Oct. 30, 2020
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I'm very happy these days 'cause I back to study german and sometimes take a look in italian and hiragana (a japanese alphabet), but german is my focus. Before that, I just sleep all day or play Assassins Odyssey.
I trying to learn german on my own since I don't have money. I have spent hours studying like listening, reading and speaking.
My sleep hours are twisted, I'm brazilian so i love coffe - we plant a lot- so I drink 2 (two) or 3 (three) cup of coffe on afternoon. But i think i'm immune to "cafeína", 'cause i drink this since i has a kid. I have to fix that, sleep right.
Today i eat bread and cuzido. I'm eating a lot and because that I gained some weight.
Eu estou muito feliz esses dias porque eu voltei a estudar alemão e as vezes dá uma olhada em italiano e hiragana, mas alemão é a minha prioridade. Antes disso, eu apenas dormia o dia inteiro ou jogava Assassins Odisséia.
Eu estou tentando aprender alemão por min mesmo já que não tenho dinheiro. Eu passei horas estudando, ouvindo, lendo e falando.
Minha hora de dormir está bagunçada. Eu sou brasileiro então amo café - nós plantamos muito - então eu bebo 2 ou 3 copos de café no fim da tarde, mas acho que sou imune à cafeína, pois eu bendo desde que era criança. Eu preciso consertar isso, dormir direito.
Hoje comi pão e cuzido. Eu estou comendo muito e por isso eu ganhei peso.
I'm very happy these days 'cause I'm back to study ging German and sometimes take a look in iItalian and hiragana (a jJapanese alphabet), but gGerman is my focus.
In English, languages are considered proper pronouns and need to be capitalized.
Before that, I just sleept all day or played Assassins Odyssey.
The phrase "Before that" implies that these actions took place in the past, so you need the past tense here.
I'm trying to learn gGerman on my own since I don't have money.
I have spent hours studying like listening, reading, and speaking.
Using a comma at the end of a list (it's called an Oxford comma) is debated in English, but it's useful in order to separate different ideas or items in the list. I hope that makes sense!
My sleep hours are twisted,ing schedule is messed up. I'm bBrazilian, so iI love coffee - we planthave a lot of coffee plants - so I drink 2 (two) or 3 (three) cups of coffe oe in an afternoon.
Brazilian is a nationality, so it's a proper noun that needs to be capitalized.
And just so you know, numbers under 10 in English are spelled out in formal writing. In informal writing, it doesn't really matter.
But iI think iI'm immune to "cafeína",feine 'cause iI've been drinking this since i hI was a kid.
"I" is a proper pronoun is English and needs to be capitalized regardless or where it is in the sentence.
We say "I've been drinking" or "I have been driving" because this is an action that started in the past and continues in the present.
I have to fix that, and sleep right.
Today i eI ate bread and cuzido.
Or if you meant to say this in the present tense, you can say "Today I'm eating bread and cuzido".
I'm eating a lot and because of that, I gained some weight.
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Good luck with learning German! :) The fine folks at r/german on reddit have compiled a list of a lot of free resources, so this might be helpful to you!
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I'm very happy these days 'cause I'm back to study ging German and sometimes takeing a look in iat Italian and hHiragana (a jJapanese alphabet), but gGerman is my focus.
Names of languages are considered proper nouns and should be capitalized. I'm guessing Hiragana is a proper noun, as well.
Before that, I was just sleeping all day or playing Assassins Odyssey.
I'm trying to learn gGerman on my own since I don't have any money.
"I don't have money" is ok, but adding "any" makes it more natural. Also, "I don't have money" can mean "I'm not wealthy".
I have spent hours studying like- listening, reading and speaking, for instance.
Or you could say, "I have spent hours studying doing things like listening, reading, and speaking."
My sleep hours are twisted,: I'm bBrazilian, so iI love coffee - we plant a lot- soand I drink 2 (two) or 3 (three) cups of coffe oe in an afternoon.
If you want to make this into a single sentence, you need either a colon or semi-colon connecting the two thoughts. Otherwise, just use a period to make two sentences. I used a colon because I think you're saying your sleep hours are twisted as a consequence of your afternoon coffee consumption. I personally would say "turned around" rather than "twisted" in this instance.
But iI think iI'm immune to "cafeína", 'because iI've been drinking this ever since i hI was a kid.
The abbreviations "I'm" and "I've" can be used at virtually any level of formality, but abbreviating "because" to "'cause" makes the writing very informal - which actually may be what you want here :-).
Today iI eat bread and cuzido.
I don't know what "cuzido" is, but I assume it's a Portuguese food?
I'm eating a lot and because of that I've gained some weight.
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Kudos on doing your language learning on your own!
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I'm very happy these days 'cause I back to study german and sometimes take a look in italian and hiragana (a japanese alphabet), but german is my focus. I'm very happy these days 'cause I'm back to study Names of languages are considered proper nouns and should be capitalized. I'm guessing Hiragana is a proper noun, as well. I'm very happy these days 'cause I'm back to study In English, languages are considered proper pronouns and need to be capitalized. |
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Before that, I just sleep all day or play Assassins Odyssey. Before that, I was just sleeping all day or playing Assassins Odyssey. Before that, I just sle The phrase "Before that" implies that these actions took place in the past, so you need the past tense here. |
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I trying to learn german on my own since I don't have money. I'm trying to learn "I don't have money" is ok, but adding "any" makes it more natural. Also, "I don't have money" can mean "I'm not wealthy". I'm trying to learn |
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I have spent hours studying like listening, reading and speaking. I have spent hours studying Or you could say, "I have spent hours studying doing things like listening, reading, and speaking." I have spent hours studying like listening, reading, and speaking. Using a comma at the end of a list (it's called an Oxford comma) is debated in English, but it's useful in order to separate different ideas or items in the list. I hope that makes sense! |
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My sleep hours are twisted, I'm brazilian so i love coffe - we plant a lot- so I drink 2 (two) or 3 (three) cup of coffe on afternoon. My sleep hours are twisted If you want to make this into a single sentence, you need either a colon or semi-colon connecting the two thoughts. Otherwise, just use a period to make two sentences. I used a colon because I think you're saying your sleep hours are twisted as a consequence of your afternoon coffee consumption. I personally would say "turned around" rather than "twisted" in this instance. My sleep Brazilian is a nationality, so it's a proper noun that needs to be capitalized. And just so you know, numbers under 10 in English are spelled out in formal writing. In informal writing, it doesn't really matter. |
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But i think i'm immune to "cafeína", 'cause i drink this since i has a kid. But The abbreviations "I'm" and "I've" can be used at virtually any level of formality, but abbreviating "because" to "'cause" makes the writing very informal - which actually may be what you want here :-). But "I" is a proper pronoun is English and needs to be capitalized regardless or where it is in the sentence. We say "I've been drinking" or "I have been driving" because this is an action that started in the past and continues in the present. |
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I have to fix that, sleep right. I have to fix that |
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Today i eat bread and cuzido. Today I don't know what "cuzido" is, but I assume it's a Portuguese food? Today Or if you meant to say this in the present tense, you can say "Today I'm eating bread and cuzido". |
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I'm eating a lot and because that I gained some weight. I'm eating a lot and because of that I've gained some weight. I'm eating a lot and because of that, I gained some weight. |
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