May 14, 2025
Hello. This is my first post. From this autum, I will be a bachelor student of foregin( the country is secret:) ) univercsity student. The level of english in university will be pretty much high. However my english is kind of trush so i am so afraid of not followling (like cannot ) class. Ever since AI is improved, non native english people tend not make the engloish sentence by myself. Obviously I am the one too. Nevertheless, I do not want to rely AI anymore. I want to have real power to make wondeful sentence in English. That why I deceided to start this daily. I hope someone look my daily.
こんにちは。これが私の最初の投稿になります。 この秋から私はどこか外国の大学生になります。大学での英語のレベルはとても高いものになるでしょう。しかしわたしの英語力は正直ごみのようです。クラスについていけなくなるかもしれないと思っています。AIが進歩してから非ネイティブは自分自身によって英語の文章を作らなくなるようになりました。私もその一人です。しかし私はこれ以上AIに頼りたくないです。自分自身の力で英語の文章を作れるようになりたいです。これがわたしが英語の日記を始めた理由です。誰かが見てくれるといいな。
My first post
Hello.
This is my first post.
From this autumn on, I will be a bachelor student of a foregin( ign university (the country is secret :) ) univercsity student.
Alternatively: "Starting from this autumn".
The levelstandard of eEnglish in university will be pretty much high.
(1) "level of English" is understandable, but not the best way to put it. Consider "standard of English".
(2) "English" is a proper noun and should always be capitalised.
However, my eEnglish is kind of truash, so iI am so afraid of not followling (like cannot )being able to follow in class.
(1) This isn't necessary, since this sentence isn't that lengthy, but you can consider introducing some comma breaks.
(2) "I" should always be capitalised.
(3) "so I am so afraid" isn't wrong, but the repetition of "so" might sound jarring to native ears. Alternatively: "However, my English is kind of trash, and I am so afraid of..."
Ever since AI ihas improved, non -native eEnglish speopleakers tend not to make the eEngloish sentences by myselfthemselves.
(1) "Ever since" implies that AI's improvement occurred in the past. Hence, it should be "has", not "is" (past tense).
(2) "non" is followed by a hyphen.
(3) Turning "the English sentence" plural makes more sense I think. When you use "the", you're referring to a specific English sentence, while the plural form refers to English sentences in general.
Obviously I am thone onef them too.
You can consider adding "of them". When you say "I am one too", it could mean that you're also a non-native English speaker, but not necessarily one that uses AI. Using "of them" helps to clear up this ambiguity.
NHowevertheless, I do not want to rely AI anymore.
I think "however" is a better choice than "nevertheless". There is an extremely slight difference between the two, and I feel an explanation of it will be much too convoluted and probably ineffective. Don't worry about for now. I think it'll have to come with repeated exposure.
I want to have the real power to make wonderful sentences in English.
"real power" is okay, but I personally prefer "the real power".
That is why I deceided to start doing this daily.
I hope (that) someone can look myat my posts daily.
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Welcome here! I look forward to seeing your writing and progress.
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From this autum, I will be a bachelor student of foregin( the country is secret:) ) univercsity student.
From this Autumn I’ll be a bachelor student of a foreign university (the country of where this university is, is a secret)
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Not sure what you’re trying to say here. Is it that you’ll be studying in English so practicing the language at a high level? Or you hope your English will improve to a high level?
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Are you talking about non natives or yourself? I’ve not been forming English sentences myself or non natives are using Ai to write sentences in English?
Obviously I am the one too.
I am one, I’m one of them is better than I am the one. The one indicates you’re unique if you add the preposition
I want to have real power to make wondeful sentences in English.
Sentences or a sentence
That is why I deceided to start doing this daily.
I hope that someone can look at my daily. entries
Is this what you meant to say
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Good try, just a few suggestions and corrections above
Nevertheless, I do not want to rely AI anymore.
I think "however" is a better choice than "nevertheless". There is an extremely slight difference between the two, and I feel an explanation of it will be much too convoluted and probably ineffective. Don't worry about for now. I think it'll have to come with repeated exposure. |
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From this autumn on, I will be a bachelor student of a fore Alternatively: "Starting from this autumn". |
The level of english in university will be pretty much high.
Not sure what you’re trying to say here. Is it that you’ll be studying in English so practicing the language at a high level? Or you hope your English will improve to a high level? The level of The (1) "level of English" is understandable, but not the best way to put it. Consider "standard of English". (2) "English" is a proper noun and should always be capitalised. |
However my english is kind of trush so i am so afraid of not followling (like cannot ) class. However my english is kind of Tush I’ve not heard this word used before maybe it’s American. I’d say rusty to show it’s something that you find hard and need to improve However my However, my (1) This isn't necessary, since this sentence isn't that lengthy, but you can consider introducing some comma breaks. (2) "I" should always be capitalised. (3) "so I am so afraid" isn't wrong, but the repetition of "so" might sound jarring to native ears. Alternatively: "However, my English is kind of trash, and I am so afraid of..." |
Ever since AI is improved, non native english people tend not make the engloish sentence by myself. Ever since AI Are you talking about non natives or yourself? I’ve not been forming English sentences myself or non natives are using Ai to write sentences in English? Ever since AI Ever since AI (1) "Ever since" implies that AI's improvement occurred in the past. Hence, it should be "has", not "is" (past tense). (2) "non" is followed by a hyphen. (3) Turning "the English sentence" plural makes more sense I think. When you use "the", you're referring to a specific English sentence, while the plural form refers to English sentences in general. |
Obviously I am the one too. Obviously I am I am one, I’m one of them is better than I am the one. The one indicates you’re unique if you add the preposition Obviously I am Obviously I am You can consider adding "of them". When you say "I am one too", it could mean that you're also a non-native English speaker, but not necessarily one that uses AI. Using "of them" helps to clear up this ambiguity. |
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