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June 28, 2025

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My first try to writting something with english!

I fell a little bit akward and nervous,this is me the first experience on this website.
Hello everyone,my site name is Sovuchkina.I want to study english language,because this is pretty fun and interesting!My dream is become a psychologist and help people to coping with their traumas,im thinking about international university in USA or maybe europe because i have scholar interest in psychology sciense.
So my passion project is The Ynsy,the family of accounts where i write lession for parents with problematic children and make a posts about psychology,my goal is give a care for mental ill people/speak about psychological health like physical health.
I dont known how to writting as native english speaker,but i will trying.

Я чувствую себя немного ловко и нервозно,это мой первый опыт на этом сайте.
Всем привет,меня зовут Совушкина.Я хочу учить английский язык потому что это довольно весело и интерестно.Моя мечта это стать психологом и помогать справляться с их травмами,я думаю о университете заграницей потому что у меня есть исследовательский интерес к психологии.
Мой мой основной проект это ЮНСИ,это семейство аккаунтов где я выпускаю лекции для родителей и делаю посты о психологии.Моя цель это дать поддержку для психологически больных людей и наконец заговорить о психологическом здоровье как о физическом.
Я не знаю как писать как англо-говорящий человек,но я буду стараться

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My first tryime trying to writtinge something with ein English!

When you are doing something for the first time, say "it is my first time" and then add the 'ing' form of the verb afterwards. In this case, it's 'trying'. 'Trying' is a unique case, though, because then you usually need to add another verb after to show what you're trying to do, but it'll be in its plain form, so 'ing' won't be at the end.

I felel a little bit awkward and nervous, this is me they first experience on this website.

Hello everyone, my site name is Sovuchkina. I want to study ethe English language, because ithis is pretty fun and interesting! My dream is become a psychologist and help people to copinge with their traumas,i. I'm thinking about going to an international university in the USA, or maybe eone in Europe, because i have scholar interest inI want to study psychology sciense.

You could say you have a 'scholarly interest' in something, but it would be more natural to just say "I want to study psychology' or 'I like to study psychology'.

So, my passion project is The Ynsy, the family of accounts where iI write lessions for parents with problematic children and make a posts about psychology,m. My goal is give a care fors are to help mentally ill people/ and to speak about psychological health likein the same way as physical health.

I dont known how to writtinge like as native eEnglish speaker, but iI will keep trying.

I'm not sure if you wanted to say that you *are* trying or that you will continue to try.

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This post made a lot of sense, overall. I feel like you could hold a conversation with a native speaker. It's my first time on this site, too, and it's super embarrassing trying to write in a different language, but I'm confident we'll both improve by figuring out our mistakes.

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My first tryattempt to writtinge something with ein English!

I felel a little bit awkward and nervous, because this is me they first experience on this website.

Hello everyone, my site name is Sovuchkina. I want to study eEnglish language, because ithis is pretty fun and interesting! My dream is to become a psychologist and help people to copingcope with their traumas,i. I'm thinking about international university in the USA or maybe eEurope because iI have scholaran interest in psychology sciense.

So mMy passion project is The Ynsy, the family of accounts where iI write lessions for parents with problematic children and make a posts about psychology,m. My goal is to give a care for mentally ill people/speak about psychological health like physical health.

I don't known how to writtinge as a native eEnglish speaker, but iI will keep trying.

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Most of the corrections were quite minor, so it was easy to understand what you were saying. Just remember to always capitalise "I" and to leave spaces after punctuation. Great work!

My first try to writting something with english!

My first tryattempt to writtinge something with ein English!

My first tryime trying to writtinge something with ein English!

When you are doing something for the first time, say "it is my first time" and then add the 'ing' form of the verb afterwards. In this case, it's 'trying'. 'Trying' is a unique case, though, because then you usually need to add another verb after to show what you're trying to do, but it'll be in its plain form, so 'ing' won't be at the end.

I fell a little bit akward and nervous,this is me the first experience on this website.

I felel a little bit awkward and nervous, because this is me they first experience on this website.

I felel a little bit awkward and nervous, this is me they first experience on this website.

Hello everyone,my site name is Sovuchkina.I want to study english language,because this is pretty fun and interesting!My dream is become a psychologist and help people to coping with their traumas,im thinking about international university in USA or maybe europe because i have scholar interest in psychology sciense.

Hello everyone, my site name is Sovuchkina. I want to study eEnglish language, because ithis is pretty fun and interesting! My dream is to become a psychologist and help people to copingcope with their traumas,i. I'm thinking about international university in the USA or maybe eEurope because iI have scholaran interest in psychology sciense.

Hello everyone, my site name is Sovuchkina. I want to study ethe English language, because ithis is pretty fun and interesting! My dream is become a psychologist and help people to copinge with their traumas,i. I'm thinking about going to an international university in the USA, or maybe eone in Europe, because i have scholar interest inI want to study psychology sciense.

You could say you have a 'scholarly interest' in something, but it would be more natural to just say "I want to study psychology' or 'I like to study psychology'.

So my passion project is The Ynsy,the family of accounts where i write lession for parents with problematic children and make a posts about psychology,my goal is give a care for mental ill people/speak about psychological health like physical health.

So mMy passion project is The Ynsy, the family of accounts where iI write lessions for parents with problematic children and make a posts about psychology,m. My goal is to give a care for mentally ill people/speak about psychological health like physical health.

So, my passion project is The Ynsy, the family of accounts where iI write lessions for parents with problematic children and make a posts about psychology,m. My goal is give a care fors are to help mentally ill people/ and to speak about psychological health likein the same way as physical health.

I dont known how to writting as native english speaker,but i will trying.

I don't known how to writtinge as a native eEnglish speaker, but iI will keep trying.

I dont known how to writtinge like as native eEnglish speaker, but iI will keep trying.

I'm not sure if you wanted to say that you *are* trying or that you will continue to try.

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