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Just a simple text about a article that I read today. Let's start with the theme "reason better", an interesting theme (I think, though). I searched for this theme with the perspective to help me with my mind and brain. But the article was precise about how to reason, to question and firsty to realize what you got to do, with calmness and mindfulness.

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My first text

Just a simple text about an article that I read today.

Let's start with the theme "reason better", an interesting theme (I think, though).

I searched for this theme with the perspective to help me withimprove my mind and brain.

But tThe article was precise about how to reason, to question and firstmost importantly to realize what you gowant to do, with calmness and mindfulness.

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Just a simple text about an article that I read today.

Let's start with the theme "reason better", an interesting theme (I think, though).

though is inconsequential at the end of that statement.

I searched for this theme with the perspective tof it helping me with my mind and brain.

But the article was precise about how to reason, how to question and. You firsty need to realize what you got to do, with calmness and mindfulness.

I have tried to bring coherence to it.

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Good job, keep it up :-)

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Thank you!!

Let's start with the theme "reason better", an interesting theme (I think, though).

I searched for this theme withfrom the perspective tof help meing myself with my mind and brain.

But the article was precise about how to reason, how to question and firstprimarily to realize what you gothave to do, with calmness and mindfulness.

"Got" is used a lot but it is colloquial in most cases. For example, a native would probably use "gotta do" in this sentence writing to friends. 'Have' is the proper word in this case.

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Good start and bem-vind*!

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My first texpost

or "entry"

Just a simple texpost about an article that I read today.:

Let's start with the theme "reason better", an interesting theme (I think, thoughanyway).

I searched for this theme with the perspective to help me with my mind and brain.

I think you mean "in order to better understand how my mind works"?

But the article was precise about how to reason, how to question and firsty to realizlastly how to determine what you've got to do, with calmness and mindfulness.

there is a rule not to start sentence with conjunctions, but most people don't care too much about it ...

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Thank you very much!

Just a simple text about a article that I read today.


Just a simple texpost about an article that I read today.:

Just a simple text about an article that I read today.

Just a simple text about an article that I read today.

Let's start with the theme "reason better", an interesting theme (I think, though).


Let's start with the theme "reason better", an interesting theme (I think, thoughanyway).

Let's start with the theme "reason better", an interesting theme (I think, though).

Let's start with the theme "reason better", an interesting theme (I think, though).

though is inconsequential at the end of that statement.

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I searched for this theme with the perspective to help me with my mind and brain.


I searched for this theme with the perspective to help me with my mind and brain.

I think you mean "in order to better understand how my mind works"?

I searched for this theme withfrom the perspective tof help meing myself with my mind and brain.

I searched for this theme with the perspective tof it helping me with my mind and brain.

I searched for this theme with the perspective to help me withimprove my mind and brain.

But the article was precise about how to reason, to question and firsty to realize what you got to do, with calmness and mindfulness.


But the article was precise about how to reason, how to question and firsty to realizlastly how to determine what you've got to do, with calmness and mindfulness.

there is a rule not to start sentence with conjunctions, but most people don't care too much about it ...

But the article was precise about how to reason, how to question and firstprimarily to realize what you gothave to do, with calmness and mindfulness.

"Got" is used a lot but it is colloquial in most cases. For example, a native would probably use "gotta do" in this sentence writing to friends. 'Have' is the proper word in this case.

But the article was precise about how to reason, how to question and. You firsty need to realize what you got to do, with calmness and mindfulness.

I have tried to bring coherence to it.

But tThe article was precise about how to reason, to question and firstmost importantly to realize what you gowant to do, with calmness and mindfulness.

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