My first tryingattempt

You could say "My first time trying" or "My first attempt", they kind of mean the same thing.

Hi everybody, this is my first esseay in the lLangcorrect application.

Normally, one would say app rather than application. It is just a quicker way of saying/writing it, but it sounds more normal.

I tried to writinge with only my opinion so I didn't use a dictionary or same otherimilar things.

I am not completely sure what you tried to say but this was my best attempt.

I want to improve my eEnglish and I know that learning a new language is very complicated.

You can make long time lofs ofts of long time things regularly, for example, reading, vocabulary, listiening and speaking.

Once again not fully sure what you tried to say but here was my best attempt.

I make thats amongFrom the progress of 2 years, maybe I can learn a little bit more English.

But it's not enought, I need using eto use English in my daily routine.

Maybe I can watch tva TV seriues ein English language without subtitles.

Maybe I can make friends with foreign people.

I don't know what I can I do, but I will try saome things and maybe in two years later II will speak eEnglish very well.

I am waiting helpsfor everybodyone's help, thanks now.

My fFirst tryingAttempt

Titles have special capitalization rules

Hi everybody, this is my first esseay ion the lLangcCorrect application.

LangCorrect is a name, so is capitalized. It is a website, though, not an application.

I tried to writing with only my opinion so I didn't use dictionary or same otherthingam trying to write using only my own skills, without using a dictionary or anything else.

Opinions are typically subjective judgements: your hair looks great today, blue is the best color, etc.
Here, you were presently still working on your writing, so it uses the present tense.

I want to improve my eEnglish, and I know that learning a new language is very complicated.

"English" is always capitalized

You can makespend a long time doing a lofst of things regularly, for example, reading, studying vocabulary, listiening and speaking.

I make thats among 2 years maybe I canthink that in about 2 years I can maybe learn a little bit of English.

But it's not enought, I need using englishto use English as part of my daily routine.

It's = it is
Its = possessive form of it (e.g., a tree and its leaves).

Maybe I can watch tva TV seriues ein English language without subtitles.

Maybe I can make friends with foreign people.

I don't know what can I do, but I will try saome things, and two years later I speak english very wellI will be able to speak very good English in two years.

I am waiting your helps, everybody, t. Thanks now.