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Lily_JP

Oct. 3, 2024

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My first post

Hi.
I'm a newbie here.
I don't like writing much, but at the same time, I know writing skill is one of the skills I need to work hard on.
My biggest concern is that I may not be able to continue writing here.
I've never kept a diary for more than three days because I have nothing to write in my diary.
Anyway, I'll try to do my best.
Wish me luck.


こんにちは。
私はここの新入りです。
文章を書くのはあまり好きではないですが、同時に文章を書くスキルは私が努力しなければならないスキルの一つだと思います。
一番の懸念は、ここで書き続けられるかどうかです。
日記に書くことがないので、日記を3日以上続けたことがないです。
とにかく、がんばります。
幸運を祈って。

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My first post

Hi.

I'm a newbie here.

I don't like writing much, but at the same time, I know writing skill is one of the skills I need to work hard on.

My biggest concern is that I may not be able to continue writing here.

I've never kept a diary for more than three days because I have nothing to write in my diary.

Anyway, I'll try to do my best.

Wish me luck.

Feedback

Good luck!

My first post

Hi.

I'm a newbie here.

I don't like to writinge much, but at the same time, I know writing skill is one of the skills I need to work hard on.

My biggest concern is that I may not be able to continue writing here.

I've never kept a diary for more than three days because I have nothing to write in my diary.

Anyway, I'll try to do my best.

Wish me luck.

Feedback

This was also my problem when I started, but it gets easier the more you do it! Keep at it.

My first post

Hi.

I'm a newbie here.

I don't like writing very much, but at the same time, I know writing skill is one of the skills I need to work hard on.

My biggest concern is that I may not be able to continue writing herecoming up with new ideas to write about.

I've never kept a diary for more than three days because I have nothing to write in my diaryabout.

Anyway, I'll try to do my best.

Wish me luck.

Feedback

いらっしゃいませ!
Welcome!

This was a great first post. Good job.

You can write about anything at all. It doesn't need to be a diary.

Simply write about what interests you. Write something about a movie you watched, a game you played, something you had to do at work/school/home, a happy memory, a favourite trip, something you've always wanted to try, your favourite food, etc. etc.

As someone from outside of Japan, I would love to read about your home town, your thoughts on current affairs (what is important to you and why), and why you want to learn English.

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Lily_JP

Oct. 5, 2024

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Thank you for your advice. I'll take it to heart.

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Hi.

I'm a newbie here.

I don't like writing much, but at the same time, I know writing skill is one of the skills I need to work hard on.

My biggest concern is that I may not be able to continue writing here.

I've never kept a diary for more than three days because I have nothing to write in my diary.

Anyway, I'll try to do my best.

Wish me luck.

Feedback

You can use the writing prompts to help you write something in English or any other language you want to learn.

My fFirst pPost

Titles are usually capitalised. Personally I’m not too bothered by people not capitalising them here, but some people on this platform are.

Hi.

I'm a newbie here.

I don't like writing much, but at the same time, I know writing skill is one of the skills I need to work hardimprove on.

You don’t really need to say “skill” here. It’s implied that you’re talking about writing as a skill just from the context (so you could even just say “I know writing is something I need to improve on” and it would still be fine), and it’s even less necessary since you say “one of the skills” afterwards.
“Improve” would be the more natural word usage here.

My biggest concern is that I may not be able to continue writing here.

I've never kept a diary for more than three days because I have nothing to write in my diaryabout.

Completely optional, but this way avoids the repetition of “diary”.

Anyway, I'll try to do my best.

Wish me luck.

Feedback

Good job! That is so true with not having anything to write about and that is probably what I hate the most about this site. You could look at the prompts section for ideas, but personally I don’t really have anything to talk about to respond to them, or when I do I just don’t have the confidence to write the kind of answer that I would want to. But maybe you’ll have more luck with Japanese prompts?
Good luck with trying to continue writing here and also with learning English as a whole!

Anyway, I'll try to do my best.


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I don't like writing much, but at the same time, I know writing skill is one of the skills I need to work hard on.


I don't like writing much, but at the same time, I know writing skill is one of the skills I need to work hardimprove on.

You don’t really need to say “skill” here. It’s implied that you’re talking about writing as a skill just from the context (so you could even just say “I know writing is something I need to improve on” and it would still be fine), and it’s even less necessary since you say “one of the skills” afterwards. “Improve” would be the more natural word usage here.

I don't like writing much, but at the same time, I know writing skill is one of the skills I need to work hard on.

I don't like writing very much, but at the same time, I know writing skill is one of the skills I need to work hard on.

I don't like to writinge much, but at the same time, I know writing skill is one of the skills I need to work hard on.

I don't like writing much, but at the same time, I know writing skill is one of the skills I need to work hard on.

My biggest concern is that I may not be able to continue writing here.


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I've never kept a diary for more than three days because I have nothing to write in my diary.


I've never kept a diary for more than three days because I have nothing to write in my diaryabout.

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