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abrosymov

Jan. 5, 2023

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My first driving lesson

I think that ability to drive a car is a must-have in the modern world. When you have a car you're more flexible and do not depend on the schedule and route of public transport.

I applied for the driving school in December. The education here consists of the theoretical part and driving lessons. I had the theory lessons online. That's cool when you can listen to lectures remotely, without the need to visit the school office.

Before I get started my driving lessons, the school offered me to choose the car I gonna drive. I chose Hyundai Accent with the manual transmission. I believe my own first car will have an automatic transmission because almost all modern vehicles have one. Despite this, I think it's better to learn how to drive the manual transmission to better understand how it works without the magic of the automated transmission.

The first lesson took place in the territory of the parking. The instructor showed me the things under the hood and described how to check the amount of motor oil, washer, and antifreeze. Then we got inside the car and then he guided me through the car dashboard and showed me different indicators there. Also, I found out how to enable the turn signals and adjust the wipers in case of rainy/snowy weather.

After he had shown me everything there, I sat in the driver's seat, and with the instructor's assistance, I started off and drove around the parking. Honestly, I was excited to drive the car and I hope that all the next 14 lessons will go smoothly.

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My fFirst dDriving lLesson

We capitalize the first letter of important words in titles.

I think that the ability to drive a car is a must-have in the modern world.

When you have a car you're more flexible and do not need to depend on the schedules and routes of public transportation.

I applied forto the driving school in December.

The education here consists of thea theoretical part and driving lessons.

I had the theory lessons online.

That's coolvery convenient when you can listen to lectures remotely, without the need to visit the school office.

"Cool" is slang and not used in written English.

Before I get started mythe driving lessons started, the school offered me to choosea choice for the car I'm gonnaing drive.

I chose a Hyundai Accent with thea manual transmission.

I believe my own first car will have an automatic transmission because almost all modern vehicles have one.

Despite this, I think it's better to learn how to drive thea manual transmission to better understand how it works without the magic of the automated transmission.

The first lesson took place in the territory of the parking lot.

The instructor showed me the things under the hood and described how to check the amount oflevels for motor oil, washerindshield wiper fluid, and antifreeze.

Then we got inside the car and then he guided me through the car dashboard and showed me different indicators there.

Also, I found out how to enabluse the turn signals and adjust the wipers in case of rainy/snowy weather or snow.

After he had shown me everything there, I sat in the driver's seat, and with the instructor's assistance, I started offthe car and drove around the parking lot.

Honestly, I was excited to drive the car and I hope that all the next 14 lessons will go as smoothly.

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Good work!

My fFirst dDriving lLesson

I think that the ability to drive a car is a must-have in the modern world.

When you hacan drive a car, you're more flexible and do not depend onneed to be limited by the schedules and routes of public transport.

I applied for thea driving school in December.

The education /instruction there consists of the theoretical part and theory behind driving and actual driving lessons.

I had the theory lessons online.

ThaIt's cool whenthat you can listen to/watch lectures remotely, without the need to visit the school office.

Before I geot started with my driving lessons, the school offered me to choose the car I gonnawill drive.

I chose a Hyundai Accent with the manual transmission.

I believe my own first car will also have an automatic transmission because almost all modern vehicles have one.

You don't need 'own' since it is implied with 'my.'

Despite this, I think it's better to learn how to drive the manual transmission to better understand how itdriving a car works without the magic of the automated transmission.

The first lesson took place in the territory of the/a parking lot.

The instructor showed me the things under the hood and described how to check the amount of motor oil, washer, and antifreeze.

Then we got inside the car, and then he guided me through the car dashboard and, showeding me different indicators there.

Also, I found out how to enable the turn signals and adjust the wipers in case of rainy/snowy weather.

After he had showned me everything there, I sat in the driver's seat, and with the instructor's assistance, I started off and drove around the parking lot.

Honestly, I was excited to drive the car and I hope that all the next 14 lessons will go smoothly.

I think that the ability to drive a car is a must-have in the modern world.

When you have a car you're more flexible and do non't depend on the schedules and routes of public transport.

I applied for the driving school in December.

The ed[teaching/ instrucation s] there consists of [the theoretical part of driving / theory] and driving lessons.

I had the theory lessons online.

ThaIt's cool when you can listen to lectures remotely, without the need to visit the school office.

Before I get started my driving lessons, the school [offered for me to/ let me] choose the car I was gonna drive.

"I was gonna drive" because you are talking about the future ("gonna") from the past ("was")

I chose a Hyundai Accent with the manual transmission.

I believe my own first car will have an automatic transmission because almost all modern vehicles have one.

Don't need to use 'own' and 'my' in the same sentence

Despite this, I think it's better to learn how to drive withe manual transmission to better understand how it[driving] works without the magic of the automated transmission.

You are not driving the manual transmission, you are using the manual transmission, hence 'with' instead of 'the'

not sure if the "it" refers to manual transmission or driving itself, so clarify

The first lesson took place in the [territory of the parking lot/ parking space].

The instructor showed me the things under the hood and described how to check the amount of motor oil, washer, and antifreeze.

Also, II also found out how to enable the turn signals and adjust the wipers in case of rainy/snowy weather.

After he had shown me everything there, I sat in the driver's seat, and with the instructor's assistance, I started off and drove around the [parking. lot / parking space]

Honestly, I was excited to drive the car and I hope that all the next 14 lessons will go smoothly.

Feedback

good luck!

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abrosymov

Jan. 5, 2023

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Thank you!

My first driving lesson


My fFirst dDriving lLesson

My fFirst dDriving lLesson

We capitalize the first letter of important words in titles.

I think that ability to drive a car is a must-have in the modern world.


I think that the ability to drive a car is a must-have in the modern world.

I think that the ability to drive a car is a must-have in the modern world.

I think that the ability to drive a car is a must-have in the modern world.

When you have a car you're more flexible and do not depend on the schedule and route of public transport.


When you have a car you're more flexible and do non't depend on the schedules and routes of public transport.

When you hacan drive a car, you're more flexible and do not depend onneed to be limited by the schedules and routes of public transport.

When you have a car you're more flexible and do not need to depend on the schedules and routes of public transportation.

I applied for the driving school in December.


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I applied for thea driving school in December.

I applied forto the driving school in December.

The education here consists of the theoretical part and driving lessons.


The ed[teaching/ instrucation s] there consists of [the theoretical part of driving / theory] and driving lessons.

The education /instruction there consists of the theoretical part and theory behind driving and actual driving lessons.

The education here consists of thea theoretical part and driving lessons.

I had the theory lessons online.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

That's cool when you can listen to lectures remotely, without the need to visit the school office.


ThaIt's cool when you can listen to lectures remotely, without the need to visit the school office.

ThaIt's cool whenthat you can listen to/watch lectures remotely, without the need to visit the school office.

That's coolvery convenient when you can listen to lectures remotely, without the need to visit the school office.

"Cool" is slang and not used in written English.

Before I get started my driving lessons, the school offered me to choose the car I gonna drive.


Before I get started my driving lessons, the school [offered for me to/ let me] choose the car I was gonna drive.

"I was gonna drive" because you are talking about the future ("gonna") from the past ("was")

Before I geot started with my driving lessons, the school offered me to choose the car I gonnawill drive.

Before I get started mythe driving lessons started, the school offered me to choosea choice for the car I'm gonnaing drive.

I chose Hyundai Accent with the manual transmission.


I chose a Hyundai Accent with the manual transmission.

I chose a Hyundai Accent with the manual transmission.

I chose a Hyundai Accent with thea manual transmission.

I believe my own first car will have an automatic transmission because almost all modern vehicles have one.


I believe my own first car will have an automatic transmission because almost all modern vehicles have one.

Don't need to use 'own' and 'my' in the same sentence

I believe my own first car will also have an automatic transmission because almost all modern vehicles have one.

You don't need 'own' since it is implied with 'my.'

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Despite this, I think it's better to learn how to drive the manual transmission to better understand how it works without the magic of the automated transmission.


Despite this, I think it's better to learn how to drive withe manual transmission to better understand how it[driving] works without the magic of the automated transmission.

You are not driving the manual transmission, you are using the manual transmission, hence 'with' instead of 'the' not sure if the "it" refers to manual transmission or driving itself, so clarify

Despite this, I think it's better to learn how to drive the manual transmission to better understand how itdriving a car works without the magic of the automated transmission.

Despite this, I think it's better to learn how to drive thea manual transmission to better understand how it works without the magic of the automated transmission.

The first lesson took place in the territory of the parking.


The first lesson took place in the [territory of the parking lot/ parking space].

The first lesson took place in the territory of the/a parking lot.

The first lesson took place in the territory of the parking lot.

The instructor showed me the things under the hood and described how to check the amount of motor oil, washer, and antifreeze.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The instructor showed me the things under the hood and described how to check the amount oflevels for motor oil, washerindshield wiper fluid, and antifreeze.

Then we got inside the car and he guide me through the car dashboard and showed me different indicators there.


Also, I found out how to enable the turn signals and adjust the wipers in case of rainy/snowy weather.


Also, II also found out how to enable the turn signals and adjust the wipers in case of rainy/snowy weather.

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Also, I found out how to enabluse the turn signals and adjust the wipers in case of rainy/snowy weather or snow.

After he had shown me everything there, I sat in the driver's seat, and with the instructor's assistance, I started off and drove around the parking.


After he had shown me everything there, I sat in the driver's seat, and with the instructor's assistance, I started off and drove around the [parking. lot / parking space]

After he had showned me everything there, I sat in the driver's seat, and with the instructor's assistance, I started off and drove around the parking lot.

After he had shown me everything there, I sat in the driver's seat, and with the instructor's assistance, I started offthe car and drove around the parking lot.

Honestly, I was excited to drive the car and I hope that all the next 14 lessons will go smoothly.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Honestly, I was excited to drive the car and I hope that all the next 14 lessons will go as smoothly.

Then we got inside the car and then he guided me through the car dashboard and showed me different indicators there.


Then we got inside the car, and then he guided me through the car dashboard and, showeding me different indicators there.

Then we got inside the car and then he guided me through the car dashboard and showed me different indicators there.

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