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Martacreta

Oct. 24, 2024

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My first writing

Hello everyone,
My name is Marta, actuality I’m study English, my level is B1 but I writing bad, very bad.
I’ll try write each week for that I can improve and I don’t make mistake.
See you.
Marta

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My first writingentry

writing is a verb not a noun

Hello everyone,
My name is Marta
, actuality. I’m studying English, and my level is B1, but I writing bad, very bad.’m very bad at writing.

I’ll try write each week forso that I can improve and I don’t makemake less mistakes.

My first writing exercise

“Writing” can be a verb or adjective, but not a noun. So “writing exercise” would work. Alternatively you could choose a different noun like “post”

Hello everyone,
My name is Marta
, actualitynd I’m studying English, m. My level is B1, but Imy writing bad, vis bad. Very bad.

Two ways to phrase this depending on the usage of “actually” vs “actuality”

Using “actually” implies a correction or a surprise / contrary statement. Eg: someone asks “are you studying French?” You’d respond “I’m actually studying English.”

You could also say “I’m studying English and in actuality my level is B1, but my writing…” This also indicates something is different vs what was expected. Ie: your level is B1, but your writing level may be different.

I’ll try to write each week forso that I can improve and I don’not make mistakes.

See you.,

When closing out a letter / email, we typically use a comma. “See you” is casual, but more formally you could say “Kind regards,” or “Sincerely,” etc.

Feedback

Well done! Hope you keep writing and improving every day!

My first writingpost

Hello everyone,
My name is Marta,
actuality I’m studying English, my level is B1 but Imy writing is bad, very bad.

I’ll try write each week for that I can improve and I don’t make mistakes.

See you.

Marta

Hello everyone,
My name is Marta
, actualitynd I'm studying English, m. My level is B1 but Imy writing bad,is very bad.

I’ll try to write each week forso that I can improve and I don’not make mistakes.

See you.

Feedback

Great job, keep it up!

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Martacreta

Oct. 24, 2024

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Thanks for correcting me my mistakes!

My first writing


My first writingpost

My first writing exercise

“Writing” can be a verb or adjective, but not a noun. So “writing exercise” would work. Alternatively you could choose a different noun like “post”

My first writingentry

writing is a verb not a noun

Hello everyone, My name is Marta, actuality I’m study English, my level is B1 but I writing bad, very bad.


Hello everyone,
My name is Marta
, actualitynd I'm studying English, m. My level is B1 but Imy writing bad,is very bad.

Hello everyone,
My name is Marta,
actuality I’m studying English, my level is B1 but Imy writing is bad, very bad.

Hello everyone,
My name is Marta
, actualitynd I’m studying English, m. My level is B1, but Imy writing bad, vis bad. Very bad.

Two ways to phrase this depending on the usage of “actually” vs “actuality” Using “actually” implies a correction or a surprise / contrary statement. Eg: someone asks “are you studying French?” You’d respond “I’m actually studying English.” You could also say “I’m studying English and in actuality my level is B1, but my writing…” This also indicates something is different vs what was expected. Ie: your level is B1, but your writing level may be different.

Hello everyone,
My name is Marta
, actuality. I’m studying English, and my level is B1, but I writing bad, very bad.’m very bad at writing.

I’ll try write each week for that I can improve and I don’t make mistake.


I’ll try to write each week forso that I can improve and I don’not make mistakes.

I’ll try write each week for that I can improve and I don’t make mistakes.

I’ll try to write each week forso that I can improve and I don’not make mistakes.

I’ll try write each week forso that I can improve and I don’t makemake less mistakes.

See you.


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See you.,

When closing out a letter / email, we typically use a comma. “See you” is casual, but more formally you could say “Kind regards,” or “Sincerely,” etc.

Marta


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