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My first diary

Hello.
I'm junior high school student in Japan.
I want to be English master because I want to watch "Pirates of carribean" without subtitle.
So, I write English text on internet.
I know it's hard way, but I will do it.
I wish i watch any movie in English.
Thanks to help

Bye

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I'm a junior high school student in Japan.

I want to bemaster English master because I want to watch "Pirates of carrithe Caribbean" without subtitles.

So, I writepractice writing in English text onon the internet.

I know it's hard way, but I will do it.

I wish iI could watch any movie in English.

I kept it as a wish since that's how you wrote your sentence. However, a more direct option would be, "I want to watch any movie in English."

Thanks to help

Thanks for your help.

Bye.

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Good writing, especially for an A1 learner! Watching movies in English without subtitles is a fantastic goal. I initially started learning Spanish because I watched & listened to a bunch of shows & music from Spain and wanted to understand them. Best of luck!

I'm a junior high school student in Japan.

It needs an article.

I want to bemaster English master because I want to watch "Pirates of cthe Carribean" without subtitles.

Use phrases "I want to [verb] + [object]" to sound more natural. Requires an article after "of" in the name of movie, and also subtitles needs to be pluralized.

I wish iant to be able to watch any movie in English.

Similar format above: Use phrases "I want to [verb] + [object]" to sound more natural. Could alternately say "I want to watch any movie in English" however this sentence is less natural.

Thanks tofor the help.

'Thanks for' is another standard framing.

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Pirates of the Carribean is an excellent movie with a great soundtrack!

I'm a junior high school student in Japan.

I want to be an English master because I want to watch "Pirates of cthe Carribean" without subtitles.

So, I write English texts on internet.

I know it's hard way, but I will do it.

I wish iI could watch any movie in English.

"I" must always be capitalized.

Thanks tofor your help

Feedback

Great Job

My first diary

I'm a junior high school student in Japan.

we use 'a/an' before objects :)

I want to be an English master because I want to watch "Pirates of the carribean" without subtitles.

So, I'm writeing in English text onon the internet.

I know it's hard way, but I will do it.

I wish ito watch any movie in English.

Thanks tofor helping

Feedback

well done!
in general, we put 'a/an' before a noun (a junior high school student, an English master)
keep practicing! good luck!

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kan22411

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Thank you!
Thanks for the your help!!!

I want to bemaster English master because I want to watch "Pirates of carrithe Caribbean" without subtitles.

It is more natural to use "master" as a verb in this sentence.

So, I will write English texts on the internet.

Using "will" shows that this is your plan, and you will do it for a long time.
Each piece of writing is a text, so making "texts" plural shows you will write many.
There is only one internet.

I know it's a hard way, but I will do it.

I think you mean that writing texts is a hard way to master English?

I wish i watchant to watch any movie in English without subtitles.¶
I want to watch and understand
any movie in English.

A native speaker would say "want" instead of "wish."
"Want" is a much more general word.
"Wish" is usually used in specific expressions, like:
We wish you a Merry Christmas. We wish you a Happy Birthday. Close your eyes, and make a wish. I wish I could come.

Thanks tofor the/your help

We thank someone one for something.

Feedback

Welcome! This is a good place for you to write and receive friendly encouragement.
You could use the movie scripts to memorize your favorite scenes. https://nofilmschool.com/pirates-of-the-caribbean-script

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kan22411

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Thank you!
You gave me the most specific advice.
I'm happy to meet you.

I'm a junior high school student in Japan.

Usually add “a” before singular countable nouns like student.

I want to be an English master because I want to watch "Pirates of the carribean" without subtitle.

Correct spelling and capitalization of the movie title.

So, I write English text on the internet.

Add “the” before internet.

I wish iI watch any movie in English.

Capitalize I

Thanks to you for your help.

This is the standard polite phrase in English.

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Writing something in English every day is one of the best ways to improve. Good job!

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kan22411

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Thank you!
I'm happy to meet you

So, I write English text on internet.


So, I write English text on the internet.

Add “the” before internet.

So, I'm writeing in English text onon the internet.

So, I write English texts on internet.

So, I will write English texts on the internet.

Using "will" shows that this is your plan, and you will do it for a long time. Each piece of writing is a text, so making "texts" plural shows you will write many. There is only one internet.

So, I writepractice writing in English text onon the internet.

I know it's hard way, but I will do it.


I know it's hard way, but I will do it.

I know it's hard way, but I will do it.

I know it's a hard way, but I will do it.

I think you mean that writing texts is a hard way to master English?

I know it's hard way, but I will do it.

I wish i watch any movie in English.


I wish iI watch any movie in English.

Capitalize I

I wish ito watch any movie in English.

I wish iI could watch any movie in English.

"I" must always be capitalized.

I wish i watchant to watch any movie in English without subtitles.¶
I want to watch and understand
any movie in English.

A native speaker would say "want" instead of "wish." "Want" is a much more general word. "Wish" is usually used in specific expressions, like: We wish you a Merry Christmas. We wish you a Happy Birthday. Close your eyes, and make a wish. I wish I could come.

I wish iant to be able to watch any movie in English.

Similar format above: Use phrases "I want to [verb] + [object]" to sound more natural. Could alternately say "I want to watch any movie in English" however this sentence is less natural.

I wish iI could watch any movie in English.

I kept it as a wish since that's how you wrote your sentence. However, a more direct option would be, "I want to watch any movie in English."

Thanks to help


Thanks to you for your help.

This is the standard polite phrase in English.

Thanks tofor helping

Thanks tofor your help

Thanks tofor the/your help

We thank someone one for something.

Thanks tofor the help.

'Thanks for' is another standard framing.

Thanks to help

Thanks for your help.

Bye


Bye.

My first diary


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Hello.


I'm junior high school student in Japan.


I'm a junior high school student in Japan.

Usually add “a” before singular countable nouns like student.

I'm a junior high school student in Japan.

we use 'a/an' before objects :)

I'm a junior high school student in Japan.

I'm a junior high school student in Japan.

It needs an article.

I'm a junior high school student in Japan.

I want to be English master because I want to watch "Pirates of carribean" without subtitle.


I want to be an English master because I want to watch "Pirates of the carribean" without subtitle.

Correct spelling and capitalization of the movie title.

I want to be an English master because I want to watch "Pirates of the carribean" without subtitles.

I want to be an English master because I want to watch "Pirates of cthe Carribean" without subtitles.

I want to bemaster English master because I want to watch "Pirates of carrithe Caribbean" without subtitles.

It is more natural to use "master" as a verb in this sentence.

I want to bemaster English master because I want to watch "Pirates of cthe Carribean" without subtitles.

Use phrases "I want to [verb] + [object]" to sound more natural. Requires an article after "of" in the name of movie, and also subtitles needs to be pluralized.

I want to bemaster English master because I want to watch "Pirates of carrithe Caribbean" without subtitles.

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