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Describe something delicious that you ate or drunk recently.
My first experience

Since november, I live in Canada. Here it is very cold then I discover a hot chocolate. Hot chocolate is a veritable delicous hot drink, it is a best way to reduce the cold. I very like that I buy a botle of chocolate to do in my self at home.
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My fFirst eExperience

Since nNovember, I livehave been living in Canada.

HereAs it is very cold then Ire, I've discover aed hot chocolate.

Hot chocolate is a veritable delicious hot drink,; it is athe best way to reduce the cold here.

I verywould very much like that Io buy a bottle of chocolate to, so that I can do int by my self at home.

Thanks you.

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umm good vocab, but sentence framing needs work.

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My fFirst eExperience

Since nNovember, I've lived in Canada.

Here iIt is very cold then Ire, but I've discover aed hot chocolate.!

Hot chocolate is a veritabley delicious hot drink, and it is athe best way to reduce the cold.

I very likeliked it so much, that I buyought a botlex of hot chocolate to domix to make int my self at home.

I change it to "box" from "bottle", because most hot chocolate is made from a powdered mix or just cocoa. Neither come in a bottle.

Thanks you.

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Good job! I love hot chocolate too. It's especially good with a splash of Baileys this time of year. Welcome to Canada :)

My first experience

My fFirst eExperience

My fFirst eExperience

Since november, I live in Canada.

Since nNovember, I've lived in Canada.

Since nNovember, I livehave been living in Canada.

Here it is very cold then I discover a hot chocolate.

Here iIt is very cold then Ire, but I've discover aed hot chocolate.!

HereAs it is very cold then Ire, I've discover aed hot chocolate.

Hot chocolate is a veritable delicous hot drink, it is a best way to reduce the cold.

Hot chocolate is a veritabley delicious hot drink, and it is athe best way to reduce the cold.

Hot chocolate is a veritable delicious hot drink,; it is athe best way to reduce the cold here.

I very like that I buy a botle of chocolate to do in my self at home.

I very likeliked it so much, that I buyought a botlex of hot chocolate to domix to make int my self at home.

I change it to "box" from "bottle", because most hot chocolate is made from a powdered mix or just cocoa. Neither come in a bottle.

I verywould very much like that Io buy a bottle of chocolate to, so that I can do int by my self at home.

Thanks you.

Thanks you.

Thanks you.

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