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poro11

June 23, 2025

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hello, my name is Pablo, i want learning the idioms, i am happy, need help


hola, mi nombre es Pablo, yo quiero aprender el idioma, necesito ayuda

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hHello, my name is Pablo, i. I want to learning the idioms, i English. I am happy, but need some help!

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Fantastic attempt!

mMy fFirst tText

Titles should be capitalized

hHello, my name is Pablo, i. I want to learning the English idioms, i. I am happy,. I need help.

Break this up into complete sentences. "I" is always capitalized.

Feedback

Hello, welcome. This website is for practicing writing in a new language. If you learn some idioms in English, you can practice using them in your writing here for feedback from natives. Good luck!

mMy first text

Capitals are important in English.

hHello, my name is Pablo, i and I want to learning the idioms, i. I am happy, but need help.

There are too many commas that don't make sense. With your current structure it would have made more sense like this:
"Hello, my name is Pablo. I want to learn idioms. I am happy but need help."

I think you're using commas like periods. That being said, the first correction I made improves the structure and is significantly better.

Overall good job! You can do this!

my first text


mMy first text

Capitals are important in English.

mMy fFirst tText

Titles should be capitalized

mMy fFirst tText

hello, my name is Pablo, i want learning the idioms, i am happy, need help


hHello, my name is Pablo, i and I want to learning the idioms, i. I am happy, but need help.

There are too many commas that don't make sense. With your current structure it would have made more sense like this: "Hello, my name is Pablo. I want to learn idioms. I am happy but need help." I think you're using commas like periods. That being said, the first correction I made improves the structure and is significantly better. Overall good job! You can do this!

hHello, my name is Pablo, i. I want to learning the English idioms, i. I am happy,. I need help.

Break this up into complete sentences. "I" is always capitalized.

hHello, my name is Pablo, i. I want to learning the idioms, i English. I am happy, but need some help!

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