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My first writing

Hi,

This is my first writing here. I studied English many years ago, I got a C1 level in 2014. But I think that my level is lower now... 🙁

I'd like to practice my writing skill. It's possible that I'm not making mistakes in the previous words. However, I'm aware that I could use richer expressions. For example, maybe 'I think' is too easy! 😄

I love writing. I wrote a book several years ago. It's a short stories book. Not really short stories, but more than short, you know? We say "microrrelato" in Spanish. Very very very tiny short stories, I'm sure there is an English word for this kind of texts. I mean stories in, for instance, 100 words.

I'll finish my introduction at this point. I'd like to read your corrections or ideas to improve my writing.

Thank you!
SurfinPop

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Hi,

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this is my first writingentry here.

I studied English many years ago,. I gotobtained a C1 level (certificate) in 2014.

Wow, that's awesome. I was assuming you got a C1 level certificate in English, but correct me if I'm wrong.

ButHowever, I think that my level is lower now... 🙁

I'd like to practice/improve my writing skill.

It's possible that I'm not making mistakes in the previous wordsentences.

However, I'm aware that I could use richer expressions.

For example, maybe 'I think' is too easy!

😄 I love writing.

I wrote a book several years ago.

It's a short stories book.

NThey're not really short stories, but more thanthey're kind of short, you know?

We say "microrrelato" in Spanish.

Very very very tiny short stories, I'm sure there is an English word for this kind of textvery short stories.

I think the word you're looking for is a novella, which is usually a short novel. Let me check the official definition: a short novel or long short story.

I mean stories in, for instance,that have 100 words.

I'll finish my introduction at this point.

I'd like to read your corrections or ideas to improve my writing.

Thank you!

SurfinPop

My first writing experience

"Writing" on it's own feels a little weird here.

Hi,


This is my first
time writing here.

same as above.

I studied English many years ago, and I got a C1 level in 2014.

But I think that my level is lower now... 🙁


I'd like to practice my writing
skillability.

"ability" makes more sense here, in my opinion. But "skill" also works.

It's possible that I'm not making any mistakes in themy previous words.

However, I'm aware that I could use richer expressions.

For example, maybe 'I think' is too easy!

😄 I love writing.

I wrote a book several years ago.

It's a short stories book.

Not really short stories, but more than short, you know?

We saycall it "microrrelato" in Spanish.

I believe the word you're looking for is "flash fiction".

I mean stories in, for instance, 100 words.

I'll finish my introduction at this point.

I'd like to read your corrections or ideas to improve my writing.

Thank you!

SurfinPop

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Good luck with improving your writing! I hope you continue with your writing ambitions!

My first writing

Hi, This is my first writing here.

I studied English many years ago, I got a C1 level in 2014.

But I think that my level is lower now... 🙁


I'd like to practice my writing skill
s.

It's possible that I'm not making mistakes in the previous wordsright now.

However, I'm aware that I could use richer expressions.

For example, maybe 'I think' is too easysimple!

😄 I love writing.

I wrote a book several years ago.

It's a short stories book.

Not really short stories, but more than short, you know?

We say "microrrelato" in Spanish.

Very very very tiny short stories, I'm sure there is an English word for this kind of texts.

I mean stories in, for instance, 100 words.

I'll finish my introduction at this pointhere.

I'd like to read your corrections or ideas to improve my writing.

Thank you!

SurfinPop

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My first writing experience

"Writing" on it's own feels a little weird here.

My fFirst wWritingten Entry on LangCorrect

Hi, This is my first writing here.


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Hi,


This is my first
time writing here.

same as above.

Hi,

T
this is my first writingentry here.

I studied English many years ago, I got a C1 level in 2014.


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I studied English many years ago, and I got a C1 level in 2014.

I studied English many years ago,. I gotobtained a C1 level (certificate) in 2014.

Wow, that's awesome. I was assuming you got a C1 level certificate in English, but correct me if I'm wrong.

But I think that my level is lower now... 🙁 I'd like to practice my writing skill.


But I think that my level is lower now... 🙁


I'd like to practice my writing skill
s.

But I think that my level is lower now... 🙁


I'd like to practice my writing
skillability.

"ability" makes more sense here, in my opinion. But "skill" also works.

ButHowever, I think that my level is lower now... 🙁

I'd like to practice/improve my writing skill.

It's possible that I'm not making mistakes in the previous words.


It's possible that I'm not making mistakes in the previous wordsright now.

It's possible that I'm not making any mistakes in themy previous words.

It's possible that I'm not making mistakes in the previous wordsentences.

For example, maybe 'I think' is too easy!


For example, maybe 'I think' is too easysimple!

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However, I'm aware that I could use richer expressions.


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😄 I love writing.


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I wrote a book several years ago.


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It's a short stories book.


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Not really short stories, but more than short, you know?


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NThey're not really short stories, but more thanthey're kind of short, you know?

We say "microrrelato" in Spanish.


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We saycall it "microrrelato" in Spanish.

I believe the word you're looking for is "flash fiction".

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Very very very tiny short stories, I'm sure there is an English word for this kind of texts.


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Very very very tiny short stories, I'm sure there is an English word for this kind of textvery short stories.

I think the word you're looking for is a novella, which is usually a short novel. Let me check the official definition: a short novel or long short story.

I mean stories in, for instance, 100 words.


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I mean stories in, for instance,that have 100 words.

I'll finish my introduction at this point.


I'll finish my introduction at this pointhere.

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I'd like to read your corrections or ideas to improve my writing.


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Thank you!


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