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Aussdi

Aug. 4, 2025

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My first post

Hi all .Since my childhood i have tried to do many things in my life : to be a writer , programmer , to practice volley_ball , arrchery , read books , learn english and french , farming ........ect . Nowadays , i see myself lost . i haven't achieved any of my goals and moreeee nothing at all even my english level are horrible . to be frankly with you , and i'm keep going i'm trying to find what is the issue and i find that.........
to be continue ( i need to know more words to express ) ( and without sympathy please)

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My first post

Hi all . Since my childhood i, I have tried to do many things in my life : to be a writer ing, programmer , to practiceing, volley_ball , arrchery , reading books , learn eing English and fFrench , farming ........ect , etc.

Nowadays , iI see myself lost .

iI haven't achieved any of my goals and moreeee , nothing at all e. Even my eEnglish level areis horrible .

tTo be frankly with you , and i'm, I keep going iand I'm trying to find what is the issue is and iI find that.........
t

T
o be continued ( iI need to know more words to properly express ) ) ( and withoutno sympathy please)

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This may seem harsh (tried to be strict because you said "no sympathy")
Your biggest issue is grammar, and if you want to figure out how to express yourself in English better, there are online dictionaries
Other than that your English isn't bad, this was easy to understand

Hi all, .Since my childhood iI have tried to do many things in my life : to be a writer , programmer , to, practice volley_ball , arrchery , read books , learn english and, french , farming ........ectetc .

I ( I should always be in capital letter) have tried to do many things or you say (a lot of things).
in my life is not needed.
No need of spacing before the comma, it is etc (not ect) the ...... is not useful there ( 3 dots is used for suspension and such is not needed at that place)

Nowadays , i sfee myselfl lost .

Nowadays, I feel lost

i haven't achieved any of my goals and moreeee nothing at all even my english level areis horrible .

(The moreeee) is not needed.
Even my English level is (is used for singular noun) while "are " is the plural form

Frankly or to be frankly with you , and i'mI keep going i'm trying to find out what is the issue is and iI discovered that or find out that.........
to be continue ( i need to know more words to express
myself ) ( and without sympathy please)

Frankly is an adverb so you can use it alone as a connector or you say to be frank with you.
Keep going is more better.
You say find out or discover.

Feedback

Kudos to you for trying to express yourself in a new language, it is not really easy.

Keep pushing harder.

My fFirst pPost

Title capitalization rules

Hi all . Since my childhood i, I have tried to do many things in my life : to be a writer , a programmer , to practice volley_ball , arrchery , reading books , learn eing English and fFrench , farming ........ect , how to farm, etc.

"I" is always capitalized. There are no spaces before commas or periods.

Nowadays , iI see myself as lost .

iI haven't achieved any of my goals and moreeee , nothing at all , and even my eEnglish level areis horrible .

The "and more" doesn't add anything here, best to delete it

tTo be frankly with you , and i'm keep going i'mI keep trying to find what is the issue is, and iI find that......... ¶
t

T
o be continue ( id. (I need to knowlearn more words to express myself) ( aAnd withoutno sympathy, please)

You can say "To be frank," or just "Frankly,"
For a pause, ellipses are used, which are always 3 dots (...)

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Great job

My first post


My fFirst pPost

Title capitalization rules

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Hi all .Since my childhood i have tried to do many things in my life : to be a writer , programmer , to practice volley_ball , arrchery , read books , learn english and french , farming ........ect .


Hi all . Since my childhood i, I have tried to do many things in my life : to be a writer , a programmer , to practice volley_ball , arrchery , reading books , learn eing English and fFrench , farming ........ect , how to farm, etc.

"I" is always capitalized. There are no spaces before commas or periods.

Hi all, .Since my childhood iI have tried to do many things in my life : to be a writer , programmer , to, practice volley_ball , arrchery , read books , learn english and, french , farming ........ectetc .

I ( I should always be in capital letter) have tried to do many things or you say (a lot of things). in my life is not needed. No need of spacing before the comma, it is etc (not ect) the ...... is not useful there ( 3 dots is used for suspension and such is not needed at that place)

Hi all . Since my childhood i, I have tried to do many things in my life : to be a writer ing, programmer , to practiceing, volley_ball , arrchery , reading books , learn eing English and fFrench , farming ........ect , etc.

Nowadays , i see myself lost .


Nowadays , iI see myself as lost .

Nowadays , i sfee myselfl lost .

Nowadays, I feel lost

Nowadays , iI see myself lost .

i haven't achieved any of my goals and moreeee nothing at all even my english level are horrible .


iI haven't achieved any of my goals and moreeee , nothing at all , and even my eEnglish level areis horrible .

The "and more" doesn't add anything here, best to delete it

i haven't achieved any of my goals and moreeee nothing at all even my english level areis horrible .

(The moreeee) is not needed. Even my English level is (is used for singular noun) while "are " is the plural form

iI haven't achieved any of my goals and moreeee , nothing at all e. Even my eEnglish level areis horrible .

to be frankly with you , and i'm keep going i'm trying to find what is the issue and i find that......... to be continue ( i need to know more words to express ) ( and without sympathy please)


tTo be frankly with you , and i'm keep going i'mI keep trying to find what is the issue is, and iI find that......... ¶
t

T
o be continue ( id. (I need to knowlearn more words to express myself) ( aAnd withoutno sympathy, please)

You can say "To be frank," or just "Frankly," For a pause, ellipses are used, which are always 3 dots (...)

Frankly or to be frankly with you , and i'mI keep going i'm trying to find out what is the issue is and iI discovered that or find out that.........
to be continue ( i need to know more words to express
myself ) ( and without sympathy please)

Frankly is an adverb so you can use it alone as a connector or you say to be frank with you. Keep going is more better. You say find out or discover.

tTo be frankly with you , and i'm, I keep going iand I'm trying to find what is the issue is and iI find that.........
t

T
o be continued ( iI need to know more words to properly express ) ) ( and withoutno sympathy please)

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