Nov. 3, 2019
My first post
Nice to meet you all of you on here!
My husband, my son, and I went to Universal Studio Japan yesterday.
They held the Halloween party till 4th, and many staffs gave my son candies!
He couldn’t say the words correctly, but tried hard to say like “tot aah toyeeet!”
He looked so satisfied with many candies!
My first post
NIt’s nice to meet you all of you on here!
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My husband, my son, and I went to Universal Studio Japan yesterday.
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They held the Halloween party untill the 4th, and many staff members gave my son candies!
You can replace “staff members” with “employees”
He couldn’t say the words correctly, but tried hard to sayand said something like “tot aah toyeeet!
He looked so satisfiedhappy with so many candies!
Nov. 4, 2019
Thank you for correction!
I didn’t know it’s called “staff members “! (I always used it like “staffs”)
I learned a lot! ありがとうございます😊
My first post
Nice to meet you all of you on here!
My husband, my son, and I went to Universal Studio Japan yesterday.
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Writing "my" twice is fine, but you can omit it as well.
They held thea Halloween party untill the 4th, and manyseveral members of the staffs gave my son candies!
He looked so satisfiedhappy with so many candies!
Nov. 3, 2019
Thank you for correction!!
My first post
NIt's nice to meet you all of you on here!
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They held thead a Halloween party untill the 4th, and many staff members gave my son candies!
He couldn’t say the words correctly, but tried hard to say something like “tot aah toyeeet!
He looked so satisfied with many candies!
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I would be very satisfied too if I received a lot of candy 😁
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