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haz

Dec. 10, 2019

2
My first post

This is my first post.
First,I talk everyone about myself.
I'm just beginner who started study English.
I live in Japan. I'm 24 years old.
My English name is Emma.

I'll post diaries or something questions from today.

If you can teach me English,Please correct my post.
and add me for your friends.
Thank you for read my post.
I'm waiting for everyone comments.
-Haz.

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First, I talk to everyone about myself.

I'm am just a beginner who started to study English.

I'll post diaries or something questions from today.


If you can teach me English,P please correct my post.

Thank you for reading my post.

I'm waiting for everyone's comments.

Feedback

It's rough English, but understandable. Good job!

haz's avatar
haz

Dec. 11, 2019

2

Thank you.

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oshen

Dec. 11, 2019

0

I'm am just a beginner who started to study English.

Switch "I'm am" with "I am" other than that, this is good.

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dean

Dec. 11, 2019

0

I'm am just a beginner who started to study English.

I'm just a beginner who started to study English.

My first post

This is my first post.

First,I talk I'll tell everyonebody about myself.

I'm just beginner who startedvery new to studying English.

I live in Japan.

I'm 24 years old.

My English name is Emma.

I'll post diaries or something questions fromstarting today.

If you can teach me English, Please correct my post.

and add me foras your friends.

Thank yous for reading my post.

I'm waiting for everyone comments. ¶
comments from everyone

-Haz.

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haz

Dec. 14, 2019

2

Thank you.

MThis is my first post.

Unless it's the title, it should be made into a full sentence by adding "this is".

This is my first post.

I'm just a beginner who started studying English.

I live in Japan.

I'm 24 years old.

My English name is Emma.

I'll post diary entries or something questions from toof the day.


If you can teach me English,P please correct my posts.

aAnd add me for youras a friends. .

Thank you for reading my post.

I'm waiting for everyone's comments.

Feedback

Great job!

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haz

Dec. 11, 2019

2

Thank you.

My first post

This is my first post.

First, I talkwill tell everyone about myself.

I'm just a beginner who started studying English.

I live in Japan.

I'm 24 years old.

My English name is Emma.

I'll post diaries or something questions fromstarting today.


If you can teach me English,P please correct my posts.

and add me foras your friends. .

Thank you for reading my post.

I'm awaiting for everyone's comments.

-Haz.

Feedback

Hello Haz and welcome!

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haz

Dec. 11, 2019

2

Thank you.

0

My first post

This is my first post.

First,I talk everyone let me tell you about myself.

I'm justa beginner who just started studying English.

I live in Japan.

I'm 24 years old.

My English name is Emma.

I'll post diaries or somethingand questions starting from today.


If you can teach me English,P please correct my post.

and add me foras your friends. .

Thank you for reading my post.

I'm waiting for everyone's comments.

haz's avatar
haz

Dec. 10, 2019

2

Thank you Rae.

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I'll post diaries or something questions from today.


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If you can teach me English,Please correct my post.


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If you can teach me English,P please correct my post.

and add me for your friends.


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Thank you for read my post.


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I'm waiting for everyone comments.


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I'm waiting for everyone's comments.

-Haz.


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