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Bair

Sept. 10, 2023

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My first note

So, this is my first note on this website. Hi my dear friendю. My name is Bair. And I'm from Russia. I'm start to study English language 2 weeks ago. And I find this website on youtube. Man from video recommend this site, because this help me learn language to fast (sorry for my english). So I start teach english with textbook (in the beginning I want write book, but i think it is not correct, so I write textbook) English Language Hub. I don't now this textbook is god or not. I'm teach present simple, modal verb - have to, have/has, preposition (in, on, at), plural nouns (this, that, these, those). That all what I teach at this moment (I hope, I correct to use preposition - at).


Итак это моя первая заметка на этом сайте. Привет мой дорогой друг. Меня зовут Баир. И я из России. Я начал учить английский язык 2 недели назад. И я нашел этот вебсайт на Ютубе. Человек из видео рекомендовал этот сайт, потомучто это поможет мне выучить английский быстрее (извините за мой английский). Итак я начал учить английский по учебнику (в начале я хотел написать книга, но подумал что будет не корректно, так что я написал учебник) English Language Hub. Я не знаю хорошая эта книга или нет. Я выучил настоящее простое время, модальный глагол - have to, предлоги (in, on, at). множественные существительные (this, that, these, those). Это все что я выучил на данный момент (надеюсь я правильно использовал предлог - at).

Corrections

My fFirst noteEssay / Journal / Work / Piece of Work / Piece of Writing

Important words in a title need a capital letter. Note is more something you write as a reminder or use to casual information.

So, tThis is my first noteessay / journal / work /piece of work / piece of writing on this website.

Do not need the so.

Hi, my dear friendю.

Put comma after hi to separate it from my dear friend.

My name is Bair.

And I'm from Russia.

Don't need the and.

I'm start toed studying the English language 2 weeks ago.

"started" - past tense as something you did in the past. "studying" present participle sounds better after "started". It suggests ongoing activity. Although you could use "to study". "the" need the definite article as talking about a specific language. Connect with next sentence.

Aand I fiound this website on yYoutTube.

Connected with previous sentence so lower case "a" in "and". Past tense so "found".

MThe man from the video recommended this site, because this will help me learn the language to fast (sorry for my eEnglish).

"The man" and "the video" as you are talking about specific videos. "recommended". "will help" future action / prediction. "the" language as you are talking about a specific language. "fast" not "to fast". "English" has a capital letter.

So I start teach eed learning English with the textbook (in the beginning I wanted to write book, but iI think it is inot correct, so I wriote textbook) English Language Hub.

"started" past tense, "learning" or "to learn". You are "learning". The book is "teaching". "wanted" past tense, "to write" you need the "to form of the infinitive after "want" e.g I want to eat, I wanted to speak. "not correct" = "incorrect". "wrote" = Past tense. You can write book or textbook, both are correct.

I don't know if this textbook is good or not.

"now" an adverb meaning "at this moment". Need "if" or "whether" to introduce the choice between "good or not".

I'm tleachrning the present simple, the modal verb - have to, have/has, the prepositions (in, on, at), plural noun and demonstratives (this, that, these, those).

"I'm learning" - present continuous. Need definite articles as learning specific topics. Several "prepositions".
"this, that, these, those" aren't nouns the are "demonstratives" and they are not all plural.

That is all wthat I teach'm learning at thise moment (I hope, I used the correct to use preposition - at).

"all that" not "all what". I'm learning - present continuous as it is something you are in the process of doing at the moment. It is more usually "at the moment". Yes "at" is correct.

Feedback

A good attempt. It must be difficult to write something like this if you have only learned the present simple tense as they are usually written in a past tense. Look out for definite and indefinite articles i.e. the / a / an.

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Bair

Sept. 20, 2023

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Thank you very much!!!

My first note


My fFirst noteEssay / Journal / Work / Piece of Work / Piece of Writing

Important words in a title need a capital letter. Note is more something you write as a reminder or use to casual information.

So, this is my first note on this website.


So, tThis is my first noteessay / journal / work /piece of work / piece of writing on this website.

Do not need the so.

Hi my dear friendю.


Hi, my dear friendю.

Put comma after hi to separate it from my dear friend.

My name is Bair.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

And I'm from Russia.


And I'm from Russia.

Don't need the and.

I'm start to study English language 2 weeks ago.


I'm start toed studying the English language 2 weeks ago.

"started" - past tense as something you did in the past. "studying" present participle sounds better after "started". It suggests ongoing activity. Although you could use "to study". "the" need the definite article as talking about a specific language. Connect with next sentence.

And I find this website on youtube.


Aand I fiound this website on yYoutTube.

Connected with previous sentence so lower case "a" in "and". Past tense so "found".

Man from video recommend this site, because this help me learn language to fast (sorry for my english).


MThe man from the video recommended this site, because this will help me learn the language to fast (sorry for my eEnglish).

"The man" and "the video" as you are talking about specific videos. "recommended". "will help" future action / prediction. "the" language as you are talking about a specific language. "fast" not "to fast". "English" has a capital letter.

So I start teach english with textbook (in the beginning I want write book, but i think it is not correct, so I write textbook) English Language Hub.


So I start teach eed learning English with the textbook (in the beginning I wanted to write book, but iI think it is inot correct, so I wriote textbook) English Language Hub.

"started" past tense, "learning" or "to learn". You are "learning". The book is "teaching". "wanted" past tense, "to write" you need the "to form of the infinitive after "want" e.g I want to eat, I wanted to speak. "not correct" = "incorrect". "wrote" = Past tense. You can write book or textbook, both are correct.

I don't now this textbook is god or not.


I don't know if this textbook is good or not.

"now" an adverb meaning "at this moment". Need "if" or "whether" to introduce the choice between "good or not".

I'm teach present simple, modal verb - have to, have/has, preposition (in, on, at), plural nouns (this, that, these, those).


I'm tleachrning the present simple, the modal verb - have to, have/has, the prepositions (in, on, at), plural noun and demonstratives (this, that, these, those).

"I'm learning" - present continuous. Need definite articles as learning specific topics. Several "prepositions". "this, that, these, those" aren't nouns the are "demonstratives" and they are not all plural.

That all what I teach at this moment (I hope, I correct to use preposition - at).


That is all wthat I teach'm learning at thise moment (I hope, I used the correct to use preposition - at).

"all that" not "all what". I'm learning - present continuous as it is something you are in the process of doing at the moment. It is more usually "at the moment". Yes "at" is correct.

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