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Sakai

Dec. 12, 2019

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Hi everyone!

I'm new here, I was searching for a long time a website like this where I could write some short stories and get feedback to improve my English. I think writing is the best way to practice. Perhaps, I will make many grammar mistakes because I won't use any help from Google Translate, but I'll thank you so much if you help me with corrections.

I'm Spanish native speaker, if I can help you with anything to learn Spanish, tell me.


¡Hola a todos!

Soy nuevo aquí, estuve buscando por mucho tiempo un sitio web como este donde pudiera escribir algunas historias cortas y obtener retroalimentación para mejorar mi inglés. Yo pienso que escribir es la mejor manera de practicar. Quizá, cometeré muchos errores de gramática porque no usaré ayuda de Google Traductor, pero agradeceré mucho si me ayudan con correcciones.

Soy hablador nativo de español, si puedo ayudarles con algo a aprender español, díganme.

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My first post

Hi everyone!

I'm new here,: I was searching for a long time a website like this where I could write some short stories, and get feedback to improve my English.

I think writing is the best way to practice.

Perhaps, I willI might make many grammartical mistakes because I won't use any help from Google Translate, but I'll thank you so much if yoube grateful if you could help me with corrections.


I'm a Spanish native speaker, i. If I can help you with anything abouto learning Spanish, tell me.

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Good job!

My first post

Hi everyone!

I'm new here, I was searching for a long time a website like this where I could write some short stories and get feedback to improve my English.

I think writing is the best way to practice.

Perhaps, I will make manyI might make a lot of grammar mistakes because I won't use any help from Google Translate, but I'll thank you so much if youd be happy if you could help me with corrections.

I think this is the best sentence here.

I'm Spanish native speaker, if I can help you with anything to learn Spanish, tell me.

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I think you speak good English, with only a few mistakes.

My first post

Hi everyone!

I'm new here, I was've been searching for a long time for a website like this where I could write some short stories and get feedback to improve my English.

I think writing is the best way to practice.

Perhaps, I will make many grammartical mistakes because I won't use any help from Google Translate, but I'll thank you so muchso I'd appreciate if you help me with corrections.

I'm a Spanish native speaker, so if I can help you with anything abouto learning Spanish, tell me.

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Very well written, well done!

My first post

Hi everyone!

I'm new here, I wasand I've been searching for a long time for a website like this where I could write some short stories and get feedback to improve my English.

The other corrections people have given work just as fine.

I think writing is the best way to practice.

Perhaps, I willI might make many grammar mistakes because I won't use any help from Google Translate, but I'll thank you so muchbe grateful if you help me with corrections.

I'm Spanisha native Spanish speaker, so if I can help you with anything abouto learning Spanish, tell melet me know.

"let me know" sounds a bit softer or more friendly

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Welcome to LangCorrect! I hope you have a nice time, and hopefully we can help you out!

My first post

Hi everyone!

I'm new here,. I washave been searching for a long time for a website like this where I could write some short stories and get feedback to improve my English.

I think writing is the best way to practice.

Perhaps, I willI might make many grammar mistakes because I won't use Google Translate (or, I won't get any help from Google Translate), but I'll thank you so muchd be so thankful if you could help me with corrections.

I'm Spanisha native speaker, i of Spanish. If I can help you with anything in regards to learning Spanish, tell melet me know.

"Tell me" sounds more like a command while "Let me know" sounds more like a kind offer of assistance :)

My first post

Hi everyone!

I'm new here,. I was've been searching for a long time for a website like this where I could write some short stories and get feedback to improve my English.

I think writing is the best way to practice.

Perhaps, I willI might make many grammar mistakes because I won't use any help from Google Translate, butso I'll thank you so muchreally appreciate it if you help me with corrections.


I'm Spanish native speaker, so if I can help you with anything to do with learning Spanish, tell melet me know.

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Welcome to LangCorrect! You are off to a great start!

My first post

Hi everyone!

I'm new here,. I was searching for a long time for a website like this where I could write some short stories and get feedback to improve my English.

Search [something] ❌
Search for [something] ✔

I think writing is the best way to practice.

Perhaps, I will make many grammar mistakes because I won't use any help from Google Translate, but I'll thank you so muchbe so thankful if you help me with corrections.


"I'll be so thankful" is more natural sounding, while "I'll thank you so much" sounds unnatural.

I'm a native Spanish native speaker, if I can help you with anything tofor learning Spanish, tell me.

"anything/something for [verb]ing" sounds better here.

"Do you have anything to eat" = "Do you have anything I can eat" ✔
"Do you have anything for eating" = "Do you have anything that one can *use* to eat" ❌ (unnatural, sounds like you're asking for silverware or plates)

"Do you have anything to learn" = "Do you have anything you can learn" ❌ (unnatural, sounds like you're asking for someone to "give" you school subjects or lessons)
"Do you have anything for learning" = "Do you have anything I can use for learning" ✔ (this fits your sentence)

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Welcome to the site! Your English is very good and I hope you stick around and get lots of value out of writing! Let me know if you have any questions about my corrections.

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I'm new here, I was searching for a long time a website like this where I could write some short stories and get feedback to improve my English.


I'm new here,. I was searching for a long time for a website like this where I could write some short stories and get feedback to improve my English.

Search [something] ❌ Search for [something] ✔

I'm new here,. I was've been searching for a long time for a website like this where I could write some short stories and get feedback to improve my English.

I'm new here,. I washave been searching for a long time for a website like this where I could write some short stories and get feedback to improve my English.

I'm new here, I wasand I've been searching for a long time for a website like this where I could write some short stories and get feedback to improve my English.

The other corrections people have given work just as fine.

I'm new here, I was've been searching for a long time for a website like this where I could write some short stories and get feedback to improve my English.

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I'm new here,: I was searching for a long time a website like this where I could write some short stories, and get feedback to improve my English.

I think writing is the best way to practice.


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Perhaps, I will make many grammar mistakes because I won't use any help from Google Translate, but I'll thank you so much if you help me with corrections.


Perhaps, I will make many grammar mistakes because I won't use any help from Google Translate, but I'll thank you so muchbe so thankful if you help me with corrections.


"I'll be so thankful" is more natural sounding, while "I'll thank you so much" sounds unnatural.

Perhaps, I willI might make many grammar mistakes because I won't use any help from Google Translate, butso I'll thank you so muchreally appreciate it if you help me with corrections.


Perhaps, I willI might make many grammar mistakes because I won't use Google Translate (or, I won't get any help from Google Translate), but I'll thank you so muchd be so thankful if you could help me with corrections.

Perhaps, I willI might make many grammar mistakes because I won't use any help from Google Translate, but I'll thank you so muchbe grateful if you help me with corrections.

Perhaps, I will make many grammartical mistakes because I won't use any help from Google Translate, but I'll thank you so muchso I'd appreciate if you help me with corrections.

Perhaps, I will make manyI might make a lot of grammar mistakes because I won't use any help from Google Translate, but I'll thank you so much if youd be happy if you could help me with corrections.

I think this is the best sentence here.

Perhaps, I willI might make many grammartical mistakes because I won't use any help from Google Translate, but I'll thank you so much if yoube grateful if you could help me with corrections.


I'm Spanish native speaker, if I can help you with anything to learn Spanish, tell me.


I'm a native Spanish native speaker, if I can help you with anything tofor learning Spanish, tell me.

"anything/something for [verb]ing" sounds better here. "Do you have anything to eat" = "Do you have anything I can eat" ✔ "Do you have anything for eating" = "Do you have anything that one can *use* to eat" ❌ (unnatural, sounds like you're asking for silverware or plates) "Do you have anything to learn" = "Do you have anything you can learn" ❌ (unnatural, sounds like you're asking for someone to "give" you school subjects or lessons) "Do you have anything for learning" = "Do you have anything I can use for learning" ✔ (this fits your sentence)

I'm Spanish native speaker, so if I can help you with anything to do with learning Spanish, tell melet me know.

I'm Spanisha native speaker, i of Spanish. If I can help you with anything in regards to learning Spanish, tell melet me know.

"Tell me" sounds more like a command while "Let me know" sounds more like a kind offer of assistance :)

I'm Spanisha native Spanish speaker, so if I can help you with anything abouto learning Spanish, tell melet me know.

"let me know" sounds a bit softer or more friendly

I'm a Spanish native speaker, so if I can help you with anything abouto learning Spanish, tell me.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm a Spanish native speaker, i. If I can help you with anything abouto learning Spanish, tell me.

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