Sept. 7, 2022
My first school day
My first school day was pretty good because my father drive me with the car to my new school. It was so I saw the list and find my room the school is very expensive. Me and the other children will be anything explain about the first year there and the facts. Us will be give a many documents and apps for the school and check. Over that we have a tour throught per the whole school with the both teacher. It give even a library and next thurdday we make our photos for our passed .
My first day of school day
My first day of school day was pretty good because my father driove me with the car to my new school.
"to drive" already means that you are driving a car
It was soWhen I arrived, I saw the list and fiound my room t. The school is very expeansive.
I'm not sure what your meaning is here... Perhaps, this is what you meant?
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I'm not sure what you mean by "check" - do you mean the verb "to check" or the noun "a check"
Remember that "us" is used after the verb, not as the subject of the sentence :)
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My first school day was pretty good, because my father driove me with the car to my new school.
Drove implies with a car, so you don't need to say that bit. I'd only specify if you drive with something different, like a motorcycle!
It was so I saw the list and fiound my room t. The school is very expensive.
Me and tThe other children and I will be anything explaintold about the first year there, and the factss well as facts about the school.
UsWe will be give an many documents and apps for the school and check.
OvAfter that we have a tour throught per the whole school with the both teachers.
It give even has a library, and next tThurdsday we mtake our photos for our passed s.
We usually say "take a photo".
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Great job! Very understandable, and well written. Good luck at your new school!
Sept. 10, 2022
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My first day of school day
My first school day was pretty good because my father driove me with the car to my new school.
It was so cool/amazing/exciting I saw the list and fiound my room the schout that my roolm is very expensive.
Me and the other children will be anythingnew students had to listen to them explain about the first year there and the facts.
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My first school day was pretty good because my father drive me with the car to my new school. My first My first school day was pretty good, because my father dr Drove implies with a car, so you don't need to say that bit. I'd only specify if you drive with something different, like a motorcycle! My first day of school "to drive" already means that you are driving a car |
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It was so I saw the list and find my room the school is very expensive. It was so cool/amazing/exciting I saw the list and f
I'm not sure what your meaning is here... Perhaps, this is what you meant? |
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Me and the other children will be anything explain about the first year there and the facts. Me and the other
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Us will be give a many documents and apps for the school and check.
I'm not sure what you mean by "check" - do you mean the verb "to check" or the noun "a check" Remember that "us" is used after the verb, not as the subject of the sentence :) |
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Over that we have a tour throught per the whole school with the both teacher.
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It give even a library and next thurdday we make our photos for our passed .
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