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skariiiii_13032

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My first time here

Hi, I´m new with all of this but I´m really excited to learn more.
First, I can say that I´ve been searching a remote job since March but every Company say the same: ¨you need to speak like a native¨, and for me is ridiculous because i´m from another country and I really need the money, so I wish I was born in another country sometimes, but If I think about it so well, I´m happy and comftable with my life for now. I´ll apreciate if you could help me with every text that I´m gonna type here, thank you from the deep of my heart.

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My fFirst tTime hHere

For titles, we capitalize the first letter of every word, not including articles (and, but, the, etc)

Hi, I´m new withto all of this, but I´m really excited to learn more.

First, I can say thatly, I´ve been searching for a remote job since March, but every Ccompany says the same thing: ¨you need to speak like a native¨, and for me i. It's ridiculous to me because iI´m from anothern-english speaking country and I really need the money, so. Sometimes I wish I was born in another country sometimes, but Iif I really think about it so well, I´m happy and comfortable with my life for now.

Use the present perfect continuous structure "I (subject) have been searching (verb + ing)" when talking about an action that started in the past and is continuing to happen in the present.
Sounds more natural to put "sometimes" first
Really means a lot

I´lld appreciate it if you could help me with every text that I´m gonna type here, thank you from the deepbottom of my heart.

I'd = I would - Use for present hypothetical events

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Good job, keep writing everyday and you will improve very quickly :)

My first time here

My fFirst tTime hHere

For titles, we capitalize the first letter of every word, not including articles (and, but, the, etc)

Hi, I´m new with all of this but I´m really excited to learn more.

Hi, I´m new withto all of this, but I´m really excited to learn more.

First, I can say that I´ve been searching a remote job since March but every Company say the same: ¨you need to speak like a native¨, and for me is ridiculous because i´m from another country and I really need the money, so I wish I was born in another country sometimes, but If I think about it so well, I´m happy and comftable with my life for now.

First, I can say thatly, I´ve been searching for a remote job since March, but every Ccompany says the same thing: ¨you need to speak like a native¨, and for me i. It's ridiculous to me because iI´m from anothern-english speaking country and I really need the money, so. Sometimes I wish I was born in another country sometimes, but Iif I really think about it so well, I´m happy and comfortable with my life for now.

Use the present perfect continuous structure "I (subject) have been searching (verb + ing)" when talking about an action that started in the past and is continuing to happen in the present. Sounds more natural to put "sometimes" first Really means a lot

I´ll apreciate if you could help me with every text that I´m gonna type here, thank you from the deep of my heart.

I´lld appreciate it if you could help me with every text that I´m gonna type here, thank you from the deepbottom of my heart.

I'd = I would - Use for present hypothetical events

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