July 9, 2025
My first post
Hello guys,this is my first time I write the post and use this website.Now,I'll review about me.My name's Hung,I'ma VietNamese.My country's in the Asia.specifically in Southeast Asia.Near China,Cambodia,Thailand.There are many special places.One of the most beautiful and picturesque places,especially Ha Long Bay.In addition to Ha Long Bay,Hoi An Ancient Town attracts many tourists.Let me explain why it's so attractive.There're many colorful lanterns and many old houses along to line.I love my country and proud of everything in my country.My mistake others can help me to check and point out my error.Thanks for reading everyone
Hello guys, this is my first time I write theing a post and useing this website. Now, I'll review about me. My name's Hung, I'ma VietNnamese. My country's in the Asia.s Specifically in Southeast Asia.N, near China, Cambodia, and Thailand. There are many special places. One of the most especially beautiful and picturesque places,especially is Ha Long Bay. In addition to Ha Long Bay, Hoi An Ais an ancient Ttown attracts many tourists. Let me explain why it's so attractive. There' are many colorful lanterns and many old houses along to line.(?). I love my country and proud of everything in my country.My mistake Can others can help me to check and point out my error.s? Thanks for reading everyone
Great work! When writing in English, there is always a space after each period (.) or comma (,). In your first sentence, since you are currently writing and using the website, you would say writing instead of write. Also in English, we spell it Vietnamese with only the V capital because we (stupidly) call it Vietnam, not Viet Nam. I only mention it because if you go to enter it on an important form, that is how it would look.
Because Asia is a proper noun, you can just say 'my country's in Asia', but that WOULD be right if you wanted to say 'my phone is in the house'. English is weird.
'One of the most especially beautiful and picturesque places is Ha Long Bay' makes more sense that you are saying ALL of Viet Nam is special and beautiful, but Ha Long Bay especially so.
Correct me if I am wrong here, but it looks like you are trying to say that Hoi An is an ancient town with a lot of tourists. I changed Ancient Town to ancient town because that makes it look like the full name of the city is Hoi An Ancient Town.
Also, sorry, I did not know what you meant about the old houses. Are they in a line? Or along a river in a line?
For that ending sentence, I did not know if you were trying to ask others to help you (can others help me to check and point out my errors) or more as a statement (Thank you for checking and pointing out my errors)
Feedback
Great work! English is very hard, and you are doing a GREAT job! I hope to visit Ha Long Bay and Hoi An one day!
July 9, 2025
You're welcom.My homeland is very beautiful,and people very kind!Thanks your feedback.I hope all of you
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Hello guys,this is my first time I write the post and use this website.Now,I'll review about me.My name's Hung,I'ma VietNamese.My country's in the Asia.specifically in Southeast Asia.Near China,Cambodia,Thailand.There are many special places.One of the most beautiful and picturesque places,especially Ha Long Bay.In addition to Ha Long Bay,Hoi An Ancient Town attracts many tourists.Let me explain why it's so attractive.There're many colorful lanterns and many old houses along to line.I love my country and proud of everything in my country.My mistake others can help me to check and point out my error.Thanks for reading everyone Hello guys, this is my first time Great work! When writing in English, there is always a space after each period (.) or comma (,). In your first sentence, since you are currently writing and using the website, you would say writing instead of write. Also in English, we spell it Vietnamese with only the V capital because we (stupidly) call it Vietnam, not Viet Nam. I only mention it because if you go to enter it on an important form, that is how it would look. Because Asia is a proper noun, you can just say 'my country's in Asia', but that WOULD be right if you wanted to say 'my phone is in the house'. English is weird. 'One of the most especially beautiful and picturesque places is Ha Long Bay' makes more sense that you are saying ALL of Viet Nam is special and beautiful, but Ha Long Bay especially so. Correct me if I am wrong here, but it looks like you are trying to say that Hoi An is an ancient town with a lot of tourists. I changed Ancient Town to ancient town because that makes it look like the full name of the city is Hoi An Ancient Town. Also, sorry, I did not know what you meant about the old houses. Are they in a line? Or along a river in a line? For that ending sentence, I did not know if you were trying to ask others to help you (can others help me to check and point out my errors) or more as a statement (Thank you for checking and pointing out my errors) |
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