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bastian__jorquera

April 19, 2024

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My first text in English

Hi everyone, this is my first text in English. I wrote previously some texts in German in this website, but currently I would like to improve my English, because English is so important in my daily life.
I study a Master in Composition in Germany and everybody don't speak German. There are many students from different countries or sometimes there are different foreign guests and they don’t speak German.
To study in my university you need a certificate that attest that you have the required level. In my case I needed a B2 certificate. That was very difficult at the beginning because I started all this process with online classes. At first I had private classes and after I paid for an offer in Lingoda, that is a school of languages. This was a great opportunity to learn because in Lingoda work many German teachers. I remember this opportunity like my first contact with Germans. This was amazing but not all was incredible…

In the next text I would like to explain how was my process with German because it was frustrating at the beginning but at the end I could pass the exam. Thank you for read my first text.

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I study a Master in Composition in Germany and everybody doesn't speak German.

This was a great opportunity to learn because in Lingoda work many German teachers.

I wrote previously some texts in German ion this website, but currently I would like to improve my English, because. English is so important in my daily life.

I am studying a Master in Composition in Germany and everybody don't speak GermaGerman is not spoken.

To study in my university, you would need a certificate that attests that you have the required level.

In my case, I needed a B2 certificate.

That was very difficult at the beginning because I started all this process with online classes.

At first, I had private classes and afterwards I paid for an offer place in Lingoda, that is a school ofa languages school.

This was a great opportunity to learn because in Lingoda workthere are many German teachers.

I remember this opportunity likeas my first contact with Germans.

This was amazing, but not all was incredible…


In the next text I would like to explain
how was my process with German because it was frustrating at the beginning, but at the end I could passed the exam.

My first text in English

Hi everyone, this is my first text in English.

I wrote pPreviously, I some texts in German ion this website, but currently I would like to improve my English, because English is sovery important in my daily life.

There are many students from differenta variety of countries or s. Sometimes, there are different foreign guests, and they don’t speak German.

To study inat my university, you need a certificate thato attest that you have the required level.(?)

"Required level" is a bit ambiguous, and you don't really specify as to what you mean here.

In my case I needed a B2 certificate.

That was very difficult at the beginning because I started all this processlanguage learning journey with online classes.

At first, I had private classes and af. Later, I paid for an offer in Lingoda,; that is, a school of languages.

This was a great opportunity to learn because in Lingoda work manyhas a lot of German teachers.

This was amazing but not all was incredible…


In the next text
, I would like to explain how was my process with German becausewas; even though it was frustrating at the beginning but at the end, in the end it was worth it since I could pass the exam.

Thank you for reading my first text.

My first textentry in English

Hi everyone, this is my first textentry in English.

I wrotehad previously written some texts in German ion this website, but currently I would like to improve my English, because English is so important in my daily life.

I study a Mam working on my master's in Ccomposition in Germany, and not everybody don'tone speaks German.

"everybody doesn't speak German" means no one speaks German.

There are many students from different countries or, and sometimes there are different foreign guests and theywho don't speak German at all.

To study inat my university, you need a certificate that attests that you have the required level of German proficiency.

In my case, I needed a B2 certificate.

That was very difficult at the beginning, because I started all this process with online classes.

At first, I had private classes, and after that, I paid for an offer inclasses at Lingoda, thatwhich is a school ofor learning languages.

This was a great opportunity to learn, because in Lingoda work many German teachersa lot of German teachers work at Lingoda.

I remember this opportunity like my firstas my first opportunity to come into contact with Germans.

ThisIt was an amazing but not all was incredible… ¶
experience, but not everything was good…¶

In
themy next textentry, I would like to explain how was mytalk more about my learning process with German, because while it was frustrating at the beginning but at the end I could, I still passed the exam at the end.

Thank you for read my first textentry.

Feedback

Good luck on learning German and English!

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bastian__jorquera

April 22, 2024

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Thank you very much! :)

My first text in English

Hi everyone, this is my first text in English.

I wrote previously wrote some texts in German ion this website, but currently I would like to improve my English, because English is so important in my daily life.

I study a Masteram pursuing a Master's degree in Composition in Germany and not everybody don'tone can speak German.

reworded for clarity. Composition meaning piano/music?!

There are many students from different countries or sometimes there are different foreign guests and they don’t speak German.

To study in my university you need a certificate that attest that you have the required level.

In my case I needed a B2 certificate.

That was very difficult at the beginning because I started all this entire process with online classes.

At first I had private classes and after I paid for an offer in Lingoda, thatwhich is a school of languages.

Wording is a little unnatural but correct.
Something I would say: "At first I had private classes, and then I switched to study at Lingoda which is a language school."

This was a great opportunity to learn because in Lingoda workhas many German teachers.

I remember thisat opportunity like my first contact with Germans.

ThisIt was amazing, but noit wasn't all ways incredible…


In the next text I w
ould like to explain how wasill explain my process with learning German because it was frustrating at the beginning, but at the end I could passed the exam.

Thank you for read my first text.

Feedback

Great first entry, you got this!

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bastian__jorquera

April 22, 2024

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Thank you! :)

My first text in English

Hi everyone, this is my first text in English.

I wrote previously wrote some texts in German ion this website, but c. Currently, I would like to improve my English, because English is so importantvital in my daily life.

I study'm currently doing a Master's in Composition in Germany and not everybody don't speaks German.

There are many students from different countries orand sometimes there are different foreign guests and theywho don’t speak German.

To study in my university, you need a certificate that attest that you have the required levela certain level in English.

I'm unsure what you're trying to say here. I'm assuming that you need a certificate for having at least a B1/B2 English level, but am unsure if this also applies for German.

In my case, I needed a B2 certificate.

That was very difficult at the beginning because I started all this process with online classes.

What kind of online classes did you take at the beginning?

At first I had private classes and after. After that, I paid for an offer in Lingoda, that is awhich is an online school of languages.

I broke up the sentences so it sounds more fluid.

This was a great opportunity to learn because in Lingoda work, there were many German teachers.

I'm unsure what you're trying to say. I'm assuming that you liked Lingoda because you learned English there.

I remember this opportunity like my first contact withbecause this was my first time I've met Germans.

I edited this sentence to sound more natural.

This was amazing, but not alleverything was incredible… ¶


In the next text
, I would like to explain how was my process with German because it was frustrating to learn it at the beginning but a. At the end, I couldwas able to pass the exam.

I'm unsure if you already took the exam or you were able to take the exam. What exam are you talking about? Based on context, I'm assuming you are talking about an exam that tests your proficiency in German.

Thank you for read my first text.

Feedback

Good job writing this text. I would like to see more specific details on kind of exams you had to take and how you went about learning German. Good luck in improving your English.

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bastian__jorquera

April 21, 2024

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Thank you very much for your corrections. I had to take the exam of Goethe Institut. In the next text I'll write more details about my process to learn German because it was hard to pass the exam.

Hi everyone, this is my first textime writing in English.

“Text” referring to a piece of writing sounds a bit less natural

I wrote previously some textwrote some entries in German ion this website, but currently I would like to improve my English, because English is soit’s very important in my daily life.

I’m studying a Master in Composition in Germany and not everybody don't speaks German.

There are many students from different countries or sometimes there are different foreign guests and they don’t speak German.

To study in my university you need a certificate that attests that you have the required level.

That was very difficult at the beginning because I started all this process with online classes.

“All” can’t modify a singular noun

At first I had private classes, and afterthen I paid for an offer in Lingoda, thatwhich is a school of languages.

This was a great opportunity to learn because in Lingoda work many German teachers work in Lingoda.

Or “lingoda has many German teachers”. Both sound more natural

I remember this opportunity like my first contact with Germans.

Not sure what the intended meaning is here. Maybe “I remember this opportunity because it was my first contact with Germans”.

This was amazing but not all was incredible…


In the next
textentry I would like to explain how was my process with German went because it was frustrating at the beginning but at the end I could pass the exam.

Thank you for reading my first textentry.

My first text in English

Hi everyone, this is my first text in English.

I wrote previously wrote some texts in German ion this website, but currently I would like to improve my English, because English is so important in my daily life.

I studyam pursuing a Master's in Composition in Germany and not everybody don'tone speaks German.

In English, you can "study" a subject (like math, biology), but you either "pursue" a degree (like a Bachelor's, Master's, PhD) or are enrolled in a degree program (e.g. "I am enrolled in a Master's program"). To use simpler words, you could say, "I am a Master's student studying Composition"

There are many students from different countries, or sometimes there are different foreign guests and theythat don’t speak German.

To study inat my university you need a certificate that attests that you have the required level.

It's not clear if you're talking about a required level in English or in German. I would say "the required English/German level" to make it clear.

In my case I needed a B2 certificate.

ThGetting the certificate was very difficult at the beginning because I started all thisthe process with online classes.

At first I had private classes and after that I paid for an offer infrom Lingoda, that is a school of languages.

Could also say "offer with Lingoda"
It sounds more natural to say "a language school" rather than "a school of languages", but both are correct

This was a great opportunity to learn because in Lingoda work many German teachers work at Lingoda.

I remember this opportunity likeas my first contact with Germans.

This was amazing but not all was incredible… ¶
perfect…¶

In the next text I would like to explain
how was my process withmy experience learning German because it was frustrating at the beginning, but at the end I couldwas able to pass the exam.

It's ok to use "incredible", but the meaning of the sentence is clearer with "perfect".

Thank you for reading my first text.

Feedback

You're doing great so far!

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bastian__jorquera

April 22, 2024

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Thank you for your comments :)

My first text in English


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Hi everyone, this is my first textime writing in English.

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Hi everyone, this is my first textentry in English.

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I wrote previously some texts in German in this website, but currently I would like to improve my English, because English is so important in my daily life.


I wrote previously wrote some texts in German ion this website, but currently I would like to improve my English, because English is so important in my daily life.

I wrote previously some textwrote some entries in German ion this website, but currently I would like to improve my English, because English is soit’s very important in my daily life.

I wrote previously wrote some texts in German ion this website, but c. Currently, I would like to improve my English, because English is so importantvital in my daily life.

I wrote previously wrote some texts in German ion this website, but currently I would like to improve my English, because English is so important in my daily life.

I wrotehad previously written some texts in German ion this website, but currently I would like to improve my English, because English is so important in my daily life.

I wrote pPreviously, I some texts in German ion this website, but currently I would like to improve my English, because English is sovery important in my daily life.

I wrote previously some texts in German ion this website, but currently I would like to improve my English, because. English is so important in my daily life.

I study a Master in Composition in Germany and everybody don't speak German.


I studyam pursuing a Master's in Composition in Germany and not everybody don'tone speaks German.

In English, you can "study" a subject (like math, biology), but you either "pursue" a degree (like a Bachelor's, Master's, PhD) or are enrolled in a degree program (e.g. "I am enrolled in a Master's program"). To use simpler words, you could say, "I am a Master's student studying Composition"

I’m studying a Master in Composition in Germany and not everybody don't speaks German.

I study'm currently doing a Master's in Composition in Germany and not everybody don't speaks German.

I study a Masteram pursuing a Master's degree in Composition in Germany and not everybody don'tone can speak German.

reworded for clarity. Composition meaning piano/music?!

I study a Mam working on my master's in Ccomposition in Germany, and not everybody don'tone speaks German.

"everybody doesn't speak German" means no one speaks German.

I am studying a Master in Composition in Germany and everybody don't speak GermaGerman is not spoken.

I study a Master in Composition in Germany and everybody doesn't speak German.

There are many students from different countries or sometimes there are different foreign guests and they don’t speak German.


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There are many students from different countries, or sometimes there are different foreign guests and theythat don’t speak German.

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There are many students from different countries orand sometimes there are different foreign guests and theywho don’t speak German.

There are many students from different countries or, and sometimes there are different foreign guests and theywho don't speak German at all.

There are many students from differenta variety of countries or s. Sometimes, there are different foreign guests, and they don’t speak German.

To study in my university you need a certificate that attest that you have the required level.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

To study inat my university you need a certificate that attests that you have the required level.

It's not clear if you're talking about a required level in English or in German. I would say "the required English/German level" to make it clear.

To study in my university you need a certificate that attests that you have the required level.

To study in my university, you need a certificate that attest that you have the required levela certain level in English.

I'm unsure what you're trying to say here. I'm assuming that you need a certificate for having at least a B1/B2 English level, but am unsure if this also applies for German.

To study inat my university, you need a certificate that attests that you have the required level of German proficiency.

To study inat my university, you need a certificate thato attest that you have the required level.(?)

"Required level" is a bit ambiguous, and you don't really specify as to what you mean here.

To study in my university, you would need a certificate that attests that you have the required level.

In my case I needed a B2 certificate.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In my case, I needed a B2 certificate.

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In my case, I needed a B2 certificate.

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In my case, I needed a B2 certificate.

That was very difficult at the beginning because I started all this process with online classes.


ThGetting the certificate was very difficult at the beginning because I started all thisthe process with online classes.

That was very difficult at the beginning because I started all this process with online classes.

“All” can’t modify a singular noun

That was very difficult at the beginning because I started all this process with online classes.

What kind of online classes did you take at the beginning?

That was very difficult at the beginning because I started all this entire process with online classes.

That was very difficult at the beginning, because I started all this process with online classes.

That was very difficult at the beginning because I started all this processlanguage learning journey with online classes.

That was very difficult at the beginning because I started all this process with online classes.

I remember this opportunity like my first contact with Germans.


I remember this opportunity likeas my first contact with Germans.

I remember this opportunity like my first contact with Germans.

Not sure what the intended meaning is here. Maybe “I remember this opportunity because it was my first contact with Germans”.

I remember this opportunity like my first contact withbecause this was my first time I've met Germans.

I edited this sentence to sound more natural.

I remember thisat opportunity like my first contact with Germans.

I remember this opportunity like my firstas my first opportunity to come into contact with Germans.

I remember this opportunity likeas my first contact with Germans.

This was amazing but not all was incredible… In the next text I would like to explain how was my process with German because it was frustrating at the beginning but at the end I could pass the exam.


This was amazing but not all was incredible… ¶
perfect…¶

In the next text I would like to explain
how was my process withmy experience learning German because it was frustrating at the beginning, but at the end I couldwas able to pass the exam.

It's ok to use "incredible", but the meaning of the sentence is clearer with "perfect".

This was amazing but not all was incredible…


In the next
textentry I would like to explain how was my process with German went because it was frustrating at the beginning but at the end I could pass the exam.

This was amazing, but not alleverything was incredible… ¶


In the next text
, I would like to explain how was my process with German because it was frustrating to learn it at the beginning but a. At the end, I couldwas able to pass the exam.

I'm unsure if you already took the exam or you were able to take the exam. What exam are you talking about? Based on context, I'm assuming you are talking about an exam that tests your proficiency in German.

ThisIt was amazing, but noit wasn't all ways incredible…


In the next text I w
ould like to explain how wasill explain my process with learning German because it was frustrating at the beginning, but at the end I could passed the exam.

ThisIt was an amazing but not all was incredible… ¶
experience, but not everything was good…¶

In
themy next textentry, I would like to explain how was mytalk more about my learning process with German, because while it was frustrating at the beginning but at the end I could, I still passed the exam at the end.

This was amazing but not all was incredible…


In the next text
, I would like to explain how was my process with German becausewas; even though it was frustrating at the beginning but at the end, in the end it was worth it since I could pass the exam.

This was amazing, but not all was incredible…


In the next text I would like to explain
how was my process with German because it was frustrating at the beginning, but at the end I could passed the exam.

Thank you for read my first text.


Thank you for reading my first text.

Thank you for reading my first textentry.

Thank you for read my first text.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Thank you for read my first textentry.

Thank you for reading my first text.

At first I had private classes and after I paid for an offer in Lingoda, that is a school of languages.


At first I had private classes and after that I paid for an offer infrom Lingoda, that is a school of languages.

Could also say "offer with Lingoda" It sounds more natural to say "a language school" rather than "a school of languages", but both are correct

At first I had private classes, and afterthen I paid for an offer in Lingoda, thatwhich is a school of languages.

At first I had private classes and after. After that, I paid for an offer in Lingoda, that is awhich is an online school of languages.

I broke up the sentences so it sounds more fluid.

At first I had private classes and after I paid for an offer in Lingoda, thatwhich is a school of languages.

Wording is a little unnatural but correct. Something I would say: "At first I had private classes, and then I switched to study at Lingoda which is a language school."

At first, I had private classes, and after that, I paid for an offer inclasses at Lingoda, thatwhich is a school ofor learning languages.

At first, I had private classes and af. Later, I paid for an offer in Lingoda,; that is, a school of languages.

At first, I had private classes and afterwards I paid for an offer place in Lingoda, that is a school ofa languages school.

This was a great opportunity to learn because in Lingoda work many German teachers.


This was a great opportunity to learn because in Lingoda work many German teachers work at Lingoda.

This was a great opportunity to learn because in Lingoda work many German teachers work in Lingoda.

Or “lingoda has many German teachers”. Both sound more natural

This was a great opportunity to learn because in Lingoda work, there were many German teachers.

I'm unsure what you're trying to say. I'm assuming that you liked Lingoda because you learned English there.

This was a great opportunity to learn because in Lingoda workhas many German teachers.

This was a great opportunity to learn, because in Lingoda work many German teachersa lot of German teachers work at Lingoda.

This was a great opportunity to learn because in Lingoda work manyhas a lot of German teachers.

This was a great opportunity to learn because in Lingoda workthere are many German teachers.

This was a great opportunity to learn because in Lingoda work many German teachers.

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