Aug. 23, 2024
My first time in the plataform
Today was my first time in a new plataform for languages. I had a interview with a person with advanced english level. In the interview, he asked me about my country, my age and my name, after a few minutes he told me "You are able to talk with others people with intermediate english level". I felt exicted and a little bit nervous.
Immediately, he directed me to another room, when I talked with a female from Chinesse. It was a kindable conversation and I enjoyed her comments. After, I was directed an another session again, but I had talk with another person, specificaly with a man from US. His accent is native and his expresions were very fluent. He give me some advices and I hope take the advices for improve my skills
Today was a great day. I am still very excited.
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Today was my first time in a new plataform for languages.
I had a interview with a person with an advanced eEnglish level.
In the interview, he asked me about my country, my age, and my name, a. After a few minutes, he told me, "You are able to talk with others people with an intermediate eEnglish level".
I felt exicted and a little bit nervous.
Immediately, he directed me to another room, when I talked with a female from Chinessea.
It was a kindablnice conversation and I enjoyed her comments.
After, I was directed ain another session again, but I had talk with another person, specificaly with a man from the USA.
His accent is native and his expresions were verye had a native accent and spoke fluently.
He give me some advices and I hope take the advices for to improve my skills
¶. Today was a great day.
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I am still very excited.
My first time in the plataform
Today was my first time in a new plataform for languages.
I had an interview with a person with an advanced eEnglish level.
“I had an interview with a person who was advanced in English.” This is another way to say this sentence without using “with” two times in a row.
In the interview, he asked me about my country, my age, and my name, a. After a few minutes, he told me "You are able to talk with others people with an intermediate eEnglish level".
I felt exicted and a little bit nervous.
Immediately, he directed me to another room, when I talked with a female from Chinesse.
I'm not sure where “Chinesse” is and it is not showing on google. I would double-check the place’s name in English!
It was a kindable conversation and I enjoyed her comments.
“Kindable” is not a word. You can say “It was a (sweet/kind/nice/pleasant) conversation.”
After, I was directed anto another session again, but I had to talk with another different person, specifically with a man from the US.
You can say “another person” but since you already used “another” I have changed it to give it more variety.
His accent is native and his expresions were very fluent.
He give me some advices and I hope to take the advices for to improve my skills
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Today was a great day.
I am still very excited.
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Good job! I'm glad today went well!
My first time in the plataform
That is the correct spelling
Today was my first time in a new plataform for languages.
That is the correct spelling
I had an interview with a person with advanced english level.
An is used for words that starts with a vowel letter while a is used for words that starts with a consonant letter
In the interview, he asked me about my country, my age and my name,; after a few minutes, he told me, "You are able tocan talk with others people with an intermediate eEnglish level".
It sounds more natural like this.
English is supposed to be in capital letters because it's a proper noun.
Languages are meant to be in capital letters, for example, Chinese, French, and Arabic.
I felt exicited and a little bit nervous.
Wrong spelling.
Immediately, he directed me to another room, whenre I talked with a female from Chinessea.
It sounds more natural like this.
It was a kindablewonderful conversation and I enjoyed her comments.
Kindable is not the best word to use here.
I don't think this word is in the dictionary.
After, I was directed anto another session again, but I had a talk with another person, specifically with a man from the US.
Specifically is the correct word,
The US is the correct expression.
His accent is native and his expressions were very fluent.
He giave me some pieces of advices and I hope to take the pieces of advices for to improve my skills
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Today was a great day.
1. It is in the past tense because it occurred in the past.
2. Advice can't be pluralized by adding -s because it can't be counted; rather, pieces of advice are used. Other examples include a bucket of water and pieces of information.
I am still very excited.
Feedback
If you keep on practising, you'll become very fluent in English.
Congratulations 🎉 on your ability to communicate with people with intermediate English level.
I suggest that you download Grammarly on your mobile phone. The app will help in correcting your mistakes.
Aug. 26, 2024
Thank you
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