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Hello.
I'm junior high school student in Japan.
I want to be English master because I want to watch "Pirates of carribean" without subtitle.
So, I write English text on internet.
I know it's hard way, but I will do it.
I wish i watch any movie in English.
Thanks to help
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I'm a junior high school student in Japan.
I want to bemaster English master because I want to watch "Pirates of carrithe Caribbean" without subtitles.
So, I writepractice writing in English text onon the internet.
I know it's hard way, but I will do it.
I wish iI could watch any movie in English.
I kept it as a wish since that's how you wrote your sentence. However, a more direct option would be, "I want to watch any movie in English."
Thanks to help
Thanks for your help.
Bye.
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Good writing, especially for an A1 learner! Watching movies in English without subtitles is a fantastic goal. I initially started learning Spanish because I watched & listened to a bunch of shows & music from Spain and wanted to understand them. Best of luck!
I'm a junior high school student in Japan.
It needs an article.
I want to bemaster English master because I want to watch "Pirates of cthe Carribean" without subtitles.
Use phrases "I want to [verb] + [object]" to sound more natural. Requires an article after "of" in the name of movie, and also subtitles needs to be pluralized.
I wish iant to be able to watch any movie in English.
Similar format above: Use phrases "I want to [verb] + [object]" to sound more natural. Could alternately say "I want to watch any movie in English" however this sentence is less natural.
Thanks tofor the help.
'Thanks for' is another standard framing.
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Pirates of the Carribean is an excellent movie with a great soundtrack!
I'm a junior high school student in Japan.
I want to be an English master because I want to watch "Pirates of cthe Carribean" without subtitles.
So, I write English texts on internet.
I know it's hard way, but I will do it.
I wish iI could watch any movie in English.
"I" must always be capitalized.
Thanks tofor your help
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Great Job
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I'm a junior high school student in Japan.
we use 'a/an' before objects :)
I want to be an English master because I want to watch "Pirates of the carribean" without subtitles.
So, I'm writeing in English text onon the internet.
I know it's hard way, but I will do it.
I wish ito watch any movie in English.
Thanks tofor helping
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well done!
in general, we put 'a/an' before a noun (a junior high school student, an English master)
keep practicing! good luck!
I want to bemaster English master because I want to watch "Pirates of carrithe Caribbean" without subtitles.
It is more natural to use "master" as a verb in this sentence.
So, I will write English texts on the internet.
Using "will" shows that this is your plan, and you will do it for a long time.
Each piece of writing is a text, so making "texts" plural shows you will write many.
There is only one internet.
I know it's a hard way, but I will do it.
I think you mean that writing texts is a hard way to master English?
I wish i watchant to watch any movie in English without subtitles.¶
I want to watch and understand any movie in English.
A native speaker would say "want" instead of "wish."
"Want" is a much more general word.
"Wish" is usually used in specific expressions, like:
We wish you a Merry Christmas. We wish you a Happy Birthday. Close your eyes, and make a wish. I wish I could come.
Thanks tofor the/your help
We thank someone one for something.
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Welcome! This is a good place for you to write and receive friendly encouragement.
You could use the movie scripts to memorize your favorite scenes. https://nofilmschool.com/pirates-of-the-caribbean-script
I'm a junior high school student in Japan.
Usually add “a” before singular countable nouns like student.
I want to be an English master because I want to watch "Pirates of the carribean" without subtitle.
Correct spelling and capitalization of the movie title.
So, I write English text on the internet.
Add “the” before internet.
I wish iI watch any movie in English.
Capitalize I
Thanks to you for your help.
This is the standard polite phrase in English.
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Writing something in English every day is one of the best ways to improve. Good job!
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I wish i watch any movie in English. I wish Capitalize I I wish I wish "I" must always be capitalized. I w A native speaker would say "want" instead of "wish." "Want" is a much more general word. "Wish" is usually used in specific expressions, like: We wish you a Merry Christmas. We wish you a Happy Birthday. Close your eyes, and make a wish. I wish I could come. I w Similar format above: Use phrases "I want to [verb] + [object]" to sound more natural. Could alternately say "I want to watch any movie in English" however this sentence is less natural. I wish I kept it as a wish since that's how you wrote your sentence. However, a more direct option would be, "I want to watch any movie in English." |
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Thanks to help Thank This is the standard polite phrase in English. Thanks Thanks Thanks We thank someone one for something. Thanks 'Thanks for' is another standard framing. Thanks to help Thanks for your help. |
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