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kihot

Jan. 3, 2026

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My first note

Hello, it's my first try to write something here. I wanna improve my english. I'm sorry for my stupid mistakes in this text. I don't know how do work this platform, but I think I'll understand. My english is very bad, but tryna do something with it.

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My first note

Hello, it's my first tryattempt to write something here.

I wannat to improve my eEnglish.

I'm sorry for my stupid mistakes in this text.

I don't know how do work this platform, but I think I'll understandfigure it out.

My eEnglish is very bad, but tryna do something withI’m trying improve it.

Hello, it's my first tryime to write something here.

I wanna improve my eEnglish.

I don't know how dto workuse this platform, but I think I'll understand.

My eEnglish is very bad, but I want to tryna to do something withabout it.

Hello, it'this is my first try toattempt at writeing something here.

This sounds more natural to me - attempt instead of try.

I wannat to improve my eEnglish.

English should be capitalised.

I'm sorry for my stupid mistakes in this text.

I don't know how do work this platform, but I think I'll understand it eventually.

My eEnglish is very bad, but trynaI'm trying to do something withto improve it.

Hello, it's my first trying to write something here.

I wannat to improve my english.

Your way was also OK for being informal

I don't know how dto work this platform, but I think I'll begin to understand.

My english is very bad, but trynaing to do something with it.

Your was was OK too

Feedback

Good Job

My first note

Hello, it's my first try to write something on here.

I wanna improve my eEnglish.

Just keep in mind "wanna" is a very casual word. It's good for texting or social media, but avoid it in formal writing like essays or emails.

I'm sorry for my stupid mistakes in this text.

I don't know how dto work this platform, but I think I'll understand eventually.

My eEnglish is very bad, but tryna do something with it.

Same with tryna - it's a very casual word. It's fine to use in these journal entries but avoid it if you want to write emails or essays in English.

Feedback

Don't apologise for your mistakes - that's the whole point of this website! We all write in our target language, make mistakes, get corrections, and improve our skills over time. Keep up the good work, and I'm sure you'll improve tremendously with time!

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kihot

Jan. 3, 2026

2

Thanks for feedback!

My first note


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Hello, it's my first try to write something here.


Hello, it's my first try to write something on here.

Hello, it's my first trying to write something here.

Hello, it'this is my first try toattempt at writeing something here.

This sounds more natural to me - attempt instead of try.

Hello, it's my first tryime to write something here.

Hello, it's my first tryattempt to write something here.

I wanna improve my english.


I wanna improve my eEnglish.

Just keep in mind "wanna" is a very casual word. It's good for texting or social media, but avoid it in formal writing like essays or emails.

I wannat to improve my english.

Your way was also OK for being informal

I wannat to improve my eEnglish.

English should be capitalised.

I wanna improve my eEnglish.

I wannat to improve my eEnglish.

I'm sorry for my stupid mistakes in this text.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm sorry for my stupid mistakes in this text.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I don't know how do work this platform, but I think I'll understand.


I don't know how dto work this platform, but I think I'll understand eventually.

I don't know how dto work this platform, but I think I'll begin to understand.

I don't know how do work this platform, but I think I'll understand it eventually.

I don't know how dto workuse this platform, but I think I'll understand.

I don't know how do work this platform, but I think I'll understandfigure it out.

My english is very bad, but tryna do something with it.


My eEnglish is very bad, but tryna do something with it.

Same with tryna - it's a very casual word. It's fine to use in these journal entries but avoid it if you want to write emails or essays in English.

My english is very bad, but trynaing to do something with it.

Your was was OK too

My eEnglish is very bad, but trynaI'm trying to do something withto improve it.

My eEnglish is very bad, but I want to tryna to do something withabout it.

My eEnglish is very bad, but tryna do something withI’m trying improve it.

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