times a week.
merge this sentence and the next one and add a conjunction(search it up) Ok, this is all for today |
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I'm looking forward for the correction ✓ This sentence has been marked as perfect! I'm looking forward |
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